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wait, whats wrong with that? I am just asking about your opinion not starting a fight.

Most of the complains about the recent chapter was that he is back to 1 step forward 2 step backward kinda writing. However, with how he modified the chapter he seemed to have corrected that. My main issue with the alpha is how Lester was there for Sarah when she was vulnerable and how their pillow talk seemed genuine, only for her to simply let Dan kick him out just like that the next day. Now it makes more sense for her to escort him out. Also, in the alpha we never got to see her considering Lester's offer. He offered, they fucked then Dan came and she spilled everything for him.

One thing I feel important in this chapter is the shift in Sarah's thinking. Initially, she was that strong corporate woman who wasnt above some teasing but knew who she was and took bullshit from no one. Now, shes not only considering prostituting herself to Richard for her job but actually planning it. She's not above using her body to achieve her goals anymore, or at least she has accepted that idea. We still need to see if Lester's new deal will change her thought process.
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I agree on the idea of Dan not kicking Lester out, like I had said in a post for Alpha chapter. I was very happy to see that, including the part where he told her that he was forever going to be on the outside and that was why he wanted something for helping them. Honestly, since I believe Don has been headed this way for months, I will say it, I hope Lester's want is the full blown affair between her and him, leaving Dan out as she betrays her husband and their marriage. She finally agrees this time and then tells Lester that she wants to help him "fuck with Dan". It has always been listed as a dark story anyway, finally let the lights go out.
 
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First, thanks nonametba it's rough times out there for all of us.

I don't think it added or took away too much from the alpha concept with the exception of one major plot point*. At this stage I'm so fed up with Dan the character (mind you not the husband role, just the character) that I'm starting to pinch the bridge of my nose. So the less POV we have of him the better. Psiber@mauvais you called it. The ending changed so that Sarah walked Lester out.

*Now let's discuss the turd in the room. I’ll leave space in my comments for the ending to be a red herring, but if this is truly where the story is headed, then I can no longer defend DS. I would have to agree with those who argue this isn’t DS’s work anymore--it’s Patreon fanfiction typed up by DS.

To reduce Sarah--once a proud, intelligent, and resourceful character on a journey of sexual self-discovery--into a cardboard-cutout bimbo prostitute would be a travesty. The ending contradicts everything established up to that point in both the series and this particular chapter. We’ve seen a woman under stress grappling with complex emotions, weighing impossible choices that would impact her children, marriage, and future. Then, in a single paragraph, all that growth is discarded as she suddenly decides prostitution is the way to save her job.

To dangle this idea as a foil or obstacle for Lester, sure--it has narrative value. But the Sarah who evolved over this series would never condone such a choice. She’s too shrewd to ignore the ramifications; she’s already lived through similar mistakes, which is why she and Dan are in this situation to begin with. She’s willing to come clean with Dan and refuse Lester’s secret money (a known bad choice), and instead she’ll jeopardize all those things she's trying to protect by prostituting herself to Richard (an unknown bad choice)? No. It’s neither logical nor consistent with her character’s established maturity and motivations. And I just don't buy it.

I've always tried to be objective, because I don't know the full scope of the story or what the ending is. But it's becoming increasingly more difficult to deny those who are crying foul.
 
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Verisimilinude said:
First, thanks nonametba it's rough times out there for all of us.

I don't think it added or took away too much from the alpha concept with the exception of one major plot point*. At this stage I'm so fed up with Dan the character (mind you not the husband role, just the character) that I'm starting to pinch the bridge of my nose. So the less POV we have of him the better. Psiber@mauvais you called it. The ending changed so that Sarah walked Lester out.

*Now let's discuss the turd in the room. I’ll leave space in my comments for the ending to be a red herring, but if this is truly where the story is headed, then I can no longer defend DS. I would have to agree with those who argue this isn’t DS’s work anymore--it’s Patreon fanfiction typed up by DS.

To reduce Sarah--once a proud, intelligent, and resourceful character on a journey of sexual self-discovery--into a cardboard-cutout bimbo prostitute would be a travesty. The ending contradicts everything established up to that point in both the series and this particular chapter. We’ve seen a woman under stress grappling with complex emotions, weighing impossible choices that would impact her children, marriage, and future. Then, in a single paragraph, all that growth is discarded as she suddenly decides prostitution is the way to save her job.

To dangle this idea as a foil or obstacle for Lester, sure--it has narrative value. But the Sarah who evolved over this series would never condone such a choice. She’s too shrewd to ignore the ramifications; she’s already lived through similar mistakes, which is why she and Dan are in this situation to begin with. She’s willing to come clean with Dan and refuse Lester’s secret money (a known bad choice), and instead she’ll jeopardize all those things she's trying to protect by prostituting herself to Richard (an unknown bad choice)? No. It’s neither logical nor consistent with her character’s established maturity and motivations. And I just don't buy it.

I've always tried to be objective, because I don't know the full scope of the story or what the ending is. But it's becoming increasingly more difficult to deny those who are crying foul.
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..but Sarah knew she had to fix her mistake...her trying to fix a big mistake with an even bigger one is just...she's probably thinking desperate times calls for..
 
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..but Sarah knew she had to fix her mistake...her trying to fix a big mistake with an even bigger one is just...she's probably thinking desperate times calls for..
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Okay, hypothetical scenario: You haven’t eaten in two weeks. Money’s tight—what little you had, you gambled away, chasing a big win that never came. Now you’re starving, and your only two options are:

A questionable coworker—not quite a friend, sometimes a jerk, sometimes decent. He’s bought you a meal before. Now he’s offering a home-cooked dinner.

A sketchy food truck where the owner might give you leftovers at closing. Problem is, you’ve seen his ‘pigsty kitchen.’ Who knows what’s in that mystery meat he calls a sloppy joe.

Which option would you choose to fix your hunger problem?
 
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Verisimilinude said:
Okay, hypothetical scenario: You haven’t eaten in two weeks. Money’s tight—what little you had, you gambled away, chasing a big win that never came. Now you’re starving, and your only two options are:

A questionable coworker—not quite a friend, sometimes a jerk, sometimes decent. He’s bought you a meal before. Now he’s offering a home-cooked dinner.

A sketchy food truck where the owner might give you leftovers at closing. Problem is, you’ve seen his ‘pigsty kitchen.’ Who knows what’s in that mystery meat he calls a sloppy joe.

Which option would you choose to fix your hunger problem?
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LMAO...a sketchy food truck lol...my opinion option 1 BUT there are ppl that would take option 2...I do understand your point though...hence I said she's going to make an already bad situation worse..
 
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For ALL the chapter:
*I must be clean with Dan and tell him everything
*I can't be a prostitute for Lester to get money
*I'm messed up, so I can't make any big decisions right now
*We can always get other jobs

Then the story ends with "I'm going to fuck the bastard boss to take my job back, and won't tell Dan".

Seriously, this crap is getting worse and dumber each chapter. Looks like it's made only to please stupid clients with a cock in hand and nothing in their head.
 
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Verisimilinude said:
First, thanks nonametba it's rough times out there for all of us.

I don't think it added or took away too much from the alpha concept with the exception of one major plot point*. At this stage I'm so fed up with Dan the character (mind you not the husband role, just the character) that I'm starting to pinch the bridge of my nose. So the less POV we have of him the better. Psiber@mauvais you called it. The ending changed so that Sarah walked Lester out.

*Now let's discuss the turd in the room. I’ll leave space in my comments for the ending to be a red herring, but if this is truly where the story is headed, then I can no longer defend DS. I would have to agree with those who argue this isn’t DS’s work anymore--it’s Patreon fanfiction typed up by DS.

To reduce Sarah--once a proud, intelligent, and resourceful character on a journey of sexual self-discovery--into a cardboard-cutout bimbo prostitute would be a travesty. The ending contradicts everything established up to that point in both the series and this particular chapter. We’ve seen a woman under stress grappling with complex emotions, weighing impossible choices that would impact her children, marriage, and future. Then, in a single paragraph, all that growth is discarded as she suddenly decides prostitution is the way to save her job.

To dangle this idea as a foil or obstacle for Lester, sure--it has narrative value. But the Sarah who evolved over this series would never condone such a choice. She’s too shrewd to ignore the ramifications; she’s already lived through similar mistakes, which is why she and Dan are in this situation to begin with. She’s willing to come clean with Dan and refuse Lester’s secret money (a known bad choice), and instead she’ll jeopardize all those things she's trying to protect by prostituting herself to Richard (an unknown bad choice)? No. It’s neither logical nor consistent with her character’s established maturity and motivations. And I just don't buy it.

I've always tried to be objective, because I don't know the full scope of the story or what the ending is. But it's becoming increasingly more difficult to deny those who are crying foul.
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I agree with you on the way she decides to save her job, just keep in mind until next chapter or until she actually tries to fuck Richard this is all speculation. Remember that same proud, intelligent and resourceful character has just begged the HR head for her job a day earlier. I think she's still that person, but she feels like she's drowning and she's just trying to find a life line.

Also, the dream she had about 2 different roads one leading to lester and one to her family, which was also mentioned in this chapter makes me think that Sarah thinking/considering prostituting herself to get her job back is the first step down the road leading to Lester. Until now, we only got some slight speculations from her side. I think Lester offered before for her to quite her job in Middleton and stay and fuck with him in Chicago, which she admitted was hot as a concept but she couldnt abandon her family. Then once again when Lester offered to pay her weekly for her to stay and fuck all day with him, only for her to snap out of it when her daughter called out to her. Sarah has always been so close to taking that step but she seems to snap out of it at the last moment, which I think whats going to happen with Richard. She's either gonna wake up next day thinking its stupid, or she's gonna be sitting in front of his office ready to go in and seduce him before something happens to pull her away from there.
 
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next months will not be able to contribute/share :( ! hope someone else can!
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Off topic but is the undercover story he's written any good? Or just another Detestable liaison story type.
 
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I agree with you on the way she decides to save her job, just keep in mind until next chapter or until she actually tries to fuck Richard this is all speculation. Remember that same proud, intelligent and resourceful character has just begged the HR head for her job a day earlier. I think she's still that person, but she feels like she's drowning and she's just trying to find a life line.
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Oh I agree with your point, that's why I stated I was leaving space in my comment for a red herring ending, a bait and switch. As for the scene in HR, I think that is a normal reaction for anyone who would be in that position with that much responsibility at stake. You'd definitely be looking at all the angles trying to come up aces. Having her begging Mary was grating, but he justified her actions through her thought process. The ending was like so out of the blue without any writing to back it up or lay a foundation for it. So to me it felt bolted on at the end to pander to someone's agenda. At least that's my opinion on the topic.
 
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I agree on the idea of Dan not kicking Lester out, like I had said in a post for Alpha chapter. I was very happy to see that, including the part where he told her that he was forever going to be on the outside and that was why he wanted something for helping them. Honestly, since I believe Don has been headed this way for months, I will say it, I hope Lester's want is the full blown affair between her and him, leaving Dan out as she betrays her husband and their marriage. She finally agrees this time and then tells Lester that she wants to help him "fuck with Dan". It has always been listed as a dark story anyway, finally let the lights go out.
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I really liked Dan taking charge..the few times he does Lexter turns tail..Why Dan gets written this way is beyond me.
Now dick picks to Mom...this is just bullshit now..Had chance to recover..blew it again..2 things noted here..One we have an all day/night fuck session on the way as mentioned during there sex scene...which maybe the impregnate scene zand maybe the anal cherry ppop which may lead to the New Mrs Marshall..With Mom as the next side piec.talk about dark..That should get Don 36 more chapters..one chapter a month at least 15 a pop..935 follwers..14,025 a month x36 is ..drum roll 504,900 dollars for 3 years work..Go Don Silver.
 
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I would like to see Lester get put in his place. Heck maybe get Dan to get a little side action too. If Sarah is getting fcked why not let Dan have his fun too. But mostly i would like for Lester to get put in a tough spot where's he's freaking out heck make him sweat a little too.
 
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Undercover Blonde Ch. 07
The Bad Tenant Ch.08
The Bad Tenant Ch. 09

Anyone has these stories, those are available in patreon
 
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