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Here is an explicit story writer at work. He has published several stories on Literotica that I think are very good and worth reading. My question is: Have any of you read his stories? If so, does anyone have the third chapter of the story
‘Flirting With The Visitor’, for example, and could share it here?
Just stand above the happening.
-- PC
‘Flirting With The Visitor’, for example, and could share it here?
Just stand above the happening.
-- PC
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Unfortunately, it has come to the point where the author ‘DS’ has simply degraded and destroyed the protagonist, but above all the INITIATOR of the plot and all events in this story, DAN.
As a result, with each chapter, the story loses its appeal, suspense, lively debates and dialogues. Everything goes round in circles, ‘how and when Lester will manipulate and fuck Sarah again’ and, as a result, Sarah, blinded by huge cocks, spreads her legs for anyone who crosses her path...
He's just playing cat and mouse with her!
I hope that DAN makes a comeback in chapter 34 and, first of all, goes upstairs, grabs that son of a bitch and motherfucker Lester by the throat and kicks him out of the house. Then he lays down the law to Sarah: when Lester visits again, she'll be kicked out with him!
That's what I think!
We'll just have to wait and see which path DS will take in the coming chapters...
Just stay above the happenings.
-- PC
As a result, with each chapter, the story loses its appeal, suspense, lively debates and dialogues. Everything goes round in circles, ‘how and when Lester will manipulate and fuck Sarah again’ and, as a result, Sarah, blinded by huge cocks, spreads her legs for anyone who crosses her path...
He's just playing cat and mouse with her!
I hope that DAN makes a comeback in chapter 34 and, first of all, goes upstairs, grabs that son of a bitch and motherfucker Lester by the throat and kicks him out of the house. Then he lays down the law to Sarah: when Lester visits again, she'll be kicked out with him!
That's what I think!
We'll just have to wait and see which path DS will take in the coming chapters...
Just stay above the happenings.
-- PC
DarkStutzel
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I don't understand how Dan puts up with all this, from psychological trauma to Sarah losing respect even for her daughters (using the children's room) and Dan also becoming passive. The marriage is over, the love is gone, the respect is gone. (I didn't understand Lester using the pineapple) can someone in the group explain? I hope the woman from the agency helps Dan recover from this illness and leave home. It would be nice to see Sarah's face when Dan asks for a divorce. I would also like Dan to start not wanting to participate, to start going out. (It would be nice if Shild's wife asked if Dan had been with other women before). What doesn't satisfy Sarah may be perfect for other women.
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(free version)That was, "ahem," dark.
Pineapple was the safe word for either Dan or Sarah to stop the activities going on with Lester. Dan was able to use it once, when he came home and found them fucking in Dan and Sarah's bed. He just about beat the shit out of Lester, but instead he threw him out of the house.
Minscnboo
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I do not recall anyone telling Lester the "pineapple" password. Dan used it once in the vehicle around the 1st or 2nd date that I believe involved Cash the bum? Lester and Sarah were outside the vehicle.
I realize its an Alpha, but the involvement of the parents and kids is awkward as hell. Don does say he plans to change that.
I realize its an Alpha, but the involvement of the parents and kids is awkward as hell. Don does say he plans to change that.
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Shoutout to Verisimilinude for (albeit jokingly) predicting the sex in daughter's bedroom scene 
. Never in a million years I thought THAT scenario would happen!
. Never in a million years I thought THAT scenario would happen!
polpolp
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that was the worst chapter ever, so ridiculous, no real human can endure that and not gonna kill Lester, there is no love an respect anymore, i really want Lester to die a painfull death
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So the couple had a safe word when they had sex at Dan's house, things went wrong, and Sarah and Dan decided to use a new word (Pineapple) as their safe word. However, they never used the safe word again, and now in 34 Lester is using the new word Pineapple. How did he find out that this was Sarah and Dan's new safe word? Did Sarah cheat on Dan and reveal the word? Using the children's room proves the end of respect for their life together and their daughters. I hope Dan stays with the sentry's wife and that she doesn't have a fetish for big dicks (not all women like them, they hurt the cervix). I hope that in the end Dan learns his lesson for the future and the separation happens and he goes to a psychologist to solve his problem, just like Sarah. And that Lester is unmasked in the end, getting arrested and Sarah left alone, pregnant, thinking about how she was easily deceived and manipulated.
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I think it's going to get worse. Lester has already told Dan not to touch him and to do things at home (the cleaning lady, the housewife). I think Sarah will soon cheat on Dan again and reveal Dan's greatest fear to Lester (wearing the cage and dressing up as a woman). I don't know if Dan would actually dress up as a woman (it would destroy the character), but the writer is decharacterizing all the characters. I also don't know how Sarah would make Dan dress like that. I hope there will be a recovery arc for Dan, with the sentry woman, him not calling Sarah (the sentry woman puts a security system on Dan's phone so he can't be hacked). Sarah has sex with Lester and Dan doesn't call, staying on the phone with the sentry girl. He starts to lose interest in Sarah and leaves when Sarah gets pregnant (I haven't read the final issue, so I don't know if Lester forbade Sarah from having a relationship with her husband).
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