Toxic Attraction DonSilver #Cuckold 8muses forum

[john_doe6711]

That was, "ahem," dark.

That's an understatement....

 

[DarkStutzel]

That's an understatement....

I don't understand some situations, like the betrayals. I was reading other series (Corruption of a Geek Goddess Pt. 1 to 8, missing the ending in part 9). Why do authors make the husband so weak, even though the guy enjoys this strange side (there are some characters who create rules, a certain limit, together with their wives, and these are betrayed)? I hope that in the end Mark leaves Chelsea, and she lives her life, simple as that. Dylan should leave her because he doesn't love her, he just wanted to destroy her relationship. It's no wonder he gave her to Cody too. Just Chelsea rejecting Mark and not using her free pass on him was the end. Mark has to find another woman.

 

[john_doe6711]

The story is all over the place right now...you included the mother in a significant way...( which I wanted to see evolve IMO)..sending pics..hacking her phone why write all of that in there to not even mentioning anything about it now...valid he said he is going to put the MCs through alot but damn...Dan has gone from fantasy loving husband to undeniably stupid now....it's not his fault though that's just how he was written...

 

[King_Gonta]

That was, "ahem," dark.

I think I am in the minority here but what was everyone expecting from a story named toxic attraction which literally started with a predator seeing a couple who have demons of their own??

There was literally no way such scenarios would end well. None

And regarding Saraha cheating. She cheated the day 1 she fantasised with Lester. And has already cheated many times and defiled many sanctities plus Dan is no victim either. He is enjoying the wittol like all cuckolds do. He is as addicted as Sarah

And regarding the deed done on children's bed . It is controversial very much but story is about total fall of Sarah .

At the point she agrees to be the mothers of Lesters baby.

What do you think will lead up to such event?? We have waited 33 chs for this to fulfill

The chapter was interesting tho Dan could have been written more convincing than he is. His thoughts are not interesting to read. This is a guy whose life is unravellin

I know Silver will back up from this and even take another step backwards due to his readership but this is very right direction for the story

Dan will have to become a complete cuckold one day bcuz Sarah does have a point.
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It was he who started this all

Edit : Regarding Pineapple a guy like Lester who literally take notes of all thya goes between Sarah and Dan would not he have taken notice of that

 

[NEOhioDude]

That was, "ahem," dark.

Brutally so. And a dark quote for me was sort of throwaway one where

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. My assessment of "dark ending" now is that Dan may commit suicide.

 

[john_doe6711]

Almost all fiction has to come from somewhere....DS writing Dan like this is unbelievable....nobody in their right minds no matter how high they are off the sexual experience is that stupid....picture the asshole bull telling the man of the house to go the dishes......it's a good thing this is fiction...in the real world Dan would be in prison...

 

[john_doe6711]

Not to keep ranting but wouldn't it be a kick to the gut if Lester is shooting blanks...endgame

 

[Verisimilinude]

However, they never used the safe word again, and now in 34 Lester is using the new word Pineapple. How did he find out that this was Sarah and Dan's new safe word?

Lester did know it, because Dan said it in front of him to get Lester and Sarah to stop. It wasn't explicitly stated (that I remember) but it was implied he could hear it.

 

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[SlyFox6333]

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Lester has already said in a previous chapter that he wanted to reverse the operation. All it takes is for Sarah to say, "Okay, do it." I don't see why that couldn't be done in chapter 34. Why drag it out more? This is assuming that the direction of the story is for Sarah to willingly want to be bred by Lester.

 

[King_Gonta]

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He will step backwards as his audience want lukewarm stuff not real dark ntr even tho he has the chops for it

In final you will see Sarah refusing and in next chapter you will see some restoration of status quo

Sad bcuz this is a dark ntr story and it's readers do not want to read dark NTR

Lol

 

[King_Gonta]

Almost all fiction has to come from somewhere....DS writing Dan like this is unbelievable....nobody in their right minds no matter how high they are off the sexual experience is that stupid....picture the asshole bull telling the man of the house to go the dishes......it's a good thing this is fiction...in the real world Dan would be in prison...

There are real world cuckolds but Dans case is he has no self respect.

None. Or he is aa addicted to this as Sarah is

 

[DarkStutzel]

Dan will wake up from his trance at some point (he looks like Sauron, in the form of an elf manipulating Celebrimbor), I don't think he'll kill himself, I hope that in this final edition Silver will improve things for Dan. While he is coming down, the sentry's wife calls him. The fact that Dan is a good-looking, intelligent person attracts the attention of other women. He could even disappear from Lester and Sarah's lives and things would start to work out, and since he has to stay away from drugs, he should seek help!!!!! Disappear from the map... I hope that in the end everyone gets along and Lester gets a little locked up and Sarah pays for her safety with sex. Dan comes to Brazil with the sentry's wife and her daughters.

 

[john_doe6711]

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You are usually spit on with these predictions...are you DS's ghost writer...hmmm

 

[polpolp]

He will step backwards as his audience want lukewarm stuff not real dark ntr even tho he has the chops for it

In final you will see Sarah refusing and in next chapter you will see some restoration of status quo

Sad bcuz this is a dark ntr story and it's readers do not want to read dark NTR

Lol

his paying audience love hard cuck, they want to see Dan destroy completely.

 

[trixiel]

I hope Sarah will realize what Dan said to her the previous chapters. "Sometimes you need to save me from myself". The key is Sarah realizing that Dan, with so much stress and pressure going on with him to keep his family from breaking apart, needs help from her. I think Sarah while fucking Lester will finally say to Dan to save her and maybe that will be the key to finally breaking Dan from her trance like state and he will come around and save Sarah.

Hoping that Dan will have sort of redemption arc. I pity him right now.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

I do not recall anyone telling Lester the "pineapple" password. Dan used it once in the vehicle around the 1st or 2nd date that I believe involved Cash the bum? Lester and Sarah were outside the vehicle.
I realize its an Alpha, but the involvement of the parents and kids is awkward as hell. Don does say he plans to change that.

No, but Dan did say it to stop Lester and Sarah from fucking, slammed Lester into a wall and then threw him out of the house. It wouldn't be a far stretch for Lester to figure out what it meant.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

I think it's going to get worse. Lester has already told Dan not to touch him and to do things at home (the cleaning lady, the housewife). I think Sarah will soon cheat on Dan again and reveal Dan's greatest fear to Lester (wearing the cage and dressing up as a woman). I don't know if Dan would actually dress up as a woman (it would destroy the character), but the writer is decharacterizing all the characters. I also don't know how Sarah would make Dan dress like that. I hope there will be a recovery arc for Dan, with the sentry woman, him not calling Sarah (the sentry woman puts a security system on Dan's phone so he can't be hacked). Sarah has sex with Lester and Dan doesn't call, staying on the phone with the sentry girl. He starts to lose interest in Sarah and leaves when Sarah gets pregnant (I haven't read the final issue, so I don't know if Lester forbade Sarah from having a relationship with her husband).

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If one thing makes you feel even a little bit better, Don said from the beginning that he hates the use of cages in erotic fiction and would never use one in any way.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

I think I am in the minority here but what was everyone expecting from a story named toxic attraction which literally started with a predator seeing a couple who have demons of their own??

There was literally no way such scenarios would end well. None

And regarding Saraha cheating. She cheated the day 1 she fantasised with Lester. And has already cheated many times and defiled many sanctities plus Dan is no victim either. He is enjoying the wittol like all cuckolds do. He is as addicted as Sarah

And regarding the deed done on children's bed . It is controversial very much but story is about total fall of Sarah .

At the point she agrees to be the mothers of Lesters baby.

What do you think will lead up to such event?? We have waited 33 chs for this to fulfill

The chapter was interesting tho Dan could have been written more convincing than he is. His thoughts are not interesting to read. This is a guy whose life is unravellin

I know Silver will back up from this and even take another step backwards due to his readership but this is very right direction for the story

Dan will have to become a complete cuckold one day bcuz Sarah does have a point.
.

It was he who started this all

Edit : Regarding Pineapple a guy like Lester who literally take notes of all thya goes between Sarah and Dan would not he have taken notice of that

I concur, and would say in a note to earlier posts, this was a prime example of bully mentality seducing the female in the relationship, who would ordinarily never betray their family member but soon takes part in it after being seduced by the bully, who then bullies the male in the family. 1 bully + 1 wife/mother + 1 victim = bully fetish. This was exactly that.