DarkStutzel
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- May 23, 2017
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I liked this math joke between Lester + and Dan -; they could use it between themselves (Sarah and Lester). And Dan could hear Sarah and Lester constantly denigrating him. The Sentinel employee could already say Dan is D+ (in a work situation, saying he's the best). Now I expect a heated fight between Dan and Sarah (now that everything is over), with Dan fighting over the use of his daughters' beds and bedrooms for sex, questioning how Lester knew about the safe word (since they switched the phrase and how Lester knew pineapple was the new safe word, which was never used). Sarah has indeed forgotten or given up her daughters several times for the pleasure of sex. (Some women actually do this). Sarah will show her bad side. As for Dan being blamed for the hacking, it's unlikely he doesn't have a degree in the field, nor does he have the equipment (any simple investigation can clear him of blame).
Dan, with the help of the Sentinel girl, has to rob Lester and leave him poor. Lester has to make Sarah wear his ring and leave Dan's aside. Sarah also now has Lester paying for everything (you could say that her husband is now in control of the finances and has nothing to fear, and he gave her a new engagement ring). How long has it been since Dan had sex with his wife?
- I hope that in the next chapter, Dan tries something with Sarah and she says no, denying her husband that she belongs to Lester.
- I expect a fight between them and questions about the pineapple and using the children's bed.
- More dialogue and drama development, whether it's ending the hospital part or Dan on the lookout, searching for the former tenant, or talking to her fiancé, and them joining forces for revenge.
Dan, with the help of the Sentinel girl, has to rob Lester and leave him poor. Lester has to make Sarah wear his ring and leave Dan's aside. Sarah also now has Lester paying for everything (you could say that her husband is now in control of the finances and has nothing to fear, and he gave her a new engagement ring). How long has it been since Dan had sex with his wife?
- I hope that in the next chapter, Dan tries something with Sarah and she says no, denying her husband that she belongs to Lester.
- I expect a fight between them and questions about the pineapple and using the children's bed.
- More dialogue and drama development, whether it's ending the hospital part or Dan on the lookout, searching for the former tenant, or talking to her fiancé, and them joining forces for revenge.