captaingrimes
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I think a lot of us are checking in occasionally to see how ridiculous the story has become, to be honest.I am. 207 pages on this forum for TA and everyone claims to "hate" the story. Adorable
I think a lot of us are checking in occasionally to see how ridiculous the story has become, to be honest.I am. 207 pages on this forum for TA and everyone claims to "hate" the story. Adorable
I loved the early chapters of this story, spend many hours to read it, yes its now garbage level, but i have little hope and also even if its probably gonna be real bad, i want to see the ending.I am. 207 pages on this forum for TA and everyone claims to "hate" the story. Adorable
I Propose that Dan gets a Letter from his Old Former employer which is rehiring because of getting several large contracts and offers Dan his old job at a 10-15% raise thereby ending his / their financial dependence on Lester and giving Dan some of his self esteem back.!!... Perhaps because hope for a turn for the better has not yet been completely lost?
The flow of writing, the narrative horizon and the unrealism of the plots must be corrected.
It is high time that the author (Don) finally moved away from this cliché: ugly, dirty, characterless, thieving, fat and disgusting and criminal ... but the main thing is that he has a big dick, which is hard 24/7, and all women, young and old, rich and poor, pretty and ugly, lie at his feet.
I have a thought that is slowly but surely spreading through my mind.
My gut feeling tells me that Sarah's father will be the one to hold Lester accountable, not Dan.
He will have the final say when it comes to Lester...
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I'm just here for fun. If you happen to look at my old posts, from a year or two ago, here and on other forums, you'll see that I've been disappointed for a long time. I think I'm the biggest jerk of all time.I think a lot of us are checking in occasionally to see how ridiculous the story has become, to be honest.
How you coping with the tear
I don't hate the story. I just hate most of the last 10 chapters. When it's focused on the three main characters, it's still the best erotic story I've ever read. I absolutely love the premise and the way he writes sex scenesI am. 207 pages on this forum for TA and everyone claims to "hate" the story. Adorable
I agree.I don't hate the story. I just hate most of the last 10 chapters. When it's focused on the three main characters, it's still the best erotic story I've ever read. I absolutely love the premise and the way he writes sex scenes
I agree 1000%I don't think he's all that great of a writer, he's does decent to good job detailing sex scenes. But as far as story telling he's terrible. He does know how to pace the story along and half the time it's just repetitive filler that does nothing to move the story along. He tends to leave plot holes the size of aircraft carriers that should led to something different and could turn the plot of the story but by the next chapter they are forgotten. Same with characters that introduced only to just bloat the narrative and do nothing except confuse the reader. It's like a horny ADHD pervert jerking off to porn with three different computers going each one with a different kink.
I'm just here for fun. If you happen to look at my old posts, from a year or two ago, here and on other forums, you'll see that I've been disappointed for a long time. I think I'm the biggest jerk of all time.
Here and on other forums, I've met several other authors with much better stories than DS's. Thank you all.
If you stop "cuming" here to say that everyone hates TA, how am I going to discover these incredible erotic writers???? lol
Where else would we find so many stupid ideas, childish theses, and boring explanations about what DS thinks, plans, or wants with the story he wants to make money from??? lmao
Anyone got it for sharing here?TA Ch 36 is dropped
I'm looking for the same, refreshing this page in every 10 minsAnyone got it for sharing here?
Doing OK, thanks for your concern. Carer won't matter much but as long as I stay insured. Mostly US sucks for patients but at least they can't deny insurance like they once could.How you coping with the tear
It's a nasty injury
Get any help you can physio, not sure what you can get where you are
In NZ we have medical support, to get you back up and running, it's a slow prognosis your injury but it will fix
Don't know the states well, but agrue your case as a carer
Compensation can be achieved but sometimes you have to be bloody minded.
Sell the consequences of you not acting
Take care