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the link shows the page server not found. is the link still working or is it just me?
You all good ok
Kiwi term we say sweet AS
Take care
You are a person I can respect
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I am a lawyer still but retired very early
D2taA
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Your wrong, he does not know what direction the story will take. He might have an ideal, but he listens to his patreon supporters. That's why characters getting introduced seemingly out of the blue that seem to be important but never to return. That's why certain events will take up a hole chapter a seem completely out of place from where the last chapter ended. He might on some of his shorter series but definitely not with TA. Like her hooking up with a random janitor or a random threesome. Or with Dan having seeing or hearing certain things never to follow up on them. Or Dan beating up Lester but now can't or won't lift a finger toward him. It's seems like Lester's computer skill are a McGuffin, they just make the story go in whatever direction he wants to change mid-chapter. There are a lot of better authors, but for some reason TA has a bunch of people backing it. It's kinda like Disney and Star wars, you know the new series or the next movie is gonna be shit but you still torture yourself and pay to watch it anyway.
The latest draft is all over the place again.
just a bunch of random thoughts at end of chapter.
this story has unravelled in the last year or so.
just a bunch of random thoughts at end of chapter.
this story has unravelled in the last year or so.
Looks like at the end of the chapter he's asking his patreons what route they want the story to go
Fokker1917
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This chapter felt very truncated. I understand it is just a draft, but I was reading the last sex scene (I was mid - tug) and it suddenly unravels into a list of bullet points outlining what Don is meant to write later.
Perhaps the holidays overwhelmed the writer, or maybe it's the 10 other stories he's writing in tandem with this one. Regardless, he is obviously spreading himself thin with multiple stories.
Perhaps the holidays overwhelmed the writer, or maybe it's the 10 other stories he's writing in tandem with this one. Regardless, he is obviously spreading himself thin with multiple stories.
Weird. Neither link works for me. Oh well. From the last few comments, it sounds possibly not worthwhile.
lol. you can easily put ch.35 and ch.36 together.....and it still wouldn't feel like the whole chapter, as it used to be at the beginning of TA.
At that speed it will be probably ch.39 (or so) when something significant is going to happen with the story, like Sarah and her mom finally leaving Chicago and going home to their husbands.
DS is obviosly running out of ideas
At that speed it will be probably ch.39 (or so) when something significant is going to happen with the story, like Sarah and her mom finally leaving Chicago and going home to their husbands.
DS is obviosly running out of ideas
King_Gonta
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It was just a bunch of disjointed sex scenes with no plot . It 's first time his draft feels so sketchy
Also Sarah is gone as a woman. She does not give a f about her old family and thinking about a new one with Lester
She is not even cheating . She is openly betraying at this point. A mother who does not give a f a bout her own children bcuz she is that hooked on sex
D2taA
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It's Prolly who gives a fuck, why is this story still going. Why has he not ended it yet, Sarah clearly is wit Lester the melster. I mean at some point why is Dan and her old life even being brought up. She's past the point of any kind of reconciliation with Dan, what is there to look forward to in the coming chapters. There won't be any drama with her and Dan, he's just like a friend that she doesn't really care about his opinion anymore. Going forward it'll just be a rinse and repeat of her fucking Lester the melster with a random person thrown in every now and then. It's prolly going go in the direction of Sarah and her mom in threesomes with Lardo. Please someone just shot this story and put it out of its misery.
polpolp
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Another garbage level chapter, , 15 lines of Dan like always, no likeable character, at this point i doesnt care if they all die (hope for a lot suffering for Lester and Sarah)
He doesnt even make effort anymore, im sure chatgpt can do better at this point on story part.
He doesnt even make effort anymore, im sure chatgpt can do better at this point on story part.
Nothing worthwhile. Kind of trash, really.
Maybe time to move on to something else.
Maybe time to move on to something else.
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After reading most positive and favorable comments and prognosis of this chapter.
I am wondering is a pulizer prize gonna be waiting for achievement in erotica.
He just keeps raising the bar.
I am wondering is a pulizer prize gonna be waiting for achievement in erotica.
He just keeps raising the bar.
Finally got to read Ch 36 Alpha. I think the story should really be called Toxic Addiction, as that is really the stage Sarah is at.