You know I see this as help materials for self relief. You dont look for stories here or any real life....this is a make believe and as long as there is good description of sex, I am ok with it. I think people read this and wanting it to be some sort of master piece. This is just like any sex stories and porn stories, the fat ugly guy get the girl and the husband left with nothing. I been telling you guys this is just like the Japanese av, they got million of this type of story about fat old ugly guy get the bueatiful girl or wife and get her pregnant at the end. So DS is just copy the theme here.
