Some thought:
- final version of TA36 is entertaining(one of the best of the last tenth maybe)
- considering Sarah upbringing her relationship with Lester is basically impossible, but considering the unfolding, her though of having Lester breed is not so unbelievable(we could have arrived here with half of the chapters though but this is another story)
- Lester MUST change the pills ASAP. Convincing her to come out of the pill is a plus, but for the story itself there in not a single reason not to do that(apart from Donsilver writing other 50 chapters)
- Sarah unconscious vulnerability while Lester under attack would have been an interesting twisting plot