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powerconti said:
Hello everyone,

It has become very quiet here, so quiet as if everyone has left the sounds and noises somewhere outside...
Doesn't anyone have anything to share? A sequel, for example, from our favourite authors, or something new that breathes life into the portal?
This deathly silence is getting on our nerves...

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Ascending Lauren is continued again and looks like it is on right path.

You can search for it on literotica. Free stuff and good. Similiar to toxic attraction but covers most of its mistakes. Husband and wife do love each other.

Sarah and Dans love at this point is questionable . If they had true love Lester would not have been able to break their bond .

Rest Verisimilinude has went quite and he was one of the most interesting commentators
 
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GGCaesar said:
I agree…and disagree

I mean Superman Lester is fucking fiction itself since his unbelievable skills are totally inconsistent with his way of living/hiding in shadow. If someone like Superman Lester existed, a female like Sarah would bang him…and more(this is the part of the story which I dislike the most). But in a more realistic tale this would be very unlikely.

I would not say impossible though. A twenty something Sarah banged by a sly douchbag but ugly like Lester is basically impossible but a forty something Sarah, bored, banged by someone like Lester(not Superman, but with his attitude and his fucking skills) is not as improbable as you might suppose.

Simply it has to be kept in the shadows…
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Agreed! This is the worst aspect of the story to me. Lester is the biggest freaking Mary Sue in erotic fiction. Anyone with his superpowers - because that's legitimately what he is, superhuman - would never be living in a crappy apartment, relying on blackmail/manipulation to get women. It's absolutely ridiculous, and totally at odds with the 'ugly bastard' NTR trope. Ugh.

I've said it in a prior post a long time ago, and I've seen some others point it out too, but Sarah is also an extremely poorly written character and is a 'round peg in a square hole' for this type of story. Sarah was set up orignally as: professional, intelligent, faithful wife, open to adventures with her loving husband. In the narrative (not chapters, but story timeline), Sarah devolves into an outrageous slut, blowing homeless guys and men she just met in a matter of weeks.
There's no 'fall'. No 'corruption'. It's the authorial equivalent of flipping a light switch, and presto! Skank mode activated. Zero introspection, no reluctance, no intelligent thought.

And the last of our comical triad, Danny-boy, is so forgettable and dull he deserves even fewer words than I've granted him. 'Nuff said.
 
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fh321 said:
Agreed! This is the worst aspect of the story to me. Lester is the biggest freaking Mary Sue in erotic fiction. Anyone with his superpowers - because that's legitimately what he is, superhuman - would never be living in a crappy apartment, relying on blackmail/manipulation to get women. It's absolutely ridiculous, and totally at odds with the 'ugly bastard' NTR trope. Ugh.

I've said it in a prior post a long time ago, and I've seen some others point it out too, but Sarah is also an extremely poorly written character and is a 'round peg in a square hole' for this type of story. Sarah was set up orignally as: professional, intelligent, faithful wife, open to adventures with her loving husband. In the narrative (not chapters, but story timeline), Sarah devolves into an outrageous slut, blowing homeless guys and men she just met in a matter of weeks.
There's no 'fall'. No 'corruption'. It's the authorial equivalent of flipping a light switch, and presto! Skank mode activated. Zero introspection, no reluctance, no intelligent thought.

And the last of our comical triad, Danny-boy, is so forgettable and dull he deserves even fewer words than I've granted him. 'Nuff said.
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Her corruption is there. She starts for her husband 's enjoyment and as a way to spice their marriage

Now it's not about her husband or their marriage which is spiraling downwards. Her innocent side has been consumed slowly with repeated mind fucking from Lester.
 
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fh321 said:
Agreed! This is the worst aspect of the story to me. Lester is the biggest freaking Mary Sue in erotic fiction. Anyone with his superpowers - because that's legitimately what he is, superhuman - would never be living in a crappy apartment, relying on blackmail/manipulation to get women. It's absolutely ridiculous, and totally at odds with the 'ugly bastard' NTR trope. Ugh.

I've said it in a prior post a long time ago, and I've seen some others point it out too, but Sarah is also an extremely poorly written character and is a 'round peg in a square hole' for this type of story. Sarah was set up orignally as: professional, intelligent, faithful wife, open to adventures with her loving husband. In the narrative (not chapters, but story timeline), Sarah devolves into an outrageous slut, blowing homeless guys and men she just met in a matter of weeks.
There's no 'fall'. No 'corruption'. It's the authorial equivalent of flipping a light switch, and presto! Skank mode activated. Zero introspection, no reluctance, no intelligent thought.

And the last of our comical triad, Danny-boy, is so forgettable and dull he deserves even fewer words than I've granted him. 'Nuff said.
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Ok, just to be clear.

The problem with this story is that after chapter 14, has moved out from Chicago apartment. After that DS needed Lester Superman to have the story going forward in some way. Indeed:

Lester can be a predator in that apartment? Absolutely yes!

Can a forty something bored woman, with the support of husband kink, falls for a sly predator with high fucking skills? Absolutely yes!

Has Sarah any reason to go on the pill knowing Lester is snipped! Fucking NO!

Can realistically someone like Lester (ALONE) manipulate the situation at the hospital managed by an outsourcer with tenth/hundred or engineers and much higher resources?!?!? FUCKING NO!

Can someone raise so much money in the dark web for ages without being caught by police? Realistically NO(some money yes, but Lester is someone being able to raise a fortune as described here. Where did he have put all the money, Crypto?!? Do you thing the Federal guys are stupid?)

What happens to Sarah after chapter 14 is the outcome of the point above. Some things are unbelievable, other(Byron, Otis in the basement) not so unlikely in that situation.

I do think after chapter 14 is only DS trying to raise money
 
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GGCaesar said:
Ok, just to be clear.

The problem with this story is that after chapter 14, has moved out from Chicago apartment. After that DS needed Lester Superman to have the story going forward in some way. Indeed:

Lester can be a predator in that apartment? Absolutely yes!

Can a forty something bored woman, with the support of husband kink, falls for a sly predator with high fucking skills? Absolutely yes!

Has Sarah any reason to go on the pill knowing Lester is snipped! Fucking NO!

Can realistically someone like Lester (ALONE) manipulate the situation at the hospital managed by an outsourcer with tenth/hundred or engineers and much higher resources?!?!? FUCKING NO!

Can someone raise so much money in the dark web for ages without being caught by police? Realistically NO(some money yes, but Lester is someone being able to raise a fortune as described here. Where did he have put all the money, Crypto?!? Do you thing the Federal guys are stupid?)

What happens to Sarah after chapter 14 is the outcome of the point above. Some things are unbelievable, other(Byron, Otis in the basement) not so unlikely in that situation.

I do think after chapter 14 is only DS trying to raise money
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King_Gonta said:
Ascending Lauren is continued again and looks like it is on right path.

You can search for it on literotica. Free stuff and good. Similiar to toxic attraction but covers most of its mistakes. Husband and wife do love each other.

Sarah and Dans love at this point is questionable . If they had true love Lester would not have been able to break their bond .

Rest Verisimilinude has went quite and he was one of the most interesting commentators
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Ascending Lauren is as bad as TA, the author claim its a melting pot of friend of them, even the incest stories is legit. Lauren doesnt really love her husband, she betray him many time, even making him lost his mind when he used safeword.

Lauren is a whore, she fuck every possible guy bareback, she love to humiliate her husband.

She's not as evil than Sarah but she's not a good wife either
 
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Ascending Lauren is as bad as TA, the author claim its a melting pot of friend of them, even the incest stories is legit. Lauren doesnt really love her husband, she betray him many time, even making him lost his mind when he used safeword.

Lauren is a whore, she fuck every possible guy bareback, she love to humiliate her husband.

She's not as evil than Sarah but she's not a good wife either
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The Tutor's Descent Ch. 06 - Full Prelease by Lapislit anyone? Please and thx
 
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