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Attraction: Chapter 37 Alpha
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Hey folks, just dropping this here before the holidays ramp up. I'll edit this but, I'm writing Neighborhood Encounters for the rest of the month.
As always, this is an Alpha draft with all kinds of grammatical issues and typos. I'll fix them in the final draft, along with changes based on your comments. I have a couple of things flagged to update and change here in the final draft. But for now, here it is.
P.S There is a lot going on in this chapter.
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Sarah shifted the car into the park then looked at herself in the mirror. She knew it was vain to think so positively of herself but she looked good. Despite all the stress and issues she was going through in life. None of it showed on her face. Her round, piercing blue eyes still looked back at her, framed by her healthly blonde hair and sharp features.
In the passenger seat, Sarah’s mom Renee put her phone into her purse, looking equally radiate just older. Sarah prayed that she would age as gracefully as her mother.
“The restaurant should be around the corner,” Sarah said, opening her door.
“Is this the best neighborhood?” Renee asked, still in car, holding onto her purse tightly.
“Mom, it’s fine. Maybe its not the best neighborhood but all the up and coming chefs who want their own place can’t afford to lease in the more popular areas. You chose this place, remember? Instagram right?” Sarah asked. A chilly wind ran up her legs, playing with her little black dress.
“It looked nice inside,” Renee said before opening her door and stepping out. “If I knew it was this kind of neighborhood I would have told you not to wear that dress.”
Novidade
22 horas atrás
Hey folks, just dropping this here before the holidays ramp up. I'll edit this but, I'm writing Neighborhood Encounters for the rest of the month.
As always, this is an Alpha draft with all kinds of grammatical issues and typos. I'll fix them in the final draft, along with changes based on your comments. I have a couple of things flagged to update and change here in the final draft. But for now, here it is.
P.S There is a lot going on in this chapter.
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Sarah shifted the car into the park then looked at herself in the mirror. She knew it was vain to think so positively of herself but she looked good. Despite all the stress and issues she was going through in life. None of it showed on her face. Her round, piercing blue eyes still looked back at her, framed by her healthly blonde hair and sharp features.
In the passenger seat, Sarah’s mom Renee put her phone into her purse, looking equally radiate just older. Sarah prayed that she would age as gracefully as her mother.
“The restaurant should be around the corner,” Sarah said, opening her door.
“Is this the best neighborhood?” Renee asked, still in car, holding onto her purse tightly.
“Mom, it’s fine. Maybe its not the best neighborhood but all the up and coming chefs who want their own place can’t afford to lease in the more popular areas. You chose this place, remember? Instagram right?” Sarah asked. A chilly wind ran up her legs, playing with her little black dress.
“It looked nice inside,” Renee said before opening her door and stepping out. “If I knew it was this kind of neighborhood I would have told you not to wear that dress.”
I'm not sure the purpose of all of this, to get people to leave and go to patreon? Shame us? Tease us? It seems to be a continuing theme though, these posts.
Karaoke77
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TA Ch. 37 (alpha)
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When you have honestly taken a. Step forward..u go at least 2 back. I personally believe u haven't written anything new here since chapter 30. Writing style to me has been way off. Don't know your endgame but hopefully it happens soon.. Double Cross seems starting nice, but guess we wii. See ,
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Well her eyes have gone from Green to blue.
That's certainly interesting
That's certainly interesting
Link not working. (Amd not just for me, but I have seen it reported elsewhere.)
King_Gonta
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Worked for me.
Sarah is gone as a woman too enjoying with Lester watching her enemies demise.
Also Dan is thinking of divorce too which is the first time he has ever uttered that word so it makes sense
Sarah is gone as a woman too enjoying with Lester watching her enemies demise.
Also Dan is thinking of divorce too which is the first time he has ever uttered that word so it makes sense
You have to register and then sign in at kemono's home page. Then do a search for the work, "Toxic Attraction", it comes up right at the menu placing for chapter 37 alpha.
Must be having issues because it won't let me get to the home page either. Oh well. Maybe some enterprising soul will post an alternate link.
Anybody has behind the neighbours door 12..??
All I can say
Medical care is a real fuckin problem in the US
This stuff is free in the UK and NZ
Fuckin hell
Medical care is a real fuckin problem in the US
This stuff is free in the UK and NZ
Fuckin hell
All these threads should have happened 20 chapters ago. At least they are happening I guess.
King_Gonta
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This chapter itself is interesting but has a big problem. Sex is boring.
This is because is unbalanced towards story description. All the descriptions here should have been spread btw the last tenth repetitive chapters instead of being concentrated here.
I have only a bit of concern about Sarah-Cash scene. It’s forced as written here. Sarah that trades Cash silence with some sort of sex to avoid her mother’s suspicions would have been much more believable than Sarah taking initiative.
Anyway, if this story had some meaning, after this scene, Sarah going by purpose in the alley to have sex with Cash would be only a matter of time.
This is because is unbalanced towards story description. All the descriptions here should have been spread btw the last tenth repetitive chapters instead of being concentrated here.
I have only a bit of concern about Sarah-Cash scene. It’s forced as written here. Sarah that trades Cash silence with some sort of sex to avoid her mother’s suspicions would have been much more believable than Sarah taking initiative.
Anyway, if this story had some meaning, after this scene, Sarah going by purpose in the alley to have sex with Cash would be only a matter of time.
Here's another way: Look at all the current posts that have been posted on ‘kemono’.
It should work *without* any problems, but if it doesn't, then there's no way around registering with ‘kemono’. Registration is free!
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