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[polpolp]

another garbage chapter, the problem is not about how dark the story is but how unbelievable it is and how he make Dan so weak like magic.

Its better than alpha draft but not that much

Where is the Dan who crush Lester face so hard ? who fight for his family ?

 

[Bad Boy Billy]

another garbage chapter, the problem is not about how dark the story is but how unbelievable it is and how he make Dan so weak like magic.

Its better than alpha draft but not that much

Where is the Dan who crush Lester face so hard ? who fight for his family ?

Not sure
It's now ridiculous

 

[King_Gonta]

Sarah tells Dan that he has lost and Lester has won.
Wow... what logic!
How pathetic and stupid of her ...

He will only lose if he actually takes her back into his life and tries to grow old with her as if nothing had happened and she were a saint.

What she is currently experiencing, accomplishing and going through is certainly not a lifelong dream that one dreams of and strives for. She has lowered herself to the level that is more attributable to Lester and his ilk: antisocial to downright sleazy.
No woman in her right mind and mother of two children would ever dream of letting herself be fucked and used in a dirty, dark cinema in front of a crowd of crooks and hustlers. And as if that weren't bad enough! No, she goes into an even more run-down, disgusting, dirty toilet and lets herself be used like a cheap street whore.
... She thinks it's all great and is happy with it.
How nice for her!
She has finally arrived where she belongs: namely, slutty, stupid, perverted, whorish and abnormally dirty.

Dan has to get away from her immediately. If he doesn't, he risks being dragged into the perverted, antisocial vortex she finds herself in, along with the rest of his family (Children).

-- PC

I am sorry to say that but this point people who are taking Dans side .... like why??.

He is getting hard at this debauchery while he is running out of groceries to feed his children

He is no less gone than Sarah in terms of pervertedness and is too under Lesters spell

 

[powerconti]

I am sorry to say that but this point people who are taking Dans side .... like why??.

He is getting hard at this debauchery while he is running out of groceries to feed his children

He is no less gone than Sarah in terms of pervertedness and is too under Lesters spell

That's why!
Dan had a "wife sharing" fantasy in which Sarah and he were together and he didn't have to blame himself for her betraying him, behaving like a bitch, lying to him and cheating on him.

It is a widespread experience that men show a certain physical reaction when they watch a sex scene in which their partner or another woman plays an active role. This is a natural reaction and cannot be described as a negative trait.
My appeal to those who claim the opposite is that it would be helpful to get checked out to determine possible causes and deficits in their functionality.

At this point, however, it should be noted that there is no intention to take sides in favour of Dan.
The way Sarah behaves is questioned and criticised. Her manner is whorish, slutty, deceitful and dishonest... and it is precisely this transformation of hers that I am targeting and addressing.
She has fallen so low that she would even descend into a shithouse for a ‘fuck’ with perverted, dirty and characterless fat slobs like Lester.

There are certainly some who find this appealing and arousing, and who may experience the best orgasms while reading. I would like to make it clear that I do not count myself among this group and will therefore express my concerns at every opportunity.

Regardless of the dark story presented to us here, we are dealing with content that is perceived as perverse, unbelievable, dirty and idiotic (at least by me!).

But as I have already mentioned in previous statements, as long as ‘the money keeps rolling in’, Don Silver will continue to embellish the story with more crap and nonsense and degrade Dan’s character to ridiculous insignificance, because he has enough customers who pay hard cash for this ‘bullshit’ and get excited about it...

As for the question of why I'm still here?
Quite simply,
I'm still here because I find the story to be nothing more than a ‘joke’ and I'm amused by it and laugh my head off!


-- PC

 

[ABinWP]

I am sorry to say that but this point people who are taking Dans side .... like why??.

He is no less gone than Sarah in terms of pervertedness and is too under Lesters spell

another garbage chapter, the problem is not about how dark the story is but how unbelievable it is and how he make Dan so weak like magic.

Its better than alpha draft but not that much

I'll offer a couple of opinions that may not be popular:

- Dan is not the weakest character in this story.
- Lester is not the most vile character in this story.

Sarah is, in both cases.


As for the final version vs. the alpha version, I actually like the final version for one reason: The author has peeled back the curtain on what kind of person Sarah actually is. Lester didn't corrupt Sarah. He found a kindred spirit.

At the very least, the author opened up the opportunity to explore/explain Sarah's obvious rage at her husband - an anger that long predated the start of this story. What caused this? How long has it been bubbling under the surface? Sarah's anger has nothing to do with sex, a large cock, orgasms, etc.

I'll skip over the stupidity of Dan freezing for the 3,283,490,147th time when watching Sarah fuck, and Sarah fucking Lester in yet another silly environ, as I'm numb to the incessant repetition at this point.

 

[Davidsays1]

He definitely makes enough money. Off just this the writer makes somewhere between $1300-$2900 a month prior to whatever patreon takes. I'm not a creator so IDK how much that is. So now way is the writer planning on stopping.

 

[polpolp]

I am sorry to say that but this point people who are taking Dans side .... like why??.

He is getting hard at this debauchery while he is running out of groceries to feed his children

He is no less gone than Sarah in terms of pervertedness and is too under Lesters spell

Yeah Dan is dumb, only drive by his pervert side, but Don make him an unbelievable character, no real human can be this dumb and so drive by his fantasy.

Don literally change Dan character with the only reason he cant control his fantasy drive, its ridiculous.
And all the lester plan to make them lost there work was so badly write and ridiculous.

And we cant talk about Sarah, the worst evil character ever, who lost her mind with just few orgasms, its even more dumb than Dan and now she want child with the ugly fat Lester ? come on, she gonna have such hideous child, no way someone can think its Dan.

Only one real plot is possible; Dan completely lost is mind and kill Lester in the most cruel way

 

[DarkStutzel]

Undercover Blonde Ch. 13
Novidade
Ontem
“Information is provided on a need-to-know basis,” Evie mimicked Grant’s tone as she sat in her G-Wagon. “This has been our protocol from the beginning.”
The conversation with her handlers still churned inside her, each remembered line stoking her frustration higher.
“Having certain kinds of information changes your behavior,” she continued, adopting Lexi’s condescending cadence. “Oh, and my personal favorite. If you wanted complete transparency, you should have chosen a different career path.”
Evie slammed her fist against the steering wheel. “As if I chose any of this!”
She pulled out of the Serenity Flow parking lot, merging into traffic with an aggression that reflected her inner turmoil.
She should return to her apartment, mentally prepare for whatever tests the Maddox brothers might have planned. But the thought of those empty rooms, that staged life waiting for her felt suffocating. She didn’t want to be alone with her thoughts right now.
At the intersection, instead of turning toward Shoreline Towers, Evie impulsively swung the opposite direction.

 

[Bad Boy Billy]

I'll offer a couple of opinions that may not be popular:

- Dan is not the weakest character in this story.
- Lester is not the most vile character in this story.

Sarah is, in both cases.


As for the final version vs. the alpha version, I actually like the final version for one reason: The author has peeled back the curtain on what kind of person Sarah actually is. Lester didn't corrupt Sarah. He found a kindred spirit.

At the very least, the author opened up the opportunity to explore/explain Sarah's obvious rage at her husband - an anger that long predated the start of this story. What caused this? How long has it been bubbling under the surface? Sarah's anger has nothing to do with sex, a large cock, orgasms, etc.

I'll skip over the stupidity of Dan freezing for the 3,283,490,147th time when watching Sarah fuck, and Sarah fucking Lester in yet another silly environ, as I'm numb to the incessant repetition at this point.

Yeah
She was frustrated
In the relationship, I have met professional women like that, it's not they are bored, it's just fuck they want a bad guy, a bit of rough, if you dress in a suit and are financially secure, yeah.
I get your point
But a ugly fuck, no, that's fuckin fiction
But yes she was frustrated

 

[DarkStutzel]

It's obvious that Sarah is no longer Dan's (he just hasn't realized it yet), the divorce is certain, and Dan needs therapy.

Let's talk about Dan: he's been arrested and has a history of assault at work, and to make matters worse, he's broke and has to submit to Lester. Sarah lost her job, and he's in dire financial straits. There's no way he could hit Lester.

The problem with the series is the loose ends and how Dom disconnects and goes into "Bob's fantastic world" mode. For example, Lester sabotaged Sarah's car; the mechanic was an honest person (and didn't tell Sarah's father that the car was sabotaged). The hospital cameras also didn't show him sabotaging the car.

Trisha is interested in Dan but never makes an effort, and there's nothing about his side jobs either. The new computer was forgotten. The story is turning into one of those porn movies with a really poor script, where the guy says "A" and the woman is already having sex (increasingly ridiculous). The plot develops very poorly, in a disconnected way, and is always full of loose ends.

 

[powerconti]

Undercover Blonde Ch. 13
Novidade
Ontem
“Information is provided on a need-to-know basis,” Evie mimicked Grant’s tone as she sat in her G-Wagon. “This has been our protocol from the beginning.”
The conversation with her handlers still churned inside her, each remembered line stoking her frustration higher.
“Having certain kinds of information changes your behavior,” she continued, adopting Lexi’s condescending cadence. “Oh, and my personal favorite. If you wanted complete transparency, you should have chosen a different career path.”
Evie slammed her fist against the steering wheel. “As if I chose any of this!”
She pulled out of the Serenity Flow parking lot, merging into traffic with an aggression that reflected her inner turmoil.
She should return to her apartment, mentally prepare for whatever tests the Maddox brothers might have planned. But the thought of those empty rooms, that staged life waiting for her felt suffocating. She didn’t want to be alone with her thoughts right now.
At the intersection, instead of turning toward Shoreline Towers, Evie impulsively swung the opposite direction.

Hello DarkS,
could you post chapters 10, 11, 12 and perhaps also 13, if you have them?

I, along with many other readers, would be very grateful.

-- PC

 

[GGCaesar]

Yeah
She was frustrated
In the relationship, I have met professional women like that, it's not they are bored, it's just fuck they want a bad guy, a bit of rough, if you dress in a suit and are financially secure, yeah.
I get your point
But a ugly fuck, no, that's fuckin fiction
But yes she was frustrated

I agree…and disagree

I mean Superman Lester is fucking fiction itself since his unbelievable skills are totally inconsistent with his way of living/hiding in shadow. If someone like Superman Lester existed, a female like Sarah would bang him…and more(this is the part of the story which I dislike the most). But in a more realistic tale this would be very unlikely.

I would not say impossible though. A twenty something Sarah banged by a sly douchbag but ugly like Lester is basically impossible but a forty something Sarah, bored, banged by someone like Lester(not Superman, but with his attitude and his fucking skills) is not as improbable as you might suppose.

Simply it has to be kept in the shadows…

 

[lilmagpie92]

Does anyone have the last few Eddie Wilder releases? His Kemono hasnt been updated recently.

 

[IdiotPedro1]

Nothing in this story is realistic and hasn't been from chapter 1. The entire premise doesn't make much sense and once Lester reveals that he has a lot of money in one of the earliest chapters, it's just silly.

 

[Bad Boy Billy]

I agree…and disagree

I mean Superman Lester is fucking fiction itself since his unbelievable skills are totally inconsistent with his way of living/hiding in shadow. If someone like Superman Lester existed, a female like Sarah would bang him…and more(this is the part of the story which I dislike the most). But in a more realistic tale this would be very unlikely.

I would not say impossible though. A twenty something Sarah banged by a sly douchbag but ugly like Lester is basically impossible but a forty something Sarah, bored, banged by someone like Lester(not Superman, but with his attitude and his fucking skills) is not as improbable as you might suppose.

Simply it has to be kept in the shadows…

Ok, I understand
I get the story it's gone on to long as it's become ridiculous, but it's funny
I can only give you my life experience
I live in NZ, my wife in the UK
She lives in a beautiful lifestyle property we both jointly bought
I still support her
I made mistakes
This story highlights it
I was not a good guy, just a dumb fuck from NZ who thought he could do anything
Luckily we both still love each other
But live apart

 

[Bad Boy Billy]

I agree…and disagree

I mean Superman Lester is fucking fiction itself since his unbelievable skills are totally inconsistent with his way of living/hiding in shadow. If someone like Superman Lester existed, a female like Sarah would bang him…and more(this is the part of the story which I dislike the most). But in a more realistic tale this would be very unlikely.

I would not say impossible though. A twenty something Sarah banged by a sly douchbag but ugly like Lester is basically impossible but a forty something Sarah, bored, banged by someone like Lester(not Superman, but with his attitude and his fucking skills) is not as improbable as you might suppose.

Simply it has to be kept in the shadows…

Hey it's fiction
But the author has moved into fancy
It applies to his base
So
Sorry
He has surrendered his craft
Just gotta move on

 

[Bad Boy Billy]

Hey it's fiction
But the author has moved into fancy
It applies to his base
So
Sorry
He has surrendered his craft
Just gotta move on

He was a really interesting writer
But he fucked it up

 

[adamblack144]

Does anyone have cumbunny 14?

 

[powerconti]

Hello everyone,

It has become very quiet here, so quiet as if everyone has left the sounds and noises somewhere outside...
Doesn't anyone have anything to share? A sequel, for example, from our favourite authors, or something new that breathes life into the portal?
This deathly silence is getting on our nerves...

-- PC

 

[DarkStutzel]

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