- Jun 9, 2021
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I think you're right I love don's stories but I feel that in his stories there is something the same in every story of his, for example there are at least 3 stories that the husband has a cuck fetish and he share his wife with a fat ugly man, I feel that his future stories will be the same, I don't think TA need a spin off (I'm not against of the idea though) but I think that he needs something new and now is a good time to build up a new story like that because he already have TA and TC ongoing to a good point although for me TA is going back and forthDon did add minor characters from his other stories but I’m losing faith Neighborhood Encounter will be on par or better than Toxic Attraction. By chapter 3, Clara has already gave in to her husband’s arousal and let Bert give her a facial in the pool. Heck why stop with that in this chapter. Let Clara and Burt have sex while her husband Adam watches. Its not like he would do anything to stop it. It’s almost a carbon copy of Detestable Liaisons but with different characters and story arc.
I said earlier Don should do a spin off or prequel to Toxic Attraction because fans love those characters. BUT FOR THAT STORY ONLY. Its hard to catch lightning in a bottle twice so repeating the same themes as Toxic Attraction, but changing the character names or their background story doesn’t equal success. Not every story needs an overly obese unattractive alpha male with crappy personality but possesses a great big cock, a wife who easily gets manipulated and abandons her morales for this big cock and a cuckold husband who lets it all happen which eventually leads to the destruction of their marriage.
Don is a great writer and shouldn’t pigeonhole himself. Variety is the spice of life