Toxic Attraction DonSilver #Cuckold 8muses forum
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Yeah he's taking the piss. No one cares about the Lincoln group and hospital bullshit. How about a chapter of just dialogue between the characters? He's getting incredibly lazy and just having her suck/fuck random men that mean nothing. I guarantee to you she'll never fuck Byron, Jesse, Vernon or the Janitor again. Absolutely pointless.
I'll be done with this story if the next chapter goes straight to getting Dan from jail. Kick Jesse out and dedicate the next chapter to just Lester and Sarah. Please
Agree!
It's a waste of a good idea.
The first chapters had so much potential.
DS is making a lot of money keeping his anxious cheerleaders happy, giving them the same ol crap time and time again.
Those who wanted a good story, instead of a bunch of nonsense chapters with similar, well writen, but just the same sex scenes, changing the name of partners, are extremely disappoited.
It baffles me why a pretty good writer like Don seems incapable of writing any intimate conversations or scenarios between Sarah and Lester; the three central characters have become one dimensional....Lester is a manipulative genius with a magic dick, Sarah is reduced to nothing but a perpetually horny slut and Dan is too weak and dumb {at this point , no one is rooting for him}. There has to be more intimate scenarios and conversations between Sarah and Lester outside of the sex or it will turn from erotica to porn.
While everything has become rather one dimensional, there is a general feeling of corruption that feels rather authentic.
For me Sarah has given in very easily rather than been corrupted.
Dan hasn't put up much of a fight either !
Dan hasn't put up much of a fight either !
The scene is playing out exactly as Lester said in the previous chapter, he said he was going to get a hotel room, have someone else fuck her and then keep her there all night without Dan. I imagine Lester will kick Jesse out and spends the night bringing her to multiple orgasms.
Now that Dan is putting the puzzle pieces together he has to tell Sarah to stay away, right? What was Lester's e-mail that would get him access to the Williams house? He gets into their house and Sarah can't say no - she craves his cock too much.....I think she left a lot of the details out of their last work tryst. She won't tell him about about banging Lester in their house, making Dan realize he's lost so much more than money.
wondering how Lester gets her off birth control/pregnant?
Now that Dan is putting the puzzle pieces together he has to tell Sarah to stay away, right? What was Lester's e-mail that would get him access to the Williams house? He gets into their house and Sarah can't say no - she craves his cock too much.....I think she left a lot of the details out of their last work tryst. She won't tell him about about banging Lester in their house, making Dan realize he's lost so much more than money.
wondering how Lester gets her off birth control/pregnant?
I agree need something in between getting Dan out of jail. I just question if Lester has much of a personality - he might turn her off by talking. He's the "evil genius" that manipulates everyone but doesn't seem to have any friends.....Ned is someone that admires him because of gaming ability. He had something on Lizzie, not sure anyone actually likes him.
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Maybe that's it. Don can't write extended dialogue for Lester because he's made him too much of a caricature.
Man, TA must end asap. The characters development aren't just dumb, they became stupid.
Lester was a fat loser living in a crappy dirty apartment; now he is a fusion of Batman and Lex Luthor to make plans; also can manipulate everybody: roomates, girls, landlords...;he can hack anything from home; can make hundreds of thousands of dollars and dont give a fuck, just think about Sarah's pussy.
Dan lives with a informatic systems guy, has his LinkedIn changed, several weird problems and cant take 2 and 2 together.
Byron works for a quadrillionaire evil Corporation, probably associated with the Sith, and the only thing he does is drink and put all in risk to fuck Sarah - her pussy must have the essence of heaven.
I could continue, but whatever.
Lester was a fat loser living in a crappy dirty apartment; now he is a fusion of Batman and Lex Luthor to make plans; also can manipulate everybody: roomates, girls, landlords...;he can hack anything from home; can make hundreds of thousands of dollars and dont give a fuck, just think about Sarah's pussy.
Dan lives with a informatic systems guy, has his LinkedIn changed, several weird problems and cant take 2 and 2 together.
Byron works for a quadrillionaire evil Corporation, probably associated with the Sith, and the only thing he does is drink and put all in risk to fuck Sarah - her pussy must have the essence of heaven.
I could continue, but whatever.
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Dan is finally out of his slumber, but in reality it has to be past the salvaging point. Many marriages won’t survive a betrayal in this fashion and I’m not expecting a Christmas miracle to save this one. Harry and Issac remained cucks after their experience please make Dan not follow the same path. Dan should react badly whether its from Jesse or Sarah how she betray him by having sex with Jesse and letting him cum inside her. Being with the one person Dan dislikes the most there can be no going back from that no matter how much Sarah begs forgiveness. Don concentrates on meaningless things when at this point people want direction and conversations that moves things forward between the three. First I hope Sarah and Lester have that pillow talk time but also have a frank conversation about where this heading. The playing off the marriage proposal as a “getting Dan and Sarah off” scene was pathetic. Second Sarah and Dan need to have a conversation after the weekend which I’m sure will be argumentative and testy. Neither one was there for the other at their moment of need which is fundamental to a marriage. It’s almost grade school level of relationships we are dealing with now not married adults. The Patreon comment section is full of irked fans talking about lack of progress and dialogue between Lester and Sarah.
The patreon comments are saying the same thing? We might get some actual change then. Thank God
But I think the Jesse issue is a perfect way to progress Sarah and Lester. Have her lie about fucking him. She should say she refused and Lester kicked him out and she didn't fuck him. Let that be a secret between Sarah and Lester. Up to this point she's been honest, so Don can use this to bring Lester and Sarah closer.
But I think the Jesse issue is a perfect way to progress Sarah and Lester. Have her lie about fucking him. She should say she refused and Lester kicked him out and she didn't fuck him. Let that be a secret between Sarah and Lester. Up to this point she's been honest, so Don can use this to bring Lester and Sarah closer.
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I resigned myself to the fact with Toxic Attraction lately you have to suspend reality. Up is down and down is up. Unfortunately most of us were drawn in early and now too far along to cut ties. There is hope one day Don will wake and not listen to the simps and interject common sense into his story once again. At this point my only hope is he finishes the story and not disappear like a lot of writer in this genre.
Other suggestions include,
1). Lester demanding Sarah kiss him passionately everytime they meet rather than ask for kiss like he did this chapter. She should be doing initiating
2). Assuming she says "I love you" during the next chapter, make her say it everytime they fuck, without prompting. Eventually ramp that up to outside of sex. Instead of demanding to fuck her at the hospital, Lester should pester her until she says I love you.
3). Make her seduce Lester in an upcoming chapter. So far it's been all one sided, Lester should demand she persuade him and don't give in immediately. Make her work for it.
These are some ways to actually progress the story. I'm sure you guys have ideas too. But I can't take random sex with random dudes and in between that paragraphs dedicated to Lincoln group and hospital bullshit.
1). Lester demanding Sarah kiss him passionately everytime they meet rather than ask for kiss like he did this chapter. She should be doing initiating
2). Assuming she says "I love you" during the next chapter, make her say it everytime they fuck, without prompting. Eventually ramp that up to outside of sex. Instead of demanding to fuck her at the hospital, Lester should pester her until she says I love you.
3). Make her seduce Lester in an upcoming chapter. So far it's been all one sided, Lester should demand she persuade him and don't give in immediately. Make her work for it.
These are some ways to actually progress the story. I'm sure you guys have ideas too. But I can't take random sex with random dudes and in between that paragraphs dedicated to Lincoln group and hospital bullshit.
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At this point I’m hoping during Dan‘s incarceration he gets a big dose of reality. He supposedly happen while he is drunk which is great. However I hope Dan can’t keep his mouth shut and blabs to his cell mates about the reason he’s in there. Talking about receiving a harsh dose of reality from a bunch of random strangers. They have no irons in the fire and can see it objectively.
I just now thought of this: we never anything about Dan having a best friend. In fact Dan and Sarah are very isolated which I find peculiar. Yeah yeah I know Sarah is his best friend. BULL. No way in bloody hell if things were this bad I wouldn’t be calling my best friend to talk or least bail me out. My best friend knows a lot of embarrassing things about me, but if I need advice or helping hand he’s there for me. In this instance after bailing me out my friend will give me advice I wouldn’t like but he has my best interest at heart unlike Sarah. It says a lot about Dan as a person if he doesn’t have a friend or because he’s to embarrass to reach out at his time of need.
Ok, I have really thought about this and am not so disappointed in the last chapter as I am in Don and his planning, within his writing (outline, reasons and hints as to something being built up to, within a story, etc.).
I am a huge fan of the psychology within a story. I just don't want to know why someone does something but why and how deep does earlier mental trauma/exhuberances affect the changes and choices made. I have been reading this as a surface story, the way I generally read most porn that I read, but this chapter changed things, deciding to make this a psychological study/story of a svengali brainwashing a mark, for lack of a better term. I just wish that Don had laid some breadcrumbs leading here, because up until this chapter this was a big dick, horny woman, cuckold kind of story.
The story in truth is that of Lester taking women and working to change their psychology and belief structure through the use of his dick, sex, and the very leading instructions he gives them. With Sarah, he not only met the woman he thought epitomizes the way women should look, but an independent woman, who he saw as the ultimate challenge to put her in her so-called place. It seems that he is trying to change Dan and fuck that, Dan is an obstacle and nothing else. Yes, he wants Dan to hate himself as he sees Sarah changing, but he really doesn't give a shit about anything, except him getting the fuck out of his way, the way, he feels he is owed. Recently, there have been a slew of men attacking women for anything from wanting control over their own bodies, to making their own sex choices, to even voting. Lester would be the president of this, but only to use the men he empathizes with as means to get more women to personally control.
I no longer believe that Lester wants to marry Sarah, or to take over her family, or even to win over her kids. He sees all of that as obstructions to his true goal: change Sarah's brain using sex and reinforcing patterns of speech and using her primary point of her personality to that goal. He wants her to ignore and despise Dan, seeing him as weak. He wants her to want to give up her children for him, as they are in the way of him controlling Sarah. He wants her to think that it is all her own idea, like suddenly supporting the idea of helping in Jesse's revenge against her husband, by letting him fuck her and fucking him back and cumming inside her, knowing that it would "break him" when it happened. Her phone went off and will continue to do so every now and then, depending on when Cook county allows him to make calls. Lester may even let her listen to Dan's voice mail, as he will then demand she decide whether to save Dan or fuck him. Lester will continue to re-pattern her brain through sex and manipulation. He will remind her that he said the two of them, a stranger as punishment, and no Dan's allowed. Sarah agreed. He will even admit he got Dan arrested so he could sit in jail while he fucked his wife and that he was tired of interfering with them and what they had. He will make her look at his engagement ring, a ring -- like his cock -- bigger that anything Dan could ever give her. Lester will tell her to make a choice. Show him her choice by destroying her birth control pills and having his baby while Dan sits alone, behind bars.
Don will have Sarah's brain bent and she will choose Lester for that weekend and eventually get Dan out, telling him that he being in jail is his own fault. I bet she will take Lester's side in ever-increasing arguments and will invite Lester to stay at the house - while she sends Dan's spawn to her parents. At Lester's insistence, she will occasionally invite Jesse to the house so he can fuck her in Dan's bed, to show him how much better than Dan he actually is, but never as good as Lester.
When she does become pregnant, that will be the end of Sarah and Dan, as her training and brainwashing will be completed and the new couple will be Sarah and Lester.
Sorry for the length, but it is hard to make an argument like this without evidence and there is plenty that now is coming to light but Don hid for far too many chapters and months. It's kind of like the mysteries that wait until the end to tell you everything. The best mysteries will feed you small clues throughout, that you may not even get at the time, but when you finish the book, you feel a little embarrassed and maybe a little stupid as you can now see that you should have known all along. We couldn't have possibly known any of this all along.
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I agree Psiber Don is lately lacking the skills necessary to make the reader look forward to the next chapter. There was an air of mystery or gray area in his erotica where a reader’s imagination can run rampant till the next installment. Now the only mystery is when Sarah and Lester going to have anal sex.
You right there will be no marriage or happiness that we would think of. Now it’s Don’s point to make Sarah a bimbo and less than human. Having Lester sexually manipulate Sarah till the desired results are achieved. The question is why the change now? Yes we could chalk it up to his paid simps, but I’m wondering if Don is having relationship troubles in real life and its heavily influencing his writing where he is projecting his hatred for woman onto Sarah and Clara.
I think he always intended it to be psychological but did not have the tools to write the whole thing that way and because of that he just now introduced it in a real fashion. He needs to find others who write psych stories...not just sex, thrillers,mysteries, etc. and then try again.
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