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[powerconti]

I am not familiar with the legal situation in the individual states of the United States of America, especially not in Chicago.
As far as I could tell from the last chapter, Dan did not harm, injure or assault anyone, did not vandalise anything in the hotel or cause damage to property, did not carry any weapons or life-threatening objects or drugs.
His only offence was that he drank more than he could handle. He was a bit loud and knocked loudly on a room door several times.
Are these REASONS enough to be arrested and locked up in a cell?
If so, then half of the citizens of the United States should be in prison!

Under normal circumstances and in a constitutional state (because the USA is and should be a constitutional state!) they should have released Dan after his interrogation and a warning (small misdemeanour payment of perhaps 50 - 100 $).

But no, Don makes a giant elephant out of a molehill, stomping around in a glass house.
... And that goes beyond the limits of my imagination and all rational logic.

 

[Snafu4977]

exactly.

at the very most Dan would be in the drunk tank overnight to sober up.
then he tells Sarah what's going on and she comes home to him or she chooses Lester, not sure how the story can continue and still be even slightly realistic, fantasy story or not !

 

[Wife is Hot]

Thank you for this. I didn’t even realize how many pages I had read about this story. It’s a testament how good this series is.

Here are the chapters: 1 - 22 in PDF format
Enjoy it ...

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

I am not familiar with the legal situation in the individual states of the United States of America, especially not in Chicago.
As far as I could tell from the last chapter, Dan did not harm, injure or assault anyone, did not vandalise anything in the hotel or cause damage to property, did not carry any weapons or life-threatening objects or drugs.
His only offence was that he drank more than he could handle. He was a bit loud and knocked loudly on a room door several times.
Are these REASONS enough to be arrested and locked up in a cell?
If so, then half of the citizens of the United States should be in prison!

Under normal circumstances and in a constitutional state (because the USA is and should be a constitutional state!) they should have released Dan after his interrogation and a warning (small misdemeanour payment of perhaps 50 - 100 $).

But no, Don makes a giant elephant out of a molehill, stomping around in a glass house.
... And that goes beyond the limits of my imagination and all rational logic.

Actually, most cities here have public intoxication as a crime, and businesses can turn that into criminal loitering and trespassing at their whim . And to give an example of how it can weirdly happen, when I was younger I got pulled over in Rockwall, Texas for a traffic violation. I did not live in that county but had to drive through it to get home from work. They were building a jail over there and because of that, made a practice of arresting anyone who was pulled over and did not live in county. I was allowed exactly one phone call and my father did not answer the phone at his work at a computer job moonlighting. Well, that was all I got. I got charged $80 a night for , basically, rent until my family found me and went and paid a bail bondsman $50 so they could put down the $500 bond I was given to get out. I was not read my rights until I got to the arraignment and was told by the judge that the cop didn't need to read them to me, only the arraignment judge. All of this for a charge that was dismissed by the DA on the day of trial. Go USA.

 

[adamblack144]

Very depressing that we have to wait 3 weeks for a pay off because this chapter was so poorly written and conceived. I really hope we get back to the spirit of this story and see actual progression

 

[DarkStutzel]

Lisa's Co-Worker - Part 4?

 

[UrMomEzMine]

And dont expect any development in next chapter. I bet it will be 100% in the hotel room with Lester's endless boner.

 

[Sermex67]

At this point I’m not sure I give a toss if I’m being completely honest.

 

[1ncomplete]

Just interested in tainted conception now, TA has lost any tension and interest

 

[adamblack144]

I like neighbor encounters. Should have made it interracial though. That would increase the political tension and hatred he's going for

 

[bluepixiegurl316]

I like neighbor encounters. Should have made it interracial though. That would increase the political tension and hatred he's going for

Yikes. Would rather avoid real world stuff when I'm trying to get off via escapism. Don't need no Klan crap clogging up my cuckold kink please.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Yikes. Would rather avoid real world stuff when I'm trying to get off via escapism. Don't need no Klan crap clogging up my cuckold kink please.

100% agree with you on this point. Erotica should be an escape from the doldrums of reality

 

[Verisimilnude]

Newbie here but -

I think that DS missed a golden opportunity here with the hotel/jail situation. One that would achieve Lester's manipulative plans and burn both Jesse and Dan at the same time and still "claim/appear" to be blameless in Sarah's eyes.
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Dan's already pissed about paying the bill, he's drunk on top of that and heads up to the room. Meanwhile Lester has Sarah blindfolded and the elevator seems to be taking a while and Lester tells her he has a surprise for her. They get to the rooftop level - where an outdoor balcony is adorned with a small table, a bucket of champagne and two glasses. Lester takes the blindfold off and Sarah is treated to the scene before her - he tells her he wanted to show her the stars see the city at night etc (opportunity for some actual conversation and character growth between the two like in ch19 when he "cooked" Sarah dinner).

Downstairs Dan arrives at floor 3 steps off the elevator and sees Jesse waiting at the door of room 326, becomes enraged and rushes Jesse and they start fighting - Ned calls the cops/hotel security (bc Lester already told him the plan) and waits until both are arrested/removed from the premises, as neither are guests. Up on the balcony, Lester gets a text from Ned that the cops have left with Dan and then Lester and Sarah come back to the room (Sarah none the wiser) and when she wonders why Dan hasn't arrived yet she texts him then tries to call but Dan's not responding bc he doesn't have access to his phone.

Lester plays it off as maybe he didn't want to watch and is either waiting downstairs or went back to the apartment. Sarah knows Dan had said "ch23-Last night was intense; I don’t know if I need that again for a while. I would definitely want to hear about anything afterward." She's already primed and irritated with Dan bc this is his MO of not answering or saying what he wants. So she just rolls with it bc she wants her favorite toy.

Once the night/weekend is over Sarah hears the vm from Dan, freaks and tells Lester that Dan's in Jail, another opportunity for Lester to save the day and bail him out for Sarah (proving once again that Lester can provide for her). When Dan accuses Lester of setting things in motion - Lester plays it off says the same dude from the club?, maybe this Jesse is a stalker and saw them having dinner, bribed the hotel staff, or overheard Lester when he was getting the room key at the front desk to find out the room number (something plausible at least in a make believe story). When Dan shows the photo of Jesse in front of the room, Lester could say to Sarah, didn't you mention on the balcony how Dan got this Jesse fired, maybe he wanted revenge.

This at the very least would give Sarah pause before accepting Dan's accusations. Sure she's concerned but she's pissed at Dan for getting drunk, not being in the room like she wanted, and then getting arrested causing more financial strain and now he's upset with the fantasy that he keeps waffling on. As a final act Lester could say oh by the way here's the money for our dinner last night, I wasn't planning on stiffing you for the meal just thought it would add some spice to your fantasy - you not liking me an all.

Lester gets the Jesse issue off his plate, knocks Dan down a lot of pegs and comes out at the very least neutral in the situation in Sarah's eyes. The only plot whole is Lester did say that she would be with him and a stranger in the hotel, but could be explained by Lester saying the night was too perfect and he decided that could wait for another day.
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Now that's just me and how I would have resolved it, not sure how DS will fix it bc he burned a lot of bridges and will need to do some magic to make Sarah not some mindless robot in order to not see Lester in a bad light. Or maybe this is what DS wants, this could be the inciting incident that flips Sarah down the road of Lester can take care of all her needs and Dan is just holding her back from being liberated and he needs to learn/accept he's just her Dekuck now.

Apologies for the long post but I suffer from being overly verbose.

 

[Oresttitos]

This is an ordinary swing that has already continued for 23 chapters. Don will now lower the grade to get the swing again. If you understand what I wrote about and who follows the publication closely.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Newbie here but -

I think that DS missed a golden opportunity here with the hotel/jail situation. One that would achieve Lester's manipulative plans and burn both Jesse and Dan at the same time and still "claim/appear" to be blameless in Sarah's eyes.
--------
Dan's already pissed about paying the bill, he's drunk on top of that and heads up to the room. Meanwhile Lester has Sarah blindfolded and the elevator seems to be taking a while and Lester tells her he has a surprise for her. They get to the rooftop level - where an outdoor balcony is adorned with a small table, a bucket of champagne and two glasses. Lester takes the blindfold off and Sarah is treated to the scene before her - he tells her he wanted to show her the stars see the city at night etc (opportunity for some actual conversation and character growth between the two like in ch19 when he "cooked" Sarah dinner).

Downstairs Dan arrives at floor 3 steps off the elevator and sees Jesse waiting at the door of room 326, becomes enraged and rushes Jesse and they start fighting - Ned calls the cops/hotel security (bc Lester already told him the plan) and waits until both are arrested/removed from the premises, as neither are guests. Up on the balcony, Lester gets a text from Ned that the cops have left with Dan and then Lester and Sarah come back to the room (Sarah none the wiser) and when she wonders why Dan hasn't arrived yet she texts him then tries to call but Dan's not responding bc he doesn't have access to his phone.

Lester plays it off as maybe he didn't want to watch and is either waiting downstairs or went back to the apartment. Sarah knows Dan had said "ch23-Last night was intense; I don’t know if I need that again for a while. I would definitely want to hear about anything afterward." She's already primed and irritated with Dan bc this is his MO of not answering or saying what he wants. So she just rolls with it bc she wants her favorite toy.

Once the night/weekend is over Sarah hears the vm from Dan, freaks and tells Lester that Dan's in Jail, another opportunity for Lester to save the day and bail him out for Sarah (proving once again that Lester can provide for her). When Dan accuses Lester of setting things in motion - Lester plays it off says the same dude from the club?, maybe this Jesse is a stalker and saw them having dinner, bribed the hotel staff, or overheard Lester when he was getting the room key at the front desk to find out the room number (something plausible at least in a make believe story). When Dan shows the photo of Jesse in front of the room, Lester could say to Sarah, didn't you mention on the balcony how Dan got this Jesse fired, maybe he wanted revenge.

This at the very least would give Sarah pause before accepting Dan's accusations. Sure she's concerned but she's pissed at Dan for getting drunk, not being in the room like she wanted, and then getting arrested causing more financial strain and now he's upset with the fantasy that he keeps waffling on. As a final act Lester could say oh by the way here's the money for our dinner last night, I wasn't planning on stiffing you for the meal just thought it would add some spice to your fantasy - you not liking me an all.

Lester gets the Jesse issue off his plate, knocks Dan down a lot of pegs and comes out at the very least neutral in the situation in Sarah's eyes. The only plot whole is Lester did say that she would be with him and a stranger in the hotel, but could be explained by Lester saying the night was too perfect and he decided that could wait for another day.
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Now that's just me and how I would have resolved it, not sure how DS will fix it bc he burned a lot of bridges and will need to do some magic to make Sarah not some mindless robot in order to not see Lester in a bad light. Or maybe this is what DS wants, this could be the inciting incident that flips Sarah down the road of Lester can take care of all her needs and Dan is just holding her back from being liberated and he needs to learn/accept he's just her Dekuck now.

Apologies for the long post but I suffer from being overly verbose.

Definitely an interesting plot twist to chapter 23 you devised. Would have my interest. I’m not thrilled how chapter 24 was written as Dan forced Jesse into the story once again. I thought it was supposed to be someone she hated not who her husband hated. I would have loved to see Lizzie involved due to Sarah‘s possessive and jealous nature toward Lester. Sarah would get competitive for Lester‘s attention and would have been a no brainer for her to have Lester’s baby if Lizzie was unable to provide him that joy. Now we have Jesse cumming inside Sarahand now he’s in puppy love with her. I would hope chapter 25 would be continue with round two hopefully with Jesse not in the room. We need to see progress in this affair between Sarah and Lester (because it’s definitely not looking like a love story) not a chapter full of debauchery. Then again Don has a tendency to skip over the sequences that happened in the previous chapter and we may see round two as a flashback. It would be interesting to see how Don writes Lester playing off the wrong room number to Sarah and how the three will interact after Dan gets out of jail.

Seems lately Don’s MO to Toxic Attraction is to have Lester on the cusp of wooing Sarah for several chapters and then at the last minute Dan comes in to save the day and pours ice water on the affair. We are due for another cooling off period. I hope this doesn’t happen in chapter 25.

 

[adamblack144]

Yes. He takes it to the brink of progression then throws it all away. Chapter 20 where Lester comes back inside when he was about to leave should have been the point where Sarah and Lester make love and talk. But Dan interrupts them immediately. Chapter 23 ended with Sarah in the bath and Dan in Chicago. It should have been chapter 24 where Lester gets personal time with Sarah but he chose to make it what we've read.

Everytime he has the chance to let Lester and Sarah connect on a deeper level, he throws in Dan or some random loser and the moment is lost. Now it's the time for serious progression. Now we'll see what this story is about. Is it a meaningless slut story or will Lester and Sarah have a serious relationship

 

[bluepixiegurl316]

Sarah comes just feels weak and pathetic now. Not the strong woman, wife and mother that the story began with.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Now it's the time for serious progression. Now we'll see what this story is about. Is it a meaningless slut story or will Lester and Sarah have a serious relationship

I agree it’s time for Lester and Sarah as well as Don to make a giant leap forward to reassure this fan base. This dipping the toe in the water and then pulling it back gets tiresome. The way Don wrote Toxic Attraction initially was so intriguing and beautifully written. It gained quite a following because of how unique the story was laid out and how people identified with the characters (Dan represents all our worst impulses we couldn’t do in real life). Don didn’t have a paying fan base so we got to see his writing as a labor of love in its purest form. Over time the story began to side track as Don catered to the paying simps and in his greed for money not glory the story has morphed into mindless subplots and weak character development. If Toxic Attraction falls in the trapping of “just another slut story” you find on Literotica everyday. It would be a slap to every fan who patiently waited each month for the next installment. And Don should heed the Tiger King if he lets the story slide to obscurity
“ I Am Never Gonna Financially Recover From This”

 

[de066me]

Does anyone have "Fantasies from Afar" 5-7?

 

[SlyFox6333]

I am okay with Jesse having sex with Sarah, but agree with Chillie that Jesse is not hated by Sarah. Therefore, I would not be surprised if Sarah's boss shows up in round 3 or 4? I'm still curious as to what type of birth control Sarah is on, and how Lester will take it away. To get Sarah pregnant seemed to be a major goal even at the beginning of the early chapters. For example, the faulty condoms, though it took some time for Lester to finally use them. Speaking of time, what does everyone think the time frame is so far? Has 6 months gone by? a season? a year? There is no mention of holidays, etc. though it snowed the one time. Are we in warmer weather now? It must have been warmer with Cash's appearance and even Otis since both happened outside. Maybe time doesn't matter? It is fantasy. I do enjoy reading everyone's ideas.