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SmartMan

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Guess you could always do that in your own head and stop reading anything past Ch14. However after some consideration, I got to thinking DS's master plan might be he's using patreon and the serial format to do something bigger with the series. Its very possible he's writing it out in chapter format to both earn money and after reviewing feed back, take all the chapters, do a rewrite where he needs to and put it out as an erotic novel.
I think that's essentially a guarantee. He's already selling it chapter by chapter for people that don't use Patreon. Although as bluepixie mentions it will be extremely long. It's over 400k words now, or about a third of In Search of Lost Time.
 

Verisimilnude

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How long does it have to be to be sold. I feel like I've seen erotica books that are much shorter than this already but maybe it's in my head.
Well he's got more than enough word count to have written a novel, but if it follows a standard novel 3 act structure then he hasn't written the ending yet. Up to Ch14 was one act, up to Ch24 has been the 2nd act, and we all know there has to be some kind of setback for Lester after the hotel, which leads us into Act 3 where we build to the conclusion. I'd say there are another 12 chapters minimum before this story will reach a logical end. Obvi this is speculation on my part but based in part on how he has written the first two acts. As an aside my estimate is he has around 240k word count at this point, so he could easily turn it into a trilogy of erotic novels if he wanted to.
 

Verisimilnude

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It's over 400k words now, or about a third of In Search of Lost Time.
True, my estimate was conservative at 10k per chapter but we know some chapters are at 18-19k. However there is a lot of fluff he'd have to pull out or reshape. Curious what do you mean by In Search of Lost Time - you mean the fluff or things happening that we aren't aware of?
 
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adamblack144

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I hope this story continues for significantly longer than most people here. I have critiques but I like this story. I'm not paying for it and the sex scenes are good
 

Verisimilnude

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I hope this story continues for significantly longer than most people here. I have critiques but I like this story. I'm not paying for it and the sex scenes are good
That's kind of a trap isn't it. As a writer you start out with a specific story in mind, but then you acquire an audience, half of which don't want to see it end and half that want it to have a satisfying start and end point. Either direction you go, you're going to upset someone. Imo, best if you conclude it when there's nothing left to say.
 
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Unless holidays impend Don I know we are close to the next exciting chapter of a Toxic Attraction. Im excited to see if we finally get significant progress in Lester Sarah’s relationship. Will she still wear Leste’s engagement ring I would love to do a poll to see to who gets close to their scenarios for Chapter 25 Im expecting Don to focus a lot on the graphic sex scenes lately without making any significant process in Lester and Sarah’s relationship. What changes will happen to Sarah once she leaves the hotel? Will she get upset at Dan’s incarceration and room number change? Will Sarah continue to wear the Lester’s engagement ring? Was the message Lester received after failing to enter Dan and Sarah’s home was Thornhill approving Sarah’s new role as Lester’s administrative assistant? Inquiring minds want to know. There is a contingent of Patreon commenters who wish Sarah will have Jesse’s baby and become her new love interest. They want Dan so focused on taking down Lester he fails to notice his wife falling in love with Jesse. Jesse is a pawn not a main character. He adds no depth to the story except Dan hates him and a recording Lester sends of Sarah begging Jesse to cum inside her will cause martial conflicts. She is already withholding details on Otis and the blowjob. Sarah should be smart enough to realize sex with Jesse will be too similar to Dan once the newness wears off. I for one have said if Don wants to reintroduce minor characters why not Lizzie? Why does it have to be Otis, Cash the D&D group or Mr.Thornhill.

I’m glad I found this forum and had the opportunities to interact with everyone and openly discuss Don’s stories with each of you. I look forward each reply and new post as they offer an intriguing and compelling insight. I will keep an eye out for the next chapter, but wanted to express thanks for everyone who posted TA chapters on this thread as it fueled my initial appetite for Toxic Attraction which burns today. I look forward seeing your comments and potential pitfalls we yet to discuss from chapter 24. I hope Don does not run out of creative juices before hitting the finish line.
 

adamblack144

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Kick Jesse out, don't waste time on Dan in jail or info on the hospital/Lincoln group. Just have Sarah and Lester alone for a chapter. Have lots of eye contact and dialogue. Speak explicitly about their desire for each other. Have Sarah express her love for Lester without prompt. If they're going to spend the night at the hotel, then talk about that. Don't just fall asleep. Have Sarah say she feels safe and comfortable in his embrace and promise that she'll choose Lester's room while they're in Chicago. Don has mentioned many times that Sarah is addicted to Lester's smell, have him find out about that and use that to deepen his hold on her.

If Don was serious, he'd dedicate the entire chapter to Sarah and Lester. Just fucking and talking and making love. Lester would extract more demands from Sarah and she would become even more submissive and affectionate to him. Then having established a new stage of their relationship, the revelations about Dan would happen, Lester can resolve it by lying and convincing Sarah that it was an innocent mistake. Dan, baffled at his wife's trust for Lester, would go along with it as a long term plan to expose and rid themselves of him.
 
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Matthhs19

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Only thing I would like better is if the story focus only in the Lester/Sarah/Dan dynamic...lots of character fucking Sarah takes away a little of the thrill of her fucking Lester, I mean, even that homeless guy got to fuck her face, lol. Now Jesse, the little shit. It's such a turn off for me...I usually skip those parts.

The sex scenes are top tier, though.
 
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Digging_story

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Kick Jesse out, don't waste time on Dan in jail or info on the hospital/Lincoln group. Just have Sarah and Lester alone for a chapter. Have lots of eye contact and dialogue. Speak explicitly about their desire for each other. Have Sarah express her love for Lester without prompt. If they're going to spend the night at the hotel, then talk about that. Don't just fall asleep. Have Sarah say she feels safe and comfortable in his embrace and promise that she'll choose Lester's room while they're in Chicago. Don has mentioned many times that Sarah is addicted to Lester's smell, have him find out about that and use that to deepen his hold on her.

If Don was serious, he'd dedicate the entire chapter to Sarah and Lester. Just fucking and talking and making love. Lester would extract more demands from Sarah and she would become even more submissive and affectionate to him. Then having established a new stage of their relationship, the revelations about Dan would happen, Lester can resolve it by lying and convincing Sarah that it was an innocent mistake. Dan, baffled at his wife's trust for Lester, would go along with it as a long term plan to expose and rid themselves of him.
My guess is that Sarah will be forced by Dan to keep away from Lester, Lester will then blackmail her with the videos of him banging her.
 

RedTeamGo009

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My guess is that Sarah will be forced by Dan to keep away from Lester, Lester will then blackmail her with the videos of him banging her.
Exactly!! I think Lester is tired of playing this game. He makes a comment about Dan remind him of Lizzie's bf. How he puts his nose in places he doesn't belong. He knows Dan is on to him, so he's done playing nice. He'd rather all his lies come out on his terms rather than Dan. Lester is going to record everything that happens in that hotel room and use it as blackmail. He'll have Sarah taking off her blindfold and her not seeing Dan, but she just continues to fuck Jesse's brains out and let's him cum in her. I bet they stay all weekend and Dan stays in jail the whole time while Sarah is either obviously or knows and that will make the video all the more damaging. And we still don't know what happenend in Middlton after the car scene at work....
 
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adamblack144

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If Lester blackmails them, then Sarah will hate Lester. What's the point of building up their relationship then?

"Despite his numerous flaws and abrasive attitude,
she couldn’t help but feel a certain fondness for him. And there was a physical longing that she couldn’t
deny either."

Sarah hasn't hated lester yet. She's been disgusted by him and found him creepy. Now she's addicted to him. Hatred will just make this a standard "dumb slut loves cock" story. Rather than a careful seduction of an attractive woman by an ugly creep which is why I loved this story
 

Verisimilnude

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Kick Jesse out, don't waste time on Dan in jail or info on the hospital/Lincoln group. Just have Sarah and Lester alone for a chapter. Have lots of eye contact and dialogue. Speak explicitly about their desire for each other. Have Sarah express her love for Lester without prompt. If they're going to spend the night at the hotel, then talk about that. Don't just fall asleep. Have Sarah say she feels safe and comfortable in his embrace and promise that she'll choose Lester's room while they're in Chicago. Don has mentioned many times that Sarah is addicted to Lester's smell, have him find out about that and use that to deepen his hold on her.

If Don was serious, he'd dedicate the entire chapter to Sarah and Lester. Just fucking and talking and making love. Lester would extract more demands from Sarah and she would become even more submissive and affectionate to him. Then having established a new stage of their relationship, the revelations about Dan would happen, Lester can resolve it by lying and convincing Sarah that it was an innocent mistake. Dan, baffled at his wife's trust for Lester, would go along with it as a long term plan to expose and rid themselves of him.
I know you really want that to happen but you're setting yourself up for disappointment. DS's structure has been pretty consistent with story scene, sex, story scene, sex, story scene - with a few exceptions. He could surprise us with Hotel round 2 sex, but I think it's more likely Ch25 begins the next morning with Sarah seeing the voicemail and we have conflict. Either she chooses to stay with Lester, has Lester help her with Dan or she leaves to go get Dan out of jail.
 

Verisimilnude

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My guess is that Sarah will be forced by Dan to keep away from Lester, Lester will then blackmail her with the videos of him banging her.
I think you are partly right. That the conflict will be Dan once again getting in Lester's way which creates a new conflict arc. However I think blackmail would be Lester's last play - his scorched earth policy. Because once he reveals he has videos or tries to blackmail Sarah, she would recoil at that, as least if she stays true to her character. Besides I don't think Lester needs to blackmail her, as Psiber said in a previous post, she's already physiologically addicted and on her way to being psychologically addicted to Lester.
 
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What makes you think Dan will suddenly turn this around? DeCuck.…..No Man. Yes Dan did have his moments early in the story but lately he has been so ineffective and a bumbling idiot. Most times he is put in his place when Sarah looks at him with bedroom eyes. Ordering hidden cameras will not erase all the bad decisions when competiting head-to-head with Lester. Lester is involved in IT he should expect this or placed hidden surveillance in their house. Dan and Sarah will be blackmailed by the hotel video for what end we don’t know.

I want Lester to go scorched earth, but I want Sarah to submit to Lester and assert control over her weak husband.. It’s about time for Sarah to expose Dan as a vulnerable cuck. Don has yet to explore Dan’s statement to Sarah about being a cuck and wearing a cage. There is too much calmness in the post Lester sex discussion between Dan and Sarah. I missed Dan pissing off Sarah when he chose work and she sought out revenge sex . Have Dan explode on Sarah since plenty has happened since their last argument. No more Dan treating his wife’s indiscretions like someone who is ordering a sub from Jimmy Johns. Its time to hear arguments, accusations, and butt hurt comments. This should make Sarah snap on Dan and put him in his place .
 
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Oresttitos

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I hope Den makes the decision to let Sarah and Lester go, move to another state and forget all about it. And for Sara, I expect a happy life, lots of sex, travel, fun, Lester's care and love.
I think Lester will send the children to an orphanage or sexual slavery, because throughout all the chapters Sarah has no motherly love for them and easily trades them for a rich carefree life.
 

Oresttitos

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I'd prefer if Lester doesn't fuck the twins but I suppose that's up to Don
Lester categorically should not touch children, it causes disgust and the desire to put him in prison for life.
Lester changes her psyche and social behavior, and the children are a reminder of her black, worthless life in eternal debt with Dan.
Lester gives her a dream - a carefree, rich life, expensive clothes, restaurants, sex, interesting adventures and a sweet future.
He will manipulate her, but isn't that what she herself wants?