i would prefer don end Toxic Attraction and move on to another story, as this one has run its course many times over.
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i would prefer don end Toxic Attraction and move on to another story, as this one has run its course many times over.
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His writing style has been consistent, but Dan has struggled finding the right combination of relatable characters in his other stories. He hit the jackpot with Toxic Attraction as fans remain interested in the story’s outcome and characters. Don’s other stories fail to create the same spark or interests from fans as Toxic Attraction so lately he Don has been slow rolling their monthly releases to focus on his money maker. Its in Dan’s best interest overall to end Toxic Attraction, but as long as fans remain interested and the simps pour money into his coffers, I don’t see Don abandoning his golden goose soon. I’m too invested to abandoned the story now so I’m here till the end.
Holy cow on another note someone asked when is the last time Dan got with Sarah sexually. I roughly checked and the last time Sarah and Dan were intimate was Chapter 21. It’s hard to tell timeframe from the story so either Dan is a eunuch or suffering blue balls.
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I agree with you, but I'm just curious for your opinion I believe that his other stories have a similar patern with each other a guy want's to get cucked and loses control, what do you believe is the problem here besides the similarities between those stories for me I like the other stories but there is something that's missing and I can't quite place it on what it is
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Thank you adamblack144 you get it. So I agree 100% with your statement. We logically need to see a progression with Sarah’s mindset immediately post coital since she blatantly told us sex talk is not real feelings in her mind. Does Sarah seriously not zero feelings or emotions to express after sex? She has chosen to lie and cheat on her husband, parents and kids but somehow remains quiet with Lester after he takes her to new heights sexually. It would seem Sarah would express guilt, shame or if she didn’t care giddiness if faced with that situation. We get the opposite however and Sarah falls immediately to sleep to recover from an orgasm by sleeping but do so without a dream or nightmare
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Sarah just grinned and shook her head, slapping him playfully in his arm "Ass".
NGL I loved this part. This is the kind of casual intimacy that I wanted more between Lester and Sarah.
Lester would offer ask for advice on approaching situations and dealing with other team members, something she is more than capable of providing.
There is another wrinkle in ONML plan of Dan. Not only Lester is her boss, as of now he is her ONLY ally on her side in her work. I don't think Sarah will let go of her ace card that easily. BTW does Dan know she now works directly underneath Lester?
Also Happy New Year everybody!!!
NGL I loved this part. This is the kind of casual intimacy that I wanted more between Lester and Sarah.
Lester would offer ask for advice on approaching situations and dealing with other team members, something she is more than capable of providing.
There is another wrinkle in ONML plan of Dan. Not only Lester is her boss, as of now he is her ONLY ally on her side in her work. I don't think Sarah will let go of her ace card that easily. BTW does Dan know she now works directly underneath Lester?
Also Happy New Year everybody!!!
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I'm failing to see the connection you want to be there. The line is Sarah's inner monologue - showing her mind working out the duality of her life now. Her rational side understands that Dan and her should never have engaged in Dan's fantasy. Her primal side is embracing her sexual liberation. It's showing the reader that her character is at a crossroads and soon will have to make a choice.
Dan's 'campaign of cleanup and revenge'?? Who is he getting revenge against? The person responsible for the state their marriage is in - is Dan. He encouraged / gave permission for Sarah to engage in his fantasies. She gave him 4 chapters to prevent it - always asking him did he want her to stop. Did he stop her, no, he sat there and enjoyed his lusts and desires.
It's like you see Sarah and Lester as the villains in this story and Dan as this noble white knight. Sorry to break it to you, but Dan isn't the upstanding innocent husband here, he is the true monster in this story. It started with his lusts, he encouraged her to participate and continues to facilitate her sexual awakening because he won't put a stop to it - but now that he's done this - he's mad because she enjoys it. Like a spoiled child who asks for chocolate cake and then is mad because he got chocolate cake.
The moral of this story thus far is that all three are flawed individuals who have been seduced by their desires; Sarah has embraced it, Lester has taken advantage of it and Dan is unhappy and wishes he'd never opened Pandora's box.
"Lester Marshall, the new interim head of IT services" Mary smiled, but it didn't quite reach her eyes.
I think Mary the HR monster might play a part in future chapters. It's very obvious that there's animosity between her and Sarah and let's just assume she doesn't like Lester either (he ain't much of a charmer). She might act as a catalyst to Sarah's dark turn: instead of being appalled by Lester's manipulations, as discovered by Dan, she instead asks his help to take down Mary in someway which turns her on more. I would assume Mary the HR monster might comment something about Lester, which Sarah might subtly bring up during one of their 'sessions', planting the idea to takedown Mary in Lester's head
Rant time: one of my complaints about Don's writings is that he relies more on inner monologues for stuff that would benefit otherwise - like every time Sarah thinks of Lester's appearance, she wonders what would her friends and colleagues will think of him. Why not show it?! Wouldn't it be better to write one of her co-workers complement her look and in the same breath comment on the new "troll" they hired for IT, sending shivers in her body think how they just had sex an hour ago. That reminds me, I would also like to see more of the couples physical transformation (I liked reading them in tainted conception, so I know Don can write it) - how all that sex gives Sarah an extra glow which everybody notices, while Dan gains weight, has bag under his eyes, losing hair due to all that stress
I think Mary the HR monster might play a part in future chapters. It's very obvious that there's animosity between her and Sarah and let's just assume she doesn't like Lester either (he ain't much of a charmer). She might act as a catalyst to Sarah's dark turn: instead of being appalled by Lester's manipulations, as discovered by Dan, she instead asks his help to take down Mary in someway which turns her on more. I would assume Mary the HR monster might comment something about Lester, which Sarah might subtly bring up during one of their 'sessions', planting the idea to takedown Mary in Lester's head
Rant time: one of my complaints about Don's writings is that he relies more on inner monologues for stuff that would benefit otherwise - like every time Sarah thinks of Lester's appearance, she wonders what would her friends and colleagues will think of him. Why not show it?! Wouldn't it be better to write one of her co-workers complement her look and in the same breath comment on the new "troll" they hired for IT, sending shivers in her body think how they just had sex an hour ago. That reminds me, I would also like to see more of the couples physical transformation (I liked reading them in tainted conception, so I know Don can write it) - how all that sex gives Sarah an extra glow which everybody notices, while Dan gains weight, has bag under his eyes, losing hair due to all that stress
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The reason why is her character is still struggling with the concept. She loves her husband, but she can't deny she loves Lester expanding her sexual frontier, complicated by his love bombing conditioning. I can't recall the exact years but lets say Dan/Sarah have been married for 8-10 years. This isn't a light switch situation - you don't have amazing sex with another person and suddenly turn off the last 8 years of your life. She has to slowly reach her conclusions and accept what she wants, it's what adds to the realism of this story, it shows Sarah's character has depth and she grows due to these inner conflicts.
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Wait, what? Dan has a husband, that's a new twist. Just kidding I know what you meant.
So why is it Sarah is a slut? Because she enjoys sex? If both partners agree to extra-marital sex (which is is how this story started) that means Sarah is a slut? That makes no sense to me.
There are a host of reasons that married people stray; loveless marriage, grow apart, revenge, and yes because one party desires something the other doesn't. Now IRL - I agree with you - in those situations both should have enough respect for the other partner to say, I'm done and want out. But even IRL - if a couple decides they want to have an open marriage, swing or find pleasure in sharing - who am I, or anyone for that matter, to say it's wrong for that couple.
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Yes it can be reversed, but it's not always successful. That aside it would be a way for Dan to cock block Lester's ultimate desire haha
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No judgment - looking for an honest answer to an honest question. Do you still read each new chapter of TA and if so what keeps you coming back?
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In a word - Sarah.
DS has a lot of passion for writing Sarah's character. She is captivating and full of depth and nuance. And I've enjoyed watching her grow over the series.
DL - I didn't care for the POV or the premise so didn't really engage with it
TC - It has promise but Brooke doesn't have the same pizazz as Sarah
NE - Agree with you it's too much a carbon copy of TA
Side note: I've noticed quite a few times where DS will write a scene in the other stories and he forgets to change the name from Sarah to the other female lead.
i do. i like sarah becoming more of a slut and have really enjoyed the way the humiliation of dan has ramped up. i find the sex with strangers/byron/jesse really hot, too.
i found the early chapters with lester really hot, but it feels like their sex scenes are very repetitive now. others in this thread seem very very very interested in building up the relationship between sarah and lester, and i just don't agree at all. lester is no longer an interesting character to me outside of giving dan a "villain" to fight against, and i wish they'd have some showdown and the series to end.
my ideal resolution to the series would be something like this: dan mounts a comeback and lashes out against lester, and then lester is "defeated" in some way (heart attack, gets exposed and humiliated, goes to jail or something) and then dan and sarah ride off into the sunset... with the twist being that she's a complete slut now, fucking random dudes, cheating on dan with his friends, etc. maybe dan likes it, maybe not.
i'd also be totally fine with a "lester wins" ending.
i looooooooooveed chapter 3 of neighborhood encounters and would like that to be the new toxic attraction, but im not sure others have loved it
I agree with you regarding TA so far and I almost agree with your opinion for NC3.
TA has a repetitive pattern now. Small story advancement with a lot of Sarah moaning. I understand DS wants to raise money, so I won’t be to aggressive about comments, but it’s clearly a fan fiction now. Since it would be a dark hotwife story all the characters should “lose”, so:
- Lester plans must in the the end fail, so Sarah and Dan will be together and his plan to have Sarah pregnant by himself must fail too(what would happen to Lester is up to DS but it’s not so important for the end)
- Sarah plan to enjoy sex without consequences must fail to. She gets pregnant, mostly by chance/lester underrating of something/someone by someone else than Lester or Dan.
- Dan kink will led to him rising someone else child(pls let me understand which chapter is at least hinted Dan is snipped because I reread them and didn’t find anything).
This is how a dark Hotwife story should end, but it will be Superman Lester impregnating the world. DS needs to raise money I understand.
NC3 is very good. Probably I would have found a way to allow the “villain” to listen to the wife giving only a BJ to someone that night(e.g. the couple talking to each other in the pool, with the neighbor within reach to listen to them) instead of him presenting himself in the pool, but basically it worked and could be an interesting story. I’m almost hoping this one not having too much attention to have DS properly writing it.
PS the ring thing added from alpha to final ch25 is an example of funfiction. It could have some meaning in the hotel night. I has poor meaning that Sarah wears it in her home in Middletown.
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I appreciate the honest and thoughtful point of view. Would you say that you lost interest in the L/S dynamic once he took her to bed the first time, or was it once he started conditioning Sarah to like/love him emotionally? Please correct me if I'm wrong but it sounds like you would be cool with this story continuing forever if - every couple of chapters the focus was on Sarah having a new lover or experience, that you like the variety but with consistent story elements that run in the background.
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I can't speak for anyone else and can't comment on anything being said outside of this thread, but to me the ring isn't fanfiction, it's an element of realism that provides context to the story. The reason it was important is that it shows Sarah's character growth. It's a reminder to her and the readers and that she is changing. If it was a quick spank story or if that's all you wanted out of the story, I'd agree with you, it's meaningless. It's a small detail but an important one that makes it more akin to a novel, hence the reason it can be hotly contested and keeps readers coming back.
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I agree Sarah was the most detailed character of all his stories, TC was the first story I've read from DS and TA the second story and I always liked TA and I wondered why is that and I see that now in TC you get more character development from the husband instead from Brooke also I feel like Brooke don't have any hesitation she just goes with the flow Sarah does it too sometimes but at the beggining she just loved teasing her husband and being watched but in brooke she thinks that her husband likes all this and just goes with it, in TA the couple sat down and talked about this fetish that they just found but in TC there isn't anything like that
In NE everything feels like a exact copy of TA there is nothing to comment there
having the series transition into a bunch of epilogues where sarah brings new guys around to fuck and dan watches... that sounds great to me. it would be a big improvement over the snails pace he's moving the sarah/lester storyline along
Thank you for understanding my text, English is not my native language.
It means society as a whole, no one will understand that this is an agreement between a couple to have sex on the side, it is much easier to put a stigma, since most families (I hope so) live their lives and value the family.
Lester shares Sarah with Jessie on camera, it's a total disrespect to the partner you build your love with, this episode shows who Sarah really is to Lester and if her lover thinks she's a whore then who am I.....
In your opinion, does Lester think of Sarah as a whore or does he respect her in a more global interpretation than during sex talk?
so the couple has agreements that Sarah constantly and successfully violates, Lester uses this to break and turn Dan into a complete cuckold. I highly doubt this is what Dan wanted when he started his games with Sarah.
He must pay for his desires that got out of control.