Maybe we’ve had Chester/Lester meeting Amber in NC au14.
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I'd like to see Lester and Sarah meet at work, where Sarah asks Lester what he is expecting out of all of this. He says Dan's complete humiliation, where he not only loses Sarah but everything. Dan loses his jobs, his leased suv, and Lester kicks him out of the apartment, while Sarah watches on. He tells Sarah that her getting into that last night really charged him up and how he wishes Sarah would join him and help bring Dan to this end as it will break him completely and leave him, stronger than Dan, standing over his life -- his wreckage. She asks how Lester would want him to help ruin her husband, someone she loves and has promised her devotion to. She points out that there is a lot for her to lose with Dan's utter humiliation. Lester says, well first you could start wearing my ring and not Dan's anymore as a symbol for who she has chosen. She lays her hand on his desk and says, "Like this?" Lester gets hard as he sees the beautiful multi-karat diamond on her finger, where her marriage rings were last night as he fucked her on top of Dan's futon. Looking up he sees Sarah smiling a dazzling smile, with a hint of venom, while she nods to him. "First, we have to stop Dan from trying to take you down." She has so much to share with Lester before they leave work today, so many betrayals.
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I always wonder if they would be any crossover from Don’s various stories. It would make for some story arcs. The most obvious story is Toxic Attraction and Detestable Liaisons as the main baddies work together at the Lincoln Group and both lead female characters get seduced and railed. Also Archer name was brought up in Toxic Attraction by the CEO to Byron.
Judging by the fact that Sarah didn't have time to take Dan's ring from the apartment in Chicago, she can now have Lester's ring, unless Dan sent her a UPS,
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I think she put them in her suitcase (or purse?) when Lester told her to take them off. So, when Dan brought her suitcase down, her purse and wedding/engagement bands were in there. Would have been nice to see Dan remark on the ring Sarah WAS wearing when they met Dan in the apartment and downstairs to their conversation.
I may be wrong, but in TA24 she left Dan's wedding ring in the apartment and did not take it with her. maybe in the alpha version DS will mention the ring
No, you are correct, I just think that DS wrote, in chapter 24, that she stuck them in her suitcase or purse or something, leaving them in the apartment.
I've been following this story since the beginning, and I love the interaction between the characters, but seriously Lester should have stayed the fat nerdy guy and Dan should have quit his job a long time ago and moved back home. Maybe Lester could have lost everything and Dan/Sarah could have taken pity on him and bring him into their home. He then corrupted Sarah there.
Now we are getting wierd conspiracy and ridiculous hacks from that guy against a multibillion company. The plot is getting silly. I would have loved to see Lester's DND team screw Sarah, but we're so far past that point that it doesn't make any sense.
Now we are getting wierd conspiracy and ridiculous hacks from that guy against a multibillion company. The plot is getting silly. I would have loved to see Lester's DND team screw Sarah, but we're so far past that point that it doesn't make any sense.
I got the idea here that DS does not want to write about the ring yet, in order to take time. If 2 months pass and Dan notices it then it will be much more interesting, so maybe you should let it go for now
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I just gave an opinion, what he writes his up to him and his choice completely.
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As a writer it makes a lot of sense to use elements from a shared fictional universe - less brain sweat on your part to use background details that are already written. I think as a reader I'd prefer it was used in a limited fashion, but not sure because I haven't seen this writing device used a lot in erotica.
You should probably remove this, upload it onto a website and then post the link. This place doesnt allow links I think.
Fleshed out the ring stuff surprised but not shocked that she didn’t put dans back on, again the health of Lester has been touched on a few times now will he get ill and doesn’t this guy ever brush his teeth or use a mouthwash. One thing I know women absolutely hate is bad breath. Unless you get Sarah eating Cheetos too.
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Got y’all Well here is Chapter 25 to keep you company until the new year. I read over it quickly but found it enjoyable over the alpha. So enjoy and happ
The biggest thing addressed was Lester’s engagement ring and like how it played subliminally with Sarah at the end. Will it become a permanent fixture while she wears it in public and among her colleagues at the hospital? Don also did a better job expanding certain subject matter but unfortunately still unable to create pillow talk between Sarah and Lester. We are definitely seeing Sarah fall for Lester in more ways than one. She loves being desired by Lester even though slightly disappointed she may not get her multiple men fantasy. Sarah really goes Pavlov’s dog and salivates when she sees Lester’s cock, but Sarah also sees Lester as strong, supportive and now compatible mate in her life unlike her man child of a husband. Will she take part in Lester’s schemes to belittle and demean Dan now that she recognizes Dan as an obstacle to her enjoyment. Lastly, Dan is shown now being more clueless, weak ineffectual, and pathetic. He is doing everything slow and half assed from his job to his search of Lester so I wonder if Lizzie will make any difference to the story?
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The biggest thing addressed was Lester’s engagement ring and like how it played subliminally with Sarah at the end. Will it become a permanent fixture while she wears it in public and among her colleagues at the hospital? Don also did a better job expanding certain subject matter but unfortunately still unable to create pillow talk between Sarah and Lester. We are definitely seeing Sarah fall for Lester in more ways than one. She loves being desired by Lester even though slightly disappointed she may not get her multiple men fantasy. Sarah really goes Pavlov’s dog and salivates when she sees Lester’s cock, but Sarah also sees Lester as strong, supportive and now compatible mate in her life unlike her man child of a husband. Will she take part in Lester’s schemes to belittle and demean Dan now that she recognizes Dan as an obstacle to her enjoyment. Lastly, Dan is shown now being more clueless, weak ineffectual, and pathetic. He is doing everything slow and half assed from his job to his search of Lester so I wonder if Lizzie will make any difference to the story?
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You should take it down as I care about this thread and I don’t want it locked. Ask me how I know?
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Yeah makes you wonder if this is DS's out for a "happy ending". If Lester passes due to health issues, it's a convenient way for Sarah to settle for Dan, since her toy is no longer around.