Toxic Attraction DonSilver #Cuckold 8muses forum

[Verisimilinude]

I completely agree with the discussion issue. In fact, it is necessary for the public to be able to debate, give opinions, etc.

My point was that some people are not looking at the story as it is, but as they wanted it to be. I don't like some things either. In fact, some of these things really irritate me. However, the creator should have the freedom to do so. As long as he delivers a cohesive, well-crafted text that makes sense and is erotic, I am satisfied, and being surprised is one of the best parts. Another important point is, this story is about betrayal, even if many don't want to accept it, it's about a weak husband, a wife who was always willing and the "god" of sex who would make any woman go crazy for him... Here there is no longer a normal marriage, Sarah is no longer an ordinary wife, new desires were awakened within her and she will never be the same as before, and if Don tries to do this, I'm sure it will be a strange feeling for all readers, there is no going back, and given the latest events, things only tend to go further and further forward.

The topic isn't all that black & white - there's a host of grey in there as well. Agree completely the writer (DS) should have the freedom to write the story they want to. However quite a few on here believe that DS stopped writing the story his way and is pandering to his "paying" fans; writing what they want to see happen, adding unnecessary characters, etc. My personal opinion is that every story should be told the way it needs to be told, based on the characters and their motivations. For the most part that has occurred in TA, but as with many things in life - the craft part of the story has flaws and some inconsistencies. It's these things I think you are seeing discussed and mistaking them for disgruntlement of the story as a whole.

As for Sarah, I've only read a handful of comments which slut-shame her. This is going to happen in all walks of life, but I do not think it's the opinion that most of the people here have. I do always find it amusing that a person will see the tags on a story, read it, and get angry with the author and spout vitriol for writing that type of story. People with lunatic thoughts abound in the world and not much any of us can do to stop them. They have their opinion and I have mine. It's all good (as long as they aren't harming others).

 

[Nincum69str]

does anyone have chapters 21&22 please

 

[adamblack144]

does anyone have chapters 21&22 please

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[Oresttitos]

With each chapter of the story, Sarah despises and hates Dan more and more, while she begins to derive sadistic pleasure from it. Throughout the novel, she feels absolutely no sympathy for Dan or shame for her actions, the dark side of her is perfect.
A good solution for Sarah, with Lester's support, is to chemically castrate Dan, which will stop the production of testosterone and destroy potency, they work in a hospital and finding drugs should not be a problem.
The ideal solution is a drug that will paralyze him so that he cannot speak and only tears flow, plus possible lawsuits that will bring Lester money for his manipulations. For a while, this will take Sarah to a new level of pleasure in humiliating her husband.
In this case, we get a dark story with a good ending in which all interested parties get what they want:
- Lester has his own sex slave.
- Sarah has a master, a loving husband and a family.
- Dan opens up an opportunity to observe.
Dan is weak, he has neither the potential nor the resources to stand up to Sara and Lester.
He launched a process that he cannot cope with and must suffer punishment for confronting Lester, but it is important that Sarah is the deliberate instrument of punishment.
Be afraid of your desires, I think DS wants to convey to the readers in the end result.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

With each chapter of the story, Sarah despises and hates Dan more and more, while she begins to derive sadistic pleasure from it. Throughout the novel, she feels absolutely no sympathy for Dan or shame for her actions, the dark side of her is perfect.
A good solution for Sarah, with Lester's support, is to chemically castrate Dan, which will stop the production of testosterone and destroy potency, they work in a hospital and finding drugs should not be a problem.
The ideal solution is a drug that will paralyze him so that he cannot speak and only tears flow, plus possible lawsuits that will bring Lester money for his manipulations. For a while, this will take Sarah to a new level of pleasure in humiliating her husband.
In this case, we get a dark story with a good ending in which all interested parties get what they want:
- Lester has his own sex slave.
- Sarah has a master, a loving husband and a family.
- Dan opens up an opportunity to observe.
Dan is weak, he has neither the potential nor the resources to stand up to Sara and Lester.
He launched a process that he cannot cope with and must suffer punishment for confronting Lester, but it is important that Sarah is the deliberate instrument of punishment.
Be afraid of your desires, I think DS wants to convey to the readers in the end result.

I liked this idea far more than I should have. ;-}

 

[Verisimilinude]

With each chapter of the story, Sarah despises and hates Dan more and more, while she begins to derive sadistic pleasure from it. Throughout the novel, she feels absolutely no sympathy for Dan or shame for her actions, the dark side of her is perfect.
A good solution for Sarah, with Lester's support, is to chemically castrate Dan, which will stop the production of testosterone and destroy potency, they work in a hospital and finding drugs should not be a problem.
The ideal solution is a drug that will paralyze him so that he cannot speak and only tears flow, plus possible lawsuits that will bring Lester money for his manipulations. For a while, this will take Sarah to a new level of pleasure in humiliating her husband.

Be afraid of your desires, I think DS wants to convey to the readers in the end result.

I don't know, I think it's documented that in the beginning Sarah had remorse and felt guilt for how much pleasure she was getting and that it bothered her that Dan would be hurt. Obvi by this chapter we've seen her embrace darker tendencies and I can see her adopting some of Lester's desire to humiliate Dan, though I don't know if I'm convinced yet that she would be a full on Sadist at this stage.

What you're suggesting with chemicals would have the reverse effect - it would decrease Dan's fantasies, and arousal at watching Sarah or hearing about her sexcapades. This is Dan's weakness - and it would lower Sarah's ability to manipulate and control him.

 

[Verisimilinude]

So based on how the story has progressed, I'm curious what point we are at in the story. I think since the worm has turned for Sarah - this is likely the midway point and we are now working towards the end. What do you think?

 

[Oresttitos]

I don't know, I think it's documented that in the beginning Sarah had remorse and felt guilt for how much pleasure she was getting and that it bothered her that Dan would be hurt. Obvi by this chapter we've seen her embrace darker tendencies and I can see her adopting some of Lester's desire to humiliate Dan, though I don't know if I'm convinced yet that she would be a full on Sadist at this stage.

What you're suggesting with chemicals would have the reverse effect - it would decrease Dan's fantasies, and arousal at watching Sarah or hearing about her sexcapades. This is Dan's weakness - and it would lower Sarah's ability to manipulate and control him.

what I wrote takes place closer to the end of the novella.
I don't quite agree about the chemicals.
At this stage, Sarah no longer needs Dan, she has Lester as an aphrodisiac and a lover, for her it does not matter what sexual feelings he has, she does not consider him a partner in sex.
Dan prevents Sarah and Lester from making their dreams come true.
And now imagine what significance the sight of a castrated husband will have for Sarah, in whose view there is emptiness, hopelessness and the understanding that there is no way back for him.

 

[Sermex67]

Getting dark in here.

 

[Sermex67]

So based on how the story has progressed, I'm curious what point we are at in the story. I think since the worm has turned for Sarah - this is likely the midway point and we are now working towards the end. What do you think?

I hope so.

 

[Verisimilinude]

I don't quite agree about the chemicals.
At this stage, Sarah no longer needs Dan, she has Lester as an aphrodisiac and a lover, for her it does not matter what sexual feelings he has, she does not consider him a partner in sex.
Dan prevents Sarah and Lester from making their dreams come true.

I'll start by saying yes I'm aware TA is not real - it's a story - but one grounded by realism. Science indicates that this is a typical effect on a male who has been chemically castrated. When used on males, these drugs can reduce sex drive, sexual fantasies, and capacity for sexual arousal. So in this story Dan would no longer have any desire to see Sarah in these situations nor derive any pleasure from it - therefore it's logical to assume he would wake up, realize she's a lost cause, take his kids and leave her.

For Sarah it does matter - it has since chapter 1 - she enjoys toying with him and seeing the look of lust in his eyes. Throughout the story she's told you she likes the power of controlling both Lester's pleasure and Dan's desires. Yes, her desires have changed, to the point where she's now considering humiliating Dan and getting pleasure from it. But see above - Dan's left so now Sarah doesn't have anyone to control (she fights it but she's given in to Lester taking that power from her) and she has no one to humiliate. Game Over. Stories done at that point because there's no conflict.

Does he and how do we know what Sarah's dream is? We know she loves having sex with Lester, that she's becoming addicted to it, but none of us know what Sarah's forever dream is because Sarah (via DS) hasn't told us what that dream is. I would argue she doesn't even know what she wants at this stage of the story, based on her character as written.

Now if what you've laid out is how you want the story to turn out - all good, you do you. I think it's an unlikely ending but for your sake I hope you're right. Though some don't want to see this, I think Dan will be in the story to the bitter end - he'll either finally give up and become a reluctant cuck to who Sarah has become or he will die on a hill trying to "save" her from the twisted fantasy he started.

 

[Verisimilinude]

Getting dark in here.

Dark Deeds Done Dirt Deep

 

[Oresttitos]

I think it's an unlikely ending

Today was the 8th anniversary of her marriage to Dan and it was an incredible orgasm, probably the best since Dan passed away. Sarah's back was sliding across the wet granite, her knees were pressed against her flattened breasts, Lester was throbbing his incredible cock to the end, which made the sounds very loud in the silence of the night. Sarah long talked him into this fantasy, he was adamantly against it, until she promised to help him seduce her mother. Lester had a point to check whether the mother is as hot as the daughter or not. She looked down at her hand which was desperately trying to find a foothold on the slippery granite, today she was wearing Dan's engagement ring which surprised Lester even though he understood why she did it. A few drops fell on her face
- Otis, barked Lester, she understood what was happening, Otis peed on the flowers on Dan's grave that their girls planted, the irony of fate was that the twins were not his…. In Sarah's head images came out, a young and hot girl being at that party with alcohol and attractive men, what happened there and the amount of sperm that was in her, it's no wonder that twins were born and it's good that they at least didn't bark. She promised herself that it wouldn't happen again when she met Dan, but at that time the test showed that she was pregnant, he never realized after becoming a happy father that even Sarah didn't know who she was pregnant from. It was her secret that only Lester knew. She wanted to tell Dan about it when she and Lester returned from their "honeymoon trip", he talked her into humiliate with this Dan for good. Sarah was late Dan was lying breathless in his cell in the basement, she was terribly angry with him because she wanted to brag about her now quite noticeable pregnancy from Lester and tell about the twins. From the realization that Dan was gone, she became afraid of being exposed, and it was she who gave a double dose of the drug in order to have time to give Lester a "castrated Dan" as a gift for the first anniversary when he asked for her hand and heart in a Chicago restaurant. Sarah did it in secret from everyone and when she showed her "gift" Dan whispered weakly - I love you, Sarah brushed him off and kissed Lester. Shock and surprise were on his face, but in the depths of his eyes flashed fear and pride for the fact that he created this monster. . Lester accelerated his movement of the pelvis and these memories that flashed like a second brought Sarah to the edge of another orgasm. - I hate you Dan for leaving me!!! cried Sarah and she was covered by the strongest orgasm that she had ever had in her entire life, everything around was filled with incredible colors, feeling weightlessness, she seemed to see herself from above lying on Dan's grave with Lester in it. - I love you Dan, Sarah whispered, now she understood that she had reached the bottom of her fall and that it was Dan who, without being alive gave his unbearable torment and sincere love the best feeling that she would never feel again in her mutilated consciousness, one tear slowly rolled down her cheek, leaving a wet, salty trail …… The end

P.S. in general, I categorically cannot tolerate tragic endings or endings that humiliate a person and his dignity, after reading it, I come to my senses for a while and think about what can be changed to make everyone happy, I understand that there are people who get pleasure from humiliation, I don't understand it, but I accept it and I behave normally. Dan is not like that, he made a mistake by involving his beloved wife and the mother of his children in this and I really hope and pray that he will be able to correct this without critical consequences for his family. The question arises, why did I write the above text? I made the worst case scenario so that the actual ending of DS wouldn't kill me for a while. I'm a romantic for sure .

 

[MAKCUMKA3564]

Today was the 8th anniversary of her marriage to Dan and it was an incredible orgasm, probably the best since Dan passed away. Sarah's back was sliding across the wet granite, her knees were pressed against her flattened breasts, Lester was throbbing his incredible cock to the end, which made the sounds very loud in the silence of the night. Sarah long talked him into this fantasy, he was adamantly against it, until she promised to help him seduce her mother. Lester had a point to check whether the mother is as hot as the daughter or not. She looked down at her hand which was desperately trying to find a foothold on the slippery granite, today she was wearing Dan's engagement ring which surprised Lester even though he understood why she did it. A few drops fell on her face
- Otis, barked Lester, she understood what was happening, Otis peed on the flowers on Dan's grave that their girls planted, the irony of fate was that the twins were not his…. In Sarah's head images came out, a young and hot girl being at that party with alcohol and attractive men, what happened there and the amount of sperm that was in her, it's no wonder that twins were born and it's good that they at least didn't bark. She promised herself that it wouldn't happen again when she met Dan, but at that time the test showed that she was pregnant, he never realized after becoming a happy father that even Sarah didn't know who she was pregnant from. It was her secret that only Lester knew. She wanted to tell Dan about it when she and Lester returned from their "honeymoon trip", he talked her into humiliate with this Dan for good. Sarah was late Dan was lying breathless in his cell in the basement, she was terribly angry with him because she wanted to brag about her now quite noticeable pregnancy from Lester and tell about the twins. From the realization that Dan was gone, she became afraid of being exposed, and it was she who gave a double dose of the drug in order to have time to give Lester a "castrated Dan" as a gift for the first anniversary when he asked for her hand and heart in a Chicago restaurant. Sarah did it in secret from everyone and when she showed her "gift" Dan whispered weakly - I love you, Sarah brushed him off and kissed Lester. Shock and surprise were on his face, but in the depths of his eyes flashed fear and pride for the fact that he created this monster. . Lester accelerated his movement of the pelvis and these memories that flashed like a second brought Sarah to the edge of another orgasm. - I hate you Dan for leaving me!!! cried Sarah and she was covered by the strongest orgasm that she had ever had in her entire life, everything around was filled with incredible colors, feeling weightlessness, she seemed to see herself from above lying on Dan's grave with Lester in it. - I love you Dan, Sarah whispered, now she understood that she had reached the bottom of her fall and that it was Dan who, without being alive gave his unbearable torment and sincere love the best feeling that she would never feel again in her mutilated consciousness, one tear slowly rolled down her cheek, leaving a wet, salty trail …… The end

P.S. in general, I categorically cannot tolerate tragic endings or endings that humiliate a person and his dignity, after reading it, I come to my senses for a while and think about what can be changed to make everyone happy, I understand that there are people who get pleasure from humiliation, I don't understand it, but I accept it and I behave normally. Dan is not like that, he made a mistake by involving his beloved wife and the mother of his children in this and I really hope and pray that he will be able to correct this without critical consequences for his family. The question arises, why did I write the above text? I made the worst case scenario so that the actual ending of DS wouldn't kill me for a while. I'm a romantic for sure .

Working day at the hospital, Lester sends Sarah pictures of his big dick. Sarah gets wet instantly, her pussy demands attention, she runs to the bathroom to masturbate, and there she runs into Otis' replacement, ugly old Ben. Ben is a huge black guy, he was hired as a janitor almost immediately after he got out of prison. Sarah's pussy is itching terribly, and all these myths about big black cocks instantly fly through her head, she falls on her knees in front of Ben and grabs his crotch, pulls out his cock and oh my God! He's so huge, two, no, three times bigger than Lester's, and there's a halo above his head. Well, you know, it's just a divine miracle in the eyes of an excited young mother. Sarah immediately tries to shove this splendor down her throat, but poor Ben hasn't been with a woman for so long, he instantly cums in Sarah's mouth with a bucket of cum.. The young mother swallows everything in shock.. And of course he gets the greatest orgasm of his life.. Yes, yes, oh, those big black cocks! She doesn't know yet that her egg has already been fertilized. No wonder - a whole bucket of cum! And of course, nine months from now, Dan and Lester will get a surprise... The end! Well, very dark in my opinion...

 

[Ndbaelor]

I had something pop in my mind while reading the latest chapter: I wanna see a "Sarah goes rogue/solo" episode where she decides to have her own adventure , just for a night. No Dan ,No lester No jessebyronotisnednewboss. Just her. Maybe in a bar dealing with an European suitor wooing her Or all by herself in a strip club Or in a frat party surrounded by college studs Or in a studio54-esque place posing naked for an artist. Something like that, to let off some steam and test her sexual appetite. You can also add an plot B where Dan and Lester have to team up to find the disappeared Sarah, a sexual hide and seek, if you want.

What situations do you put Sarah in, outside the story parameters?!

 

[SmartMan]

I don't mean this in a critical way but some of these hopes and wishes for the direction of the story sound very similar to Don's most vocal paypigs. Not sure you'll get exactly what you're wanting but there's certainly like minded people in Don's patreon

 

[Verisimilinude]

I don't mean this in a critical way but some of these hopes and wishes for the direction of the story sound very similar to Don's most vocal paypigs. Not sure you'll get exactly what you're wanting but there's certainly like minded people in Don's patreon

You know I've always been curious about this behavior, or maybe closer to not understanding it. Let's say as an example that a paying fan gets the story they want. Why would you want to read it, clearly you already have the story in your head and how you want it to go. It's like reading a mystery and already knowing what occurs, why bother you know how it ends.

I'm personally reading the story because I want to know what happens. I don't want to know before I read it because I want to be surprised.

 

[Sermex67]

Amber meets Sarah at the hospital when she recognises Chester/lester.

 

[Verisimilinude]

Amber meets Sarah at the hospital when she recognizes Chester/lester.

LOL Is that a crossover Chapter and they swap?

 

[SmartMan]

You know I've always been curious about this behavior, or maybe closer to not understanding it. Let's say as an example that a paying fan gets the story they want. Why would you want to read it, clearly you already have the story in your head and how you want it to go. It's like reading a mystery and already knowing what occurs, why bother you know how it ends.

I'm personally reading the story because I want to know what happens. I don't want to know before I read it because I want to be surprised.

Have to agree that the unknown is oftentimes the most exciting part of a story. Don has taken influence from the readers in small ways (CPAP machine, ass eating) but I'm unsure how they will shape the story overall. He seems pretty level headed despite some of his fans being a bit nutty so I'm hoping he'll be able to follow his own story rather than others.