Verisimilinude
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- Nov 26, 2024
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I agree with you right up to this point. As for Dan, nah, until it's written otherwise, he'll sit in his corner feebly whimpering 'pineapple' in his head over and over as he watches Sarah fully embrace her sexual freedom. Unless we get the really unbelievable writing like in the final chapter of TC where Dan suddenly grows a pair of balls---develops all these unearned abilities, without any character development and rights all the wrongs that he forced on himself. I guess there would be one believable way that this could occur, he has a mental breakdown and then just goes on a homicidal rage driven killing spree.I don't think the story has lost any of its tension, on the contrary, I think we'll see a lot more tension, slander, intrigue, betrayal of trust and lots of hot sex in the next two or three chapters.
Sarah will probably stab Dan in the back, ‘because she's cock-driven!’...
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