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adamblack144 said:
Favorite scene: Basically all of chapter 16. I loved when she pretended to be his gf. Her being intimate with him in front of strangers was hot.

"Hey baby.” Sarah had stopped next to Lester, her breast just against his cheek. He turned when he felt her, and she leaned down, inserting her tongue into his mouth for a deep kiss. The room was quiet except for the breath from their mouths as they made out slowly. Dan’s stomach dropped hearing Sarah call Lester ‘baby.’ He watched the kiss in utter fascination. Sarah played her part well. Maybe too well. It really seemed like a sincere, if inappropriate, kiss. Dan’s dick agreed, suddenly coming to life. He could feel himself breathing in quick, shallow breaths. He closed his eyes and steadied himself, focusing on the mechanics of his breathing to calm himself down. After a few moments Greg made an awkward cough that seemed to remind Sarah and Lester that others were present."

I really hope we get more of this. We need more public intimacy between Lester and Sarah. Which is why I suggested a shopping spree for them.

It also has one of my favorite lines from Sarah.

"No,” She stared into his beady eyes, “That’s my cock. You understand? I’ll do what I want with it. You don’t touch it. Got it?”

Lester slowly nodded as Sarah eased herself off his hips, “That includes other women. No more Lizzie. No one else.” Sarah tugged at Lester’s sweatpants, pulling them and his boxers clean off quickly."

We need more Lizzie in the story. More jealousy and protectiveness from sarah. We got hints of it but Lizzie needs to be reintroduced to spark this and develop it

"Hearing Lester mention Lizzie being as hot as here kind of pissed her off. She made up her mind she was going to do this and do it well."


Least favorite: (chapter 22) When she fucked Byron. Awful scene and completely unnecessary. It began the theme of diluting the story from three people to a generic slut/cuck story.
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I agree. There are a lot of unnecessary scenes DS used to extend TA.
 
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adamblack144 said:
Favorite scene: Basically all of chapter 16. I loved when she pretended to be his gf. Her being intimate with him in front of strangers was hot.

"Hey baby.” Sarah had stopped next to Lester, her breast just against his cheek. He turned when he felt her, and she leaned down, inserting her tongue into his mouth for a deep kiss. The room was quiet except for the breath from their mouths as they made out slowly. Dan’s stomach dropped hearing Sarah call Lester ‘baby.’ He watched the kiss in utter fascination. Sarah played her part well. Maybe too well. It really seemed like a sincere, if inappropriate, kiss. Dan’s dick agreed, suddenly coming to life. He could feel himself breathing in quick, shallow breaths. He closed his eyes and steadied himself, focusing on the mechanics of his breathing to calm himself down. After a few moments Greg made an awkward cough that seemed to remind Sarah and Lester that others were present."

I really hope we get more of this. We need more public intimacy between Lester and Sarah. Which is why I suggested a shopping spree for them.

It also has one of my favorite lines from Sarah.

"No,” She stared into his beady eyes, “That’s my cock. You understand? I’ll do what I want with it. You don’t touch it. Got it?”

Lester slowly nodded as Sarah eased herself off his hips, “That includes other women. No more Lizzie. No one else.” Sarah tugged at Lester’s sweatpants, pulling them and his boxers clean off quickly."

We need more Lizzie in the story. More jealousy and protectiveness from sarah. We got hints of it but Lizzie needs to be reintroduced to spark this and develop it

"Hearing Lester mention Lizzie being as hot as here kind of pissed her off. She made up her mind she was going to do this and do it well."


Least favorite: (chapter 22) When she fucked Byron. Awful scene and completely unnecessary. It began the theme of diluting the story from three people to a generic slut/cuck story.
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Jesse whole existence is my least favorite thing. I will be forever a hater.
 
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Verisimilinude said:
What do you mean by regulars? Like sex regulars? I think that would be stretching believability a bit thin. I guess I could see a situation where, the parents get tipsy, stay overnight at the apartment and the mom catches Sarah and Lester going at it (ala Lizzie). Or if we learned that Sarah's parent's have been in the swing/hotwife lifestyle all along, unknown to Sarah, and things went from there. Those situations would have some realism to them that I could understand why they wouldn't be horrified by knowing that Sarah is with Lester.
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Nah I meant just regualrs .should have specified it

For passing commentary on the couple a 3rd person pov to know them better
 
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Verisimilinude said:
While we wait...

Thus far in the series:
What's your favorite scene and your least favorite scene?

Ch14- Sarah in her wedding dress, biting her lip and admitting to Dan the condom broke.
And least favorite any solo scene with Dan.
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Post ch 18 i really liked Sarah giving Lester a rimjob

It was written well showing how much Sarah has fundamentally changed since the story began

She doesn't even wash her mouth afterwards .

And Lester rematking that her mouth tastes like his ass

Only thing lackluster was Dans reaction
 
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Guys, who can help me by sharing Antarctica77's stories?
My neighbor (14 - 15 - 16)
Lisa's Co-Worker (4 - 5)
Thanks guys for your attention. Who can help or update the kemono? Thanks. . .
 
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Unfortunately, the ending was a bit complicated, right? I didn't like that Emily didn't talk about the changes in Jhon's wife's work environment, or take pictures of her as she is in the work environment. It would be cool to redo some parts and make a final part. A part where Jhon calls his wife and Tony doesn't allow her to answer her husband and she obeys. Also, the ending should have had a conversation with the wife asking Tony to leave his son with her, all that dirty talk. Jhon should have taken off his ring saying that it was all over. (Jhon hears all the dirty talk coming from the second floor, his wife telling her lover to get her pregnant), he goes up and sees Tony cumming in his wife's vagina, Jhon stands there for a few minutes, Tony gives a mischievous smile and says, "See, you not answering his messages made him show up", he pulls Jhon's wife into the bathroom and slams the door, you pervert, give us some privacy, the couple bursts out laughing. Jhon starts packing his bags realizing that it's all over.... When he finishes packing, Tony says that her husband must be masturbating listening to them both. Loise tells Tony not to be so mean and to add Jhon. To Luise's surprise, when the door opens, she sees the rest of her husband's clothes in 2 large bags and 2 suitcases. Jhon is leaving. Loise comes after him asking, and when he finishes going down the stairs with everything he owns, he takes a brown envelope and a wedding ring out of his pocket and says he's going to France. It ends with the police arriving...
 
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Verisimilinude said:
People will always find a way to get their fix. Regardless of what the politicians say in public they have the same urges the rest of us do.
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Pornhub is the 10th most visited website in the world, Xvideo is most visited porn site in the world the porn industry allegedly has a turnover of 97billion compare that to NFL 16 billion or the NBA 20 billion that’s also a bigger turnover than the whole of Hollywood and some fool wants to end it , wishful thinking.
 
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