The story's heading where the patreons want it to goIt's been a while since I post some things but where do y'all think this story is heading plus what's y'all fav chapter mine was chapter 7 the first sex scene and I think it was chapter 17 when he fucked her in the office and the broke the desk
Idk I'm still curious what DS means by his saying it would have a dark ending. I mean in TC, he went to the extreme in revenge and that couple hadn't endured anywhere near the amount of stuff that Sarah and Dan have.But my heart says it will only become interesting from here
Open betrayal ,hardcore cuckolding , humiliation and misery
It's so annoying that racism plays a big part of this kink. So many potentially good stories are ruined by objectifying and stereotyping Black people etc.
You raise a thoughtful question, Adam: Should author's write in such a way, to invite the reader to imagine freely, leaving space for personal interpretation or customization, rather than defining every detail—including a character’s background or appearance? Is that even possible and still tell a coherent story?Yeah it's a shame. I wish we had good interracial erotica. It's like writers can't include black men without making it racist and weird
IDK I think DS has put Dan on the train of pain and humiliation. I can't see the next chapter without there being some type of involvement by the Parents -- either thru openly catching Sarah and Lester in the act or spying on them in some fashion.Predictions for next chapter?
The chapter will start with her parents coming to the apartment early while shes still in bed with lester. Shell rush out and then host them for dinner/lunch. Lester will be pestering her throughout the day and she'll be fending him off. Then her parents will offer to stay at a hotel and Sarah will fuck Lester for the night.
I really enjoyed the intimate moment with her and Lester in the last chapter and hope we get more
It's about racist stereotypes, ie Black men super masculine and white men humiliated etc. It's perpetuating something lame and is boring on top of it. It's like if people always wrote Blonde women as stupid, the prejudice makes a bad story/character. I want more variety not less. Just be creative and not dehumanizing.You raise a thoughtful question, Adam: Should author's write in such a way, to invite the reader to imagine freely, leaving space for personal interpretation or customization, rather than defining every detail—including a character’s background or appearance? Is that even possible and still tell a coherent story?
I don't have answers but as a writer I am curious what readers think on the subject.
On a side note I found this particular story, the main character being a black man, to be well crafted and entertaining.
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I'm fine with intimate and detailed descriptions. My issue is that the sex scenes in the stories always have to mention his cock as black 10 times. The guy is always fit and masculine. They always fit into a narrow category. "White woman defiled by black guy while loser white partner is helpless"You raise a thoughtful question, Adam: Should author's write in such a way, to invite the reader to imagine freely, leaving space for personal interpretation or customization, rather than defining every detail—including a character’s background or appearance? Is that even possible and still tell a coherent story?
I don't have answers but as a writer I am curious what readers think on the subject.
On a side note I found this particular story, the main character being a black man, to be well crafted and entertaining.
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I'm fine with intimate and detailed descriptions. My issue is that the sex scenes in the stories always have to mention his cock as black 10 times. The guy is always fit and masculine. They always fit into a narrow category. "White woman defiled by black guy while loser white partner is helpless"
The reason I love this story is its unique premise. A fat middle aged guy who's repulsive who nonetheless bags an attractive woman. It's not the typical cuckold narrative. I think interracial erotica needs more diversity in its narratives/characters
Thanks for that.For anyone waiting for Antarctica77 updates, his Kemono finally got updated. I believe it now has all his releases up to the 2nd of May.
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Hmm but the husband there was innocent unlike DanIdk I'm still curious what DS means by his saying it would have a dark ending. I mean in TC, he went to the extreme in revenge and that couple hadn't endured anywhere near the amount of stuff that Sarah and Dan have.
Personally I like such scenarios better they are far more personal than office sex or video tapingLOL I could see a scenario where she offers to let her parents stay in Dan's room, that she will sleep on the couch, but then in the middle of the night sneak into Lester's bed. Meanwhile either the mom or dad wonder's why there is a hole in the wall and gets a peep show of their daughter being a freak in the sheets.
The chapter will start with her parents coming to the apartment early while shes still in bed with lester. Shell rush out and then host them for dinner/lunch. Lester will be pestering her throughout the day and she'll be fending him off. Then her parents will offer to stay at a hotel and Sarah will fuck Lester for the night.
Lol all fun scenarios that I would love to see! If I have to poke some holes, Dan and Sarah's initial trip to Chicago did not involve apartment at all. They were gonna make a quick pit stop, grab some stuff and go some place else. So I would assume they would've made plans with her parents making sure they don't go to the apartment and interact with Lester at all. Unless, of course Lester finds a way.LOL I could see a scenario where she offers to let her parents stay in Dan's room, that she will sleep on the couch, but then in the middle of the night sneak into Lester's bed. Meanwhile either the mom or dad wonder's why there is a hole in the wall and gets a peep show of their daughter being a freak in the sheets.
That was fast! Thanks, George!My turn to pay it forward
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