Toxic Attraction DonSilver #Cuckold 8muses forum
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I get what you are saying but think that her standing up for Lester right then would also be about her taking responsibility. She's already mad at Dan and she has mentioned that he started all of this. I really don't think that it would have harmed her marriage or her love to do so. Some of the most intense arguments happen between two people who are married as they are passionate about their marriage, so the arguments tend to be passionate.
I know that, I'm looking for it seeing if anyone can share it.
Chapter 32 alpha made it seem like don was finally moving things along,but the ending just felt like he was going to continue with his 1 step forward,2 steps backward approach, which has been going on since chapter 23-24.
Earlier in the story, Jesse was a character that Dan loathed, someone that was out of bounds as far as Sarah was concerned. When Lester got Dan arrested and got Sarah to sleep with Jesse, it felt like shit was about to hit the fan, but it didn't.
Then came Otis , an unnecessary character in my opinion, but at least Lester used him to get Sarah fired from the hospital, which seemed like another pivotal moment. Chapter 32 played out that way, and it seemed like Don was finally moving things along. But the Lester showing dick pics to Sarah's mother, and the ending which implied that Sarah would sleep with Richard in order to save her job just rendered the entire Otis thing pointless.
At this point, I'm not sure how far things will drag along. I think don has 2 types of paying customers, there are those who want to see Sarah fuck the whole world, and then there's people like me, who want the story to focus on the original three characters. Right now Don's trying to keep both groups satisfied, which is why we keep seeing this 1 step forward, 2 steps backward approach.
Earlier in the story, Jesse was a character that Dan loathed, someone that was out of bounds as far as Sarah was concerned. When Lester got Dan arrested and got Sarah to sleep with Jesse, it felt like shit was about to hit the fan, but it didn't.
Then came Otis , an unnecessary character in my opinion, but at least Lester used him to get Sarah fired from the hospital, which seemed like another pivotal moment. Chapter 32 played out that way, and it seemed like Don was finally moving things along. But the Lester showing dick pics to Sarah's mother, and the ending which implied that Sarah would sleep with Richard in order to save her job just rendered the entire Otis thing pointless.
At this point, I'm not sure how far things will drag along. I think don has 2 types of paying customers, there are those who want to see Sarah fuck the whole world, and then there's people like me, who want the story to focus on the original three characters. Right now Don's trying to keep both groups satisfied, which is why we keep seeing this 1 step forward, 2 steps backward approach.
Toxic Attraction 31 (Alternate Universe)
Hi everyone, this is Writerinabox. I have been following the crazy journey of Dan and Sarah like all of you and admire Don Silver’s work. I just got a crazy idea after reading chapter 30. Just want to let you guys know, I do not intend to write any further chapters; this just seemed like a fun plot line to explore, and all of you might enjoy it. I might not get permission to publish this anywhere else. So, I’m only posting this here. Feel free to share it with anyone or anywhere you think might enjoy reading it. Please do share your thoughts and comments below. Would love to hear your feedback. (writerinabox72@gmail.com) I wrote an alternate universe plot for Neighbour Chronicles in Literotica. Do check it out. Cheers!!
Hi everyone, this is Writerinabox. I have been following the crazy journey of Dan and Sarah like all of you and admire Don Silver’s work. I just got a crazy idea after reading chapter 30. Just want to let you guys know, I do not intend to write any further chapters; this just seemed like a fun plot line to explore, and all of you might enjoy it. I might not get permission to publish this anywhere else. So, I’m only posting this here. Feel free to share it with anyone or anywhere you think might enjoy reading it. Please do share your thoughts and comments below. Would love to hear your feedback. (writerinabox72@gmail.com) I wrote an alternate universe plot for Neighbour Chronicles in Literotica. Do check it out. Cheers!!
Although well written, the only thing I didn't get is why halfway through the parents names changed? From Jack and Renee to Bill and Amber was it? Otherwise the concept of Tricia finding out Dan is a cuck was interesting, I'm of complete belief that Tricia is who Dan ends up with after everything with Sarah blows up which is why she was introduced, so having this twist in your story is interesting.
It was a crossover that ties it to another story. Making the parents the characters from another story rather than randos.
Ah it confused me, because they had mentioned Sarah, Dan, and Lester as if they were their family etc. if it was meant as a crossover thing then that's okay.
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So ran across a new one. Haven't finished it but it's interesting.
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Very nice twist to the original plot. Please do write continuation of this story.
Your NEIGHBOUR CHRONICLES AU series is favourite on literotica. Keep writing more such works.
I disagree,I like how you describe sex scenes,better then any other author.U should continue writing whatever u feel is the best.Big fan here.
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My first thought was we get the moms thoughts for the picture since she was still looking at it when the daughter got home, or we get a dan and Sarah sex scene at the very end, where Sarah compares lester and Dan or something along those lines.
Idk just what I assumed we would get based off the contents of the insider.