For those who wanted to read Chapter 7 of EW's Undercover Blonde, it is available on his website eddiewilder.com.
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It's already posted on this page just a few days ago I think. Just scroll up a little mate.
So inspite of the story going completely off the rails/writers suicide...what about cronos..the one entity/person who isn't afraid to throw down with Lester...has more power and influence apparently..DS can bring his readers back if he concentrates on Lester,Sarah and Dan..brining cronos in would add intrigue and a little mystery...he already went off topic by including alot of useless characters ie:her and the cleaner in the staff room...you've gone off course already just make it a cuck/mystery/voyeur/exhibitionist/ and the list goes on..
And Isn't the cleaner black/dark skinned...she told the guy In the gloryhole she's played with one but never had one in her...correct me if om wrong..
I stopped reading this story in chapter 2 because I felt it was going to take a predictable turn that I didn't like. And reading the last few pages, I see that I was right.
Absolutely she has. It was a pretty big plot point - she was caught fucking the janitor, had to beg for her job while the old man's cum was leaking out of her, and HR still fired her.
The story has little continuity. It's much like how it's a pregnancy risk, no it isn't, yes it is, and on and on.
Thanks so much for sharing! I've been waiting on this one forever. I expect that I'm going to be disappointed, given how far the story has gotten into the weeds, but at least I'll have closure.
Judging from where the chapter ends, there might be more of Renee shenanigans... I wouldn't expect it getting any better.
Predictability aside it was a good story with some hot scenes and corruption. Didn't drag it out for over 30+ chapters. The conclusion wasn't predictable to me at all.
Does anyone have the last (I believe) chapter of Newlywed's New Desires by Mad Stories? It would be chapter 22 I think.
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Anyone have Kayley and Sam (Descending into Depravity) by Eve St. Albert
Her Kemono hasn't been updated in a while.
Her Kemono hasn't been updated in a while.
I would be interested in reading what would make people happy, if possible, with future chapters of TA? For me personally, I wouldn't mind a couple of chapters of little or no sex and more on the Cronos getting into Lester's files, or Lincoln Group narrowing down who hacked them, or even the Sentienal/Tricia storyline where they are helping Dan uncover Lester's line of work. When these are brought up in past chapters, it is only a couple of paragraphs. I also wouldn't mind some indication of the story ending, but that may be asking too much.
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I didn't like it very much. Destroying the wedding dress, her not getting pregnant by Mark proves she never loved him. Calling him a faggot... I didn't like that either. Mark needs to separate and find a better wife. When "I love you" starts, the marriage is already over because you'll never be rescued or remembered; you'll be the bill payer, the friend always left behind. This type of relationship can have these problems; not everything is perfect. Here in Brazil, they did a story about separation, a collective separation, with the judge on duty for it and talking about the reasons of some. It can go even worse when the man doesn't participate, when the feeling of possession is humiliating. The man can have surgery to make his penis bigger and longer. A way for Dan to be superior to Lester.
Not about happy
Just realism
It's become too far fetched
Good premise at the start
Just stop being drivin by weak cuck wannabes who give you money
So I know my request is ignored as I won't fund him
Are you talking about Otis? He's white, he's Burt's cousin from Neighbourhood Encounter. When Sarah says she's already played with a black guy, she's talking about one of the guys she sucked off in the porn cinema where Lester took her.