VN Ren'Py ToxiCity [v0.03] [ILSProductions]

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erkper

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May 16, 2018
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Fair enough, main criticism from TID was:
  • Too many LIs, i.e., quantity over quality
    • Other than one character that was relegated as a side character, no history with the MC, so dev had to introduce them all to MC and us the audience which dragged on. With N&T, a bunch of the LIs had history with the MC making relationship building easier. I.e., less porn logic leaps.
  • Given the premise, the story was a non-stop trauma dump
  • The sex scenes seemed like the standard animations and were repetitive across LIs
  • The endings were pretty bad and threw a lot of the narrative progress out the window
I just started playing today, and haven't finished, but so far focusing on two LI's and making this a more straightforward narrative is a good move. I hope they limit it to 5-6 total main LIs or less and don't shift back to the Choose Your Adventure selection style like TID. That style combined with the number of LIs adds a lot more variable tracking which increases coding and story complexity.

I'm not a fan of the relationship setup, so far, but it's still really early -- i.e., the fact that the MC has no real history with either LI other than occasionally talking to them at work makes them the same as strangers. This means the dev has to work a lot harder at relationship build-up and this time they can't hand waive it away with Interim Archon Magic™. But, since there are less LIs, there is more time to do this.

Iirc this is the first time ILS has netori LIs, I don't remember any in N&T (pretty sure any LI husbands or boyfriends were dead) and in TID all of the LIs are uninvolved and if they had partners, they'd be shades. So, the dev has to figure out how to advance the relationships when the LIs partners may be alive and the LIs seem to have a positive relationship with their partners. Also, the MC doesn't seem like the morally ambiguous scumbag type to facilitate 'stealing' the LIs.
I mean, technically Alice's husband/Naomi's dad was only presumed dead, but your netori comment is valid and that will be something to watch. Though I wouldn't call Laura's relationship with her partner very positive from what we find out in this last episode.
 

romo-ice

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Sep 11, 2019
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I mean, technically Alice's husband/Naomi's dad was only presumed dead, but your netori comment is valid and that will be something to watch. Though I wouldn't call Laura's relationship with her partner very positive from what we find out in this last episode.
Yeah, right after I wrote my comment, I started playing again and the game started dropping hints and I've played to the end of chapter 3. So I know she claims he's been cheating on her. At the least they're suffering from a dead bedroom.. There's generally only a handful of ways I've seen a 'good' mc get an LI in a relationship, first is the LI's partner is a shitty person, second, the partner leaves the picture (e.g., breaks up, death, etc), which makes it no longer netori, which would be fine for this game since it's not the focus. All other scenarios requires a 'bad' or morally ambiguous MC, e.g., he steals her (via coercion, blackmail, etc.) or the LI is 'bad' or morally ambiguous and doesn't care about cheating.

Not sure how Kallie is going to be handled, though.
 

Draver1

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Feb 17, 2021
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OK, this is more like it. I loved Now & Then. Hell, I started supporting them on Patreon because of that game. I lasted maybe 4 updates into the next one. I just couldn't get into it. I'll wait a few more updates before resubbing, but it's looking good so far.
 

romo-ice

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Sep 11, 2019
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I know we are in the dark about the total number of future LI's but I'm guessing that there are at least 6 based on this image the dev published for 2025:

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As closely as I can tell - the images of Kallie and Laura include side profiles - but I could be wrong.

Given the way the story is playing out right now:

With repeated commentary about the new 'home' being temporary - a place to stay for a few days, I think we will encounter our next woman or pair of women as part of the next move to a new, temporary home.

Wondering about adding to our group of survivors, coupled with the news at the end of the episode, makes it hard to wait for the next release but, with a wait of < 28 days now, this won't be a long wait. :)

Cheers!! :coffee:
They look like the college party girls MC encounters at the convenience store.
 

mordred93

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Jul 21, 2017
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Using an elevator in a building that wasn't necessarily being maintained properly leading up to the stories events... seems unwise haha. Imagine all 3 of them using it at once and getting stuck? XD no one's coming to help!
I am not sure what you mean by that. The building was recently abandoned due to the fog. Like literally a week before it was a fully functional building. Most elevators won't go bad in that short of a period of time.
 

jadepaladin

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Mar 9, 2020
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I am not sure what you mean by that. The building was recently abandoned due to the fog. Like literally a week before it was a fully functional building. Most elevators won't go bad in that short of a period of time.
I suppose one could connect the fog damaging the electrical parts of the elevator to what's going on with the cars outside. That said, the cars are out in the thick of it, and the elevator is in a building so it would take considerably longer to be affected, if it's the electronics being affected at all (going off the fact the cars won't start being connected to battery trouble).

I can't say I'd take the elevator in this scenario either.
 

kazeiheikaya

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Apr 1, 2024
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Man I'm so happy to see this got an update already.
The cliffhanger had me begging for a new release asap from last release.
 
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