VN Ren'Py Tragic Elf Life [v0.05 Rework D4-Xmas ] [StraponCookie]

[nhnf85]

You bodysnatch a hospitalized man who has 2 daughters and a sister and a niece. they will be part of your harem.
well, I say man but it is actually an artificial humonculus with an AI that was designed from the moment of its birth to be bodysnatched one day.

That sounds stupid. Can we even call it incest at that point?

 

[Sossse]

That sounds stupid. Can we even call it incest at that point?

from a biologial standpoint it´s 100% incest

 

[nhnf85]

from a biologial standpoint it´s 100% incest

Only if the humonculus was made by using the MC's DNA, otherwise it feels like stepcest at best

 

[harem.king]

Only if the humonculus was made by using the MC's DNA, otherwise it feels like stepcest at best

The MC DNA changed. He snatched a body in another world, meaning he shed his old DNA and accepted new DNA.
If he impregnates his daughters, DNA tests will show this incest.

That said, I am not a fan of such DNA changes. You are basically perma-cucked, as your balls now produce someone else's semen.

 

[nhnf85]

The MC DNA changed. He snatched a body in another world, meaning he shed his old DNA and accepted new DNA.
If he impregnates his daughters, DNA tests will show this incest.

That said, I am not a fan of such DNA changes. You are basically perma-cucked, as your balls now produce someone else's semen.

Again it sounds stupid.

 

[Shipfan66]

Again it sounds stupid.

Rather rude to come in a thread and call someone else's work "stupid." If you don't like it, don't play. Feel free to do better yourself, if you can. Either way, kindly leave the toxicity somewhere else.

 

[StraponCookie]

Links Updatet
(exept datanodes links) , Patchfile got a missing line that caused the error with the callings.
(Still needed to download full game, because with only the patch files the translation would be missing)

If you run into other errors pls let me know.

Allongside fixed the issue with the missing render (until day 4) and a sound error and some typo/grammar corrections.

That said, I am not a fan of such DNA changes. You are basically perma-cucked, as your balls now produce someone else's semen.

I get yout point, but trough isekai there are not many ways to get the mc his own DNA into the other world.
Other ways i had in mind would be:

- Transfer him as single into that world (would missing the whole winzest or needed a build up from scratch)
- Give him a child body and let him grow (same issue as above)
- Replace the homunculi completely with the MC (Didn´t felt right, because because such a change would be perfect for an error in the system of natural laws even with magic involved - I mean the mc is allready an anomaly in that world)


How would you solve this problem?
I'm curious what you're gonna say.

 

[nhnf85]

How would you solve this problem?
I'm curious what you're gonna say.

As someone who watched lots of isekais, I know there are different ways the reincarnation is done; the most used are either a simple body transfer to the new world with all his memories or reborn as a baby.

The reborn as a baby has two subcategories: either the MC has his memories from the start, or he regains them later; sometimes the god/gods that are responsible for his reincarnation didn't intend for him to keep his memories, but he regained them anyway.

I haven't played the game, so I don't know if there is a short part of the game in the original world or not, but reincarnate him as a baby with his memories suppressed, then have him regain his previous memories at the start of the isekai part of the game.

 

[harem.king]

I get yout point, but trough isekai there are not many ways to get the mc his own DNA into the other world.
Other ways i had in mind would be:

- Transfer him as single into that world (would missing the whole winzest or needed a build up from scratch)
- Give him a child body and let him grow (same issue as above)
- Replace the homunculi completely with the MC (Didn´t felt right, because because such a change would be perfect for an error in the system of natural laws even with magic involved - I mean the mc is allready an anomaly in that world)


How would you solve this problem?
I'm curious what you're gonna say.

Personally I would prefer real body coming through a portal and just deal with the lack of incest.
Reincarnate as a baby is an improvement too, but still not as good as real body through a portal.

To be frank the incest here feels fake.
I am being shown a pure elf and a catgirl and told "these are your biological daughters" and it simply fails suspension of disbelief.
suspension of disbelief is utterly critical for one to be immersed in a story.

This thing where you bodysnatch their father is honestly the worst form of incest, you get the biological negatives, yet the girls are not actually in any way really related to you. I don't think people fetishize the birth defects, in fact incest fetish tends to pretend those don't exist. The fetish is either the taboo, or the emotional connection with a family member being expanded into a sexual relationship.

Actually I do have an idea specifically for how I would do it in this game:
1. MC gets summoned next to a fresh corpse (either portal or summoning circle). ideally one that died naturally on his own.
2. Goddess or a group of priestess of the goddess who summoned you takes the fresh corpse and melts it into a magic tattoo of identity theft. (will you place it on the pelvis? balls? heart? hand?)

Also on top of all this mess, we also have the goddess in this story modifying the humonculus' balls so all your children would be nonhumans.
which to be honest is a really bad idea.

Any human with a functioning pair of eyes will BELIEVE the MC is a cuck, as all his "children" have 0 human blood.
They won't know about the "blessing" from the goddess of siring nonhumans.
Being seen as a cuck will VASTLY undermines his political message for racial equality.
Why debate morality when you can just attack the messenger and dismiss all his equality talk as him having a sexual fetish for being a cuck.

MC impregnating a couple of girls with nonhuman children is frankly going to be utterly trivial. it won't matter for numbers and numbers do not matter.

The actual most logical path towards nonhuman rights is via a political party that pushes for legislation to broaden the definition of a human.
start with applying human rights to those who are 3/4th human. "Practically a human already".
Then start pushing to broaden the definition of human (and thus human rights) to 1/2 humans.
then once that gets passed, start pushing for 1/4th humans...
eventually going for "1 drop of human blood is enough". If you have any human ancestry, no matter how far removed... you get human rights.
Only then finally the final push would be for full blooded nonhumans.

While doing that you try to enlist any human who has a 1/2 elf sibling or child due to the sex slavery practices.
> "A human should not have to own his own children like property, and raise them knowing that one day they will be taken away from him to be sold as slaves"
or something like that. honestly might skip over the 3/4th human step and go straight for the half elves (or better)

In parallel, once you have reached the 1/2 humans having human rights, you can start pushing for the pure elves who are the mothers of "legal humans" (aka mother of 1/2 humans) to receive human rights too.

You can then start seeing pure elves owning pure elves. various ways to enact gradual change.

 

[AdventurerLazy]

This is gonna be embarassing to say but i don't know how to get the Patches to work, i extracted it into the game folder, clicked setup but it still calls them Roommates
What do i do?

 

[harem.king]

This is gonna be embarassing to say but i don't know how to get the Patches to work, i extracted it into the game folder, clicked setup but it still calls them Roommates
What do i do?

by game folder you mean "the folder containing the game" or do you mean "the folder named game"

also did you redownload it? IIRC there is a new patch now.

 

[AdventurerLazy]

by game folder you mean "the folder containing the game" or do you mean "the folder named game"

also did you redownload it? IIRC there is a new patch now.

The folder containing the game

 

[AdventurerLazy]

Also i keep trying to get the Patches setup to work but every time i do it, it keeps getting flagged as a trojan

 

[harem.king]

The folder containing the game

Then you put it in the wrong folder or misunderstood the question.
it needs to inside the folder named "game" which is itself found inside the "game folder"
eg:

c:\games\tragic elf life\tragic elf life v0.0.5\game\patch.rpy

there.

 

[MikeyUK]

Also i keep trying to get the Patches setup to work but every time i do it, it keeps getting flagged as a trojan

I also tried to download but kept getting flagged as a trojan, even after changing name to be more readable. First attempt to extract resulted in WinRAR stating it couldn't open the file due to characters present.

 

[colobancuz]

Also i keep trying to get the Patches setup to work but every time i do it, it keeps getting flagged as a trojan

I also tried to download but kept getting flagged as a trojan, even after changing name to be more readable. First attempt to extract resulted in WinRAR stating it couldn't open the file due to characters present.

I don't know what you are downloading and where, but I downloaded a file called 0.5-Patches.rar, which is 398 bytes in size (SHA-256:8af20433f39a5cee017511c2b450e69f9e9c30bc2bf8200294b100b700319dc2)

You must be registered to see the links

. I unzipped it with 7zip without any problems - two files, flower.rpy and love.rpy.

 

[bigboxbarry]

has to be the most convoluted way to download patches i have ever seen. how hard is it to make it available to gofile or something. what a joke

 

[capt21]

Nice, can't wait to play the update

 

[Shipfan66]

has to be the most convoluted way to download patches i have ever seen. how hard is it to make it available to gofile or something. what a joke

I wouldn't consider it a "joke" at all, but I will mention the request to him. I use gofile alot myself, as well as Pixeldrain. Mega, sadly, is no longer an option. The patches as uploaded are safe and functional -- I know because when I proofread i do so with the patches in. Otherwise we'd never know if there *was* something wrong with them.

 

[Shipfan66]

Also i keep trying to get the Patches setup to work but every time i do it, it keeps getting flagged as a trojan

...what "setup...?" It's two tiny files, you jsut download and unzip them into the Game folder inside the Tragic Elf Life directory. There is no setup.