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[Translation Request] Big Breasts Party NTR'

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dinglers

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There are still locked memories in the room even after unlocking them all. Anyone knows what those are. Playing on version 1.1
 

dinglers

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Is there no fix for the black screen bug after the plant monster. Im on version 1.1. If so can someone give me a save after this encounter?
 

fraazx

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So.....what a day man.
How can I say it.....this is just trash

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Wasted designs (We got robbed, the Kouhai got discarded)

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Just look at this guys, what a wasted design

IT´S A FUCKING BBC LOOKALIKE, it´s basically the same but with ninjas. (If u didn´t want to finish the REDACTED doujin, why are u doing a sloppy version?)

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And the last and worst thing of this piece of trash, it will has the worst reading format ever created, the one that ero kojikis uses.

武田弘光 今回は実験的に右側に文章描くスタイル
(Takeda Hiromitsu This time I'm experimenting with a style where the text is written on the right side)

Anon エロ乞食さん
(Anon Ero-kojiki's style right?)

武田弘光 それだと読みづらい・・・かなぁ ただ文章は結構いれやすいんですよね、あまり絵に合わせて文章やらなくていいし
(Takeda Hiromitsu That makes it hard to read... I guess. But it's pretty easy to add text, and you don't have to match the text to the picture.)

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Even Layer Kanojo and Mira are masterpieces compared to this shit that hasn´t even been released yet
An absolute 0/10, prolly his worst SS so far.


Won´t be sharing anything related to this (Prolly only her corrupted form, if she has one lol), so wait till the release I guess.

Psdt: I guess this is the consequence of being obligated to deliver smt and having less than week to do it.....actually I hope it´s just that.
Oh god why this format?! Like sure it's easier to put in text like Takeda said and all, but hot damn it's boring as hell to read, especially when it will be just the usual shit of NTR logic "Big Dick wins!". A few more reasons - 1, the scenes would feel stale instead of lively. 2, you will have to move your eyes away from the scene, taking up precious wanking time. Lastly, 3, it's ugly format. You got this big ass black screen next to the good stuff, aka ruining everything.
 

GriseoBreeder

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Oh god why this format?! Like sure it's easier to put in text like Takeda said and all, but hot damn it's boring as hell to read, especially when it will be just the usual shit of NTR logic "Big Dick wins!". A few more reasons - 1, the scenes would feel stale instead of lively. 2, you will have to move your eyes away from the scene, taking up precious wanking time. Lastly, 3, it's ugly format. You got this big ass black screen next to the good stuff, aka ruining everything.
He said he´s just ¨experinmenting¨ so I hope this is the last time he does this.

The art is gonna carry so hard as usual.
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GriseoBreeder

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So...I said wasn´t gonna share anything related to this but the high school girl cosplay awakened smt in me. (And I stated I wanted to share her corrupted form)

With this we conclude the FIRST HALF (Yes, first half, it´s not a SS anymore) with 10 pages (From 4 to 5, then 6, 7 and 10 lol)
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This is the Cuck POV, he said he´s gonna draw Kureha´s POV (The Kunoichi girl name is Hinokawa Kureha) so we can already see he plans to add 10 pages more at least.

Here are some rough sketches we could save
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According to what we could see, it´s look like Kureha is a slut from the start in this POV (There´s the JK cosplay btw, reminds me to the discarded kouhai design)


Also, this has to be one of the best asses Tkd has ever drawn
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We should have suspected she was a cheating whore from the start, just look at that face
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To sum up, even if the text format is fucking bullshit, I think the SS can be saved thanks to art and plot, that´s all for today.

Psdt: Smt funny that happened at the end is that Takeda said he wasn´t gonna draw more erotic scenes for the first half, but then he said this:

武田弘光 それなら前半でも最後だけだけどエロシーン出せるか

Takeda Hiromitsu Maybe I should include an erotic scene at the end of the first half.
(This implies that 1st half could end up getting more than 10 pages)

That´s it.
 
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