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I'm working on giving this a proper translation - making good progress so far. I just loved the original and really wanted the 2nd one to have a better translation with hot dialogue etc. This is the first translation I've done, so after that I just need to figure out the process of getting help packaging the game up for release here. Because right now it's still this multi-step install process...
So if anyone knows the process for getting the translation packaged up with the code for a proper release, please ping me! I will just have the updated .dat file.
So if anyone knows the process for getting the translation packaged up with the code for a proper release, please ping me! I will just have the updated .dat file.
I've finished the husband and son's perspective, and now finally onto the fun stuff, the mom route!!! (It's the longest one... but still!)
I've been really trying to make those two routes distinct, to make Taiki's route FEEL like an angsty teenage boy, to make his perspective more unique, as it was a bit of a slog to get through his in the original.
I've been really trying to make those two routes distinct, to make Taiki's route FEEL like an angsty teenage boy, to make his perspective more unique, as it was a bit of a slog to get through his in the original.
You are definitely missing out if you go with the MTL (unless it's a different one than I found), the story is really really multi-layered and enhances the hotness - the MTL gets tons of words wrong, pronouns wrong, misses a lot of the subtle cues and stuff. The source material is really top notch, and really slow burn - MTL is better when it's shorter and it's all about the graphics. Although the art here is really good. I can probably finish up this translation in another few days. So I would recommend holding out until then! (Unless you are just in it for the art which is totally valid...)
Example passage from the MTL (this is SUPPOSED to be from the wife's perspective - note how it gets the pronouns often wrong - and it hilariously implies the husband will have sex with Danny):
Example passage from the MTL (this is SUPPOSED to be from the wife's perspective - note how it gets the pronouns often wrong - and it hilariously implies the husband will have sex with Danny):
Versus my version - I tried to capture the correlation between her sexual frustration and Danny's:
If you experience this VN with the MTL you will probably think the story is half-assed and dumb... but actually it is really deep and poetic and makes the NTR hotness hit so hard after the slow burn!!!
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Here's my WIP - this is about 55% translated. Should take just another few days. But if you wanna sample it, here you go! It covers the male routes and the first several sex scenes with the mom. (You'll be able to tell when the MTL takes over when you start seeing funny characters etc).
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When....?We also know how to translate it. The translation will come eventually, have patience