Just found a link to this today in another VN thread. I saw this on PH a few years ago and was slightly interested, but the script was absolutely awful. Did that ever improve, or did it die in badly broken English?
Nudist school is where I saw the link. It's also where I figured these must have some linkage (without knowing the full story) when I saw Lancy in the classroom (I remembered seeing her on the playbacks posted to PH). The grammar there is slightly better, but only slightly. Keep offering to help with language editing, but it looks like they want to stick with folks that don't have a great command (or even mediocre command) to be the final arbiters.