I liked the re-write until the point where the MC talks with Deb in her kitchen before his flight. Once again it's completely fine that Deb betrayed him, but now it's because if she didn't fuck his wife, someone else would have, since he was a terrible husband and father... Because for some reason it's better if someone so close to you betray you, than a total stranger... I didn't think it was possible, but I actually dislike Deb even more now and I'm not that fond of the MC anymore either. I'll finish the game and I might edit this comment later, but that scene really pissed me off and I wanted to comment on it. The "you didn't listen" argument from a person who always get's her way no matter what, is just a bullshit excuse.