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JJDrakken

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I agree with all you said and even though i DO understand how (how can i put this delicately) Insanely idiotic the MC character is being myself from a military background and having worked with Booties (thats Royal marines to the un initiated) i know although they are not always the sharpest tools in the tool box that this dumb idiot would never have passed commando training let alone having got into "special ops" the UK military and i'm sure all the worlds militaries do want thier troops to have at least a modicum of common sense this moron can't string a sentence together whilst debs acts like a teenage boy "yes i understand i can't do this........oooooh boobies and flange ....sorry what were you saying" i know that the characters have been made this way intentionally but FFS cmon have a cohesive thought in your thick skulls once in while please. still i do enjoy the game.
I agree with you there. Someone that stupid would be digging ditches and face down in a latrine, not spec ops. Would made a fine charge the line meat shield, but over all, the way he's written so far, I'd be amazed if he made to an E-3.
 
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I agree with you there. Someone that stupid would be digging ditches and face down in a latrine, not spec ops. Would made a fine charge the line meat shield, but over all, the way he's written so far, I'd be amazed if he made to an E-3.
Yes. There is a former Royal Marines commando who has a youtube channel and he is a very sharp and thoughtful individual who comes off like a PhD who could beat you in a bar fight. The MC comes off like Private Gomer Pyle.
 

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Ok, still unhappy the MC is a bucket of bricks covered in shit. But I can look past that. I appreciate your writing for strong female roles you've done. That is appreciative. Unlike others, I understand Deb's situation. Military & her up bringing. Coupled with simple fact at this point(Still going through this, at point Mam is giving me a deserving earful). She is in a now win situation and is trying the best to cope with it.

She wants to be MC main squeeze and not a side piece, but at same time she knows(Currently) she can't do to all previous stuff & MC being a toolbox. But then if she chooses not to, she then has to deal with that pain/heartbreak that may never be fixed. It's a no win for her either way currently. Crass & stupid attitude is her trying to mean well, but again military attitude, up bringing, and way to many emotions she is trying to manage is making it hard for her.

Faye in my opinion is the MVP here, No Nonsense Scottish Mam. She should kick the shit bricks out both them and get this shit all settled, far more important things are going(aka Family Safety & who killed Marie/Martin). I will always try & give creators a chance and push myself through, I felt father I got your writing has gotten better and more meaningful. Though MC needs his mother to beat his ass and finally knock some damn intelligence into him.

So, far I feel from when I started and up to point I am at(Faye talking to MC at the other home). A lot has improved, I shall see if this continues or Drama Plot holes continue to get far to big, when intelligent solutions should solve them :) But either way, good work for putting yourself out there and providing your creativity to others.
thank you for starting my new years off with a laugh.
 

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Yes. There is a former Royal Marines commando who has a youtube channel and he is a very sharp and thoughtful individual who comes off like a PhD who could beat you in a bar fight. The MC comes off like Private Gomer Pyle.
Don't get me wrong. There is plenty of folks in & out of the military who arnt the brightest bulbs around. Nothing wrong with that, but you'd have to be one helluva a damn killing machine of stupidity to make to spec-ops to point they look past your mental abilities and use you strictly as a blunt weapon needed to do the dirty & loud work.

But if we are going do a story that not only has all this emotional drama, the murder, the mystery, the danger, etc.. Dude needs to be a bit smarter then a box of crayons that he's been eating.
 
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Also to the creator of the story. I'm sorry if you feel like I'm attacking you. I am doing my best to not to. If you go through my post history, it's all about supporting the creators and offering positive advice. It's just I see so much potential here, it feels like I'm standing around with my dick in my hand all day, trying figure if the oven is hot or not.

I can tell when your really focused in and I'm seeing glimmer of stuff starting to come together, then you wander off another direction and it feels like you forgot what you were doing. It's just flustering.
 
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Also to the creator of the story. I'm sorry if you feel like I'm attacking you. I am doing my best to not to. If you go through my post history, it's all about supporting the creators and offering positive advice. It's just I see so much potential here, it feels like I'm standing around with my dick in my hand all day, trying figure if the oven is hot or not.

I can tell when your really focused in and I'm seeing glimmer of stuff starting to come together, then you wander off another direction and it feels like you forgot what you were doing. It's just flustering.
I think I understand where you are coming from even though I love this game. Even when MC is a tool (which is always) at least it is funny. But I think that the audience is fatigued because MC has been carrying the idiot ball for too long and the stakes are too high. There is already a bad choice in the game that can get Millie killed. She can die at any time. Any of the characters can die. Deb nearly died. MC needs to wire his shit together a little tighter or the consequences could be dire. We just can't afford for him to be a dumb shit mired in unresolved family drama when there are bullets flying and bombs exploding "Oh look Deb. That woman who tried to shank you in the toilet just died assassinating the president of a sovereign nation. But I'm too pissed at you to take you to the family reunion in Scotland." It is incongruous to the story that is being told.
 
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Being forced into a date with head mistress, meh, yah I can skip it, but it did unlock some stuff for Deb. But with the walkthrough mod after dinner, says go get your dick wet option. I'd rather just say no. Normally Harem games, I'll about Pokemon of it, gotta catch em all.

But I literally don't care about 90% characters in this story. I believe reason is, I'm tired of the bullshit back home & his stupidity. Wrap that shit up at home already and maybe I'd start caring for other people.

Only reason I chose to bang her, was what if this leads to her helping save a family member situation. I literally just clicked as fast through it as I could, cuz I don't care about them.
 

CF007

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Hi i played a few updates ago.I have questions.

1. Is mc still a retard ? like situation with his sister fucking his wife or family betrayal.
2. Is mc still eating shit from everybody?
3. Is mc still is a pussy?
 

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Hi i played a few updates ago.I have questions.

1. Is mc still a retard ? like situation with his sister fucking his wife or family betrayal.
2. Is mc still eating shit from everybody?
3. Is mc still is a pussy?
Depending on your choices he is slightly better than before, but he is still portrayed as being the reason everything is going wrong, but he has a little more of a backbone now... Everything is still blamed on him though.
 

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Again I don't normally go for the sex in these stories, but so far sex is long apart, dull, & 90% is just some form of cock tease... I wouldn't mind that, if some actual story unfolded that got out of the constant holding pattern we are in. -grumbles-

You may ask why I'm still reading through this. Stubborn nature at this point. I keep seeing flashes of oh, finally we going get out of this holding pattern, I get excited for just that brief moment, then we are back in it again. At this point, it's a matter of stubborn as a mule principle to keep going through this. :p

Edit: Finished up to point it was done at, at Scotland. I honestly hope you start getting everyone out this holding pattern and stop making the MC a narcissistic sociopath. What's good for goose is never good for the gander apparently(MC fucks around, well very little of that even). But ignores everyone at home, constantly and this shit with Deb, seriously. Do you have siblings? I have a younger sister I love dearly, even she did that shit(Which a good chunk was on MC's shoulders anyways, for blame). Intelligent, rational, & family thought members would of fixed that shit already, especially after that talk with his mother.

If your plan is to make the MC a narcissistic sociopath, then I'll pass on further updates. This your story, I don't hold it against you, but if this route you are going with all of what I have mentioned previously, I'll just pass.

Be well, good luck with your work.
 
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Again I don't normally go for the sex in these stories, but so far sex is long apart, dull, & 90% is just some form of cock tease... I wouldn't mind that, if some actual story unfolded that got out of the constant holding pattern we are in. -grumbles-

You may ask why I'm still reading through this. Stubborn nature at this point. I keep seeing flashes of oh, finally we going get out of this holding pattern, I get excited for just that brief moment, then we are back in it again. At this point, it's a matter of stubborn as a mule principle to keep going through this. :p

Edit: Finished up to point it was done at, at Scotland. I honestly hope you start getting everyone out this holding pattern and stop making the MC a narcissistic sociopath. What's good for goose is never good for the gander apparently(MC fucks around, well very little of that even). But ignores everyone at home, constantly and this shit with Deb, seriously. Do you have siblings? I have a younger sister I love dearly, even she did that shit(Which a good chunk was on MC's shoulders anyways, for blame). Intelligent, rational, & family thought members would of fixed that shit already, especially after that talk with his mother.

If your plan is to make the MC a narcissistic sociopath, then I'll pass on further updates. This your story, I don't hold it against you, but if this route you are going with all of what I have mentioned previously, I'll just pass.

Be well, good luck with your work.
My issue is that the MC is portrayed as the only one doing wrong, but he was betrayed by everyone he ever loved while trying to do the right thing, and it got him cucked, his wife killed, put him in jail for 3 years and turned him into a drunk reprobate for the rest of a decade (understandable), and his daughter alienated and now an assassination target. Also its said before that the MC literally never had sex with anyone other than his sister and Wife, and is only doing it now that she is dead and he stayed faithful to his sister and wife even after they fucked him over... Not sure how you consider that a narcissistic sociopath, the worst thing he has done is lie to his wife about his sister (she married him knowing about it btw), but they did worse to him, for even longer, as did his mother and grandma. Literally the only good character is his daughter. Again, they shouldn't be considered his family at all after what they did to him.
 
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DA22

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My issue is that the MC is portrayed as the only one doing wrong, but he was betrayed by everyone he ever loved while trying to do the right thing, and it got him cucked, his wife killed, put him in jail for 3 years and turned him into a drunk reprobate for the rest of a decade (understandable), and his daughter alienated and now an assassination target. Also its said before that the MC literally never had sex with anyone other than his sister and Wife, and is only doing it now that she is dead and he stayed faithful to his sister and wife even after they fucked him over... Not sure how you consider that a narcissistic sociopath, the worst thing he has done is lie to his wife about his sister (she married him knowing about it btw), but they did worse to him, for even longer, as did his mother and grandma. Literally the only good character is his daughter. Again, they shouldn't be considered his family at all after what they did to him.
Even after all that there might be a way to forgive for MC, since at least at begin their intention might have been good (though some doubts about that for a few of the women are quite valid I think).

The thing is though they are all (including Deb) still fully rusted in that opinion what they did was good or even acceptable despite the fallout and it completely negated MC's right to be his own person and ignored how it hurt him (he is more treated like their property with no rights to own opinion or show even some attempt to look at situation from his pov), nor do they grow in any other way so you can never ever trust them not to do so again and as the saying goes with friends like those, you do not need enemies. :p

Edit: That is also one of the main problems with Deb and the lesbian scene in last update, it shows she has not grown one iota or still in the end gives a shit about what the so called most important man in her life she loves so much thinks about something while she knows his opinion. Relations and trust are not build on that and with her mistakes even just in recent past as well ....... From Millie's pov it is also quite counter productive if she wants MC in her bed, but at least she does not have the recent past of Deb, just MC might be slightly somewhat overly sensitive about female family members overlooking his emotions by now or thinking they have the right to fuck up his life for what they consider good, without giving any thought or importance to what will be good for him or what he wishes into account. :p
 
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After playing through i am inclined to say the family did the right thing the MC is so emotionally immature and petty he would have just stamped his feet in a hissy fit and fucked up everyones lives i found myself getting angry more than once FFS get over yourself on 1 hand i understand how bloody pig headed he is as i have scots in my family and they can be so damned annoying with how rigid they can be in their thinking but on the other i want to kick 7 barrels outa the fuckwit for his petty snide remarks all the time BOO fucking HOO grow a spine and get on with it you whining pos , the way he is treating Debs now is ludicrous he keeps nursing and stroking his own ego by belittling her which gets very old very fast and is likely to make a lot of people stop playing he is now going out of his way to "punish her" but all he is really doing is showing what an immature douche Canoe he really is i am actually hoping that all the girls fuck him of and leave him crying like the bitch he is.
 
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Even after all that there might be a way to forgive for MC, since at least at begin their intention might have been good (though some doubts about that for a few of the women are quite valid I think).

The thing is though they are all (including Deb) still fully rusted in that opinion what they did was good or even acceptable despite the fallout and it completely negated MC's right to be his own person and ignored how it hurt him (he is more treated like their property with no rights to own opinion or show even some attempt to look at situation from his pov), nor do they grow in any other way so you can never ever trust them not to do so again and as the saying goes with friends like those, you do not need enemies. :p

Edit: That is also one of the main problems with Deb and the lesbian scene in last update, it shows she has not grown one iota or still in the end gives a shit about what the so called most important man in her life she loves so much thinks about something while she knows his opinion. Relations and trust are not build on that and with her mistakes even just in recent past as well ....... From Millie's pov it is also quite counter productive if she wants MC in her bed, but at least she does not have the recent past of Deb, just MC might be slightly somewhat overly sensitive about female family members overlooking his emotions by now or thinking they have the right to fuck up his life for what they consider good, without giving any thought or importance to what will be good for him or what he wishes into account. :p
sorry to ask,but what are you guys talking about???
what lesbian scene??
i´ve read it several times now a lesbian scene with milly and deb??? o_O
there is no lesbian scene with nobody in the last update or this update.
not even images for that are in the game archiv...
 

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After playing through i am inclined to say the family did the right thing the MC is so emotionally immature and petty he would have just stamped his feet in a hissy fit and fucked up everyones lives i found myself getting angry more than once FFS get over yourself on 1 hand i understand how bloody pig headed he is as i have scots in my family and they can be so damned annoying with how rigid they can be in their thinking but on the other i want to kick 7 barrels outa the fuckwit for his petty snide remarks all the time BOO fucking HOO grow a spine and get on with it you whining pos , the way he is treating Debs now is ludicrous he keeps nursing and stroking his own ego by belittling her which gets very old very fast and is likely to make a lot of people stop playing he is now going out of his way to "punish her" but all he is really doing is showing what an immature douche Canoe he really is i am actually hoping that all the girls fuck him of and leave him crying like the bitch he is.
Well that would be the happy end for MC I think, with family members like that you are better off without them. :p It is nice you follow devs view that all is his fault and he has no right to get pissed at them for destroying his life and values, just cause they could and thought it was a good thing and keeping at it when they found out how seriously it was fucking up both MC and Millie .........

They are more a bunch of sadistic tormentors as loving family in the end, whatever original intentions and you complain MC has a beef with Deb and is not all nice to her after what she has done to help destroy MC's and Millie's life for her reasons and keeps maintaining she had the right to do so and still acts the same? Sure he would have been wiser to kick her all the way over the Ocean out of his life, but he is not allowed to. Deb is getting what she deserves from him for her actions and until she changes her tone she keeps deserving that, whether she is a victim of her own upbringing or not.

Edit: Also do not forget a big part of how much an emotional twat MC is, is due to how he has been treated by his family since he was a kid and later, they are not blameless in that either. :p
 
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DA22

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sorry to ask,but what are you guys talking about???
what lesbian scene??
i´ve read it several times now a lesbian scene with milly and deb??? o_O
there is no lesbian scene with nobody in the last update or this update.
not even images for that are in the game archiv...
Used mods in past?
 

DA22

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no who needs mods with this game???
but even if i would i looked at the images and there are no pictures with milly and deb in a lesbian scene.
There is a choice for that, look about two/three pages back for a post when update was just out.
 

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There is a choice for that, look about two/three pages back for a post when update was just out.
nope i dont believe what is written there because i played it and there is nothing there.
someone show me some pictures but it wont be possible in the gamearchiv are no pictures with deb and milly in a lesbian scene.

even in the devs official walkthrough there is no hint to that.
 

DA22

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nope i dont believe what is written there because i played it and there is nothing there.
someone show me some pictures but it wont be possible in the gamearchiv are no pictures with deb and milly in a lesbian scene.

even in the devs official walkthrough there is no hint to that.
Ok, that would be a good thing actually, since it would not fuck over Deb again, like I said I did not play latest update and to me that would make no sense from either Millie or Deb perspective if either wants to end up with MC, with all that happened already in past. :p So I hope you are right and you do not have wrong download, maybe best to ask that poster though where he got that scene.
 
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