This game has a few good things going for it.
A lot of content for a first release, which is always appreciated.
That way you can actually determine whether the game is for you.
There are also quite a few different types of women.
Bigger and smaller breasts, lean and full bodies. Muscular and curvaceous.
Some you like, some you won't.
The story is also pretty well done so far, aside from some of the things I'll mention later, the characters are okay as well.
Which is actually part of my first personal negative.
The daughter is build like a body-builder and for me that is about the least attractive a woman can be. Nothing feminine about them IMO.
But yes, that's a personal taste and I don't want to rate a game worse for picking a body-type I don't like.
So here are a few other points I didn't like too much.
1. This was a very "wordy" game, meaning there was so much text that was just so-so that I went and skipped forward from time to time.
Which is something I loathe to do, because I actually like to play games for the porn AND the story.
Yet many of the conversations just go back and forth around the same few points again and again and that is just boring and even slightly annoying.
2. The sister, I do find Debbie sexy and it's clear that she is basically a positive character, but for fuck's sake she sounds like a sewer has come to life. "Potty mouth" is about ten times to soft an expression to describe this constant barrage of cursing and swearing, inappropriate sexual rants and other obscenities.
Look, I don't mind cursing or obscenities, but not constantly, all the time, no matter the situation, as if she is being completely and totally oblivious that this can be a complete turn-off if a woman curses more than a sailor.
Another point would be the MC, the guy has no filter, he just blurts out anything and is sexually attracted to anything that is female.
Who would after hearing your ex-wife died, whom you still loved, remember having sex with her and not a romantic moment?
And frankly if you see your daughter again after her mom just died and you haven't seen her for years it is fucking sick to react like a horny teenager to any sign of her being female.
But of course this trait runs in the family as both the MCs sister AND his grieving daughter does the same with the other family members.
How he constantly repeats the same juvenile reactions reminds me negatively of some of the other MCs in games here.
Seriously, less can be more sometimes. Seduction and romance are nice as well, it doesn't have to be sex and profanities all the time.
It isn't all negative, otherwise I wouldn't have given this three stars.
The story isn't bad, the writing isn't bad, just to repetitive and to drawn out. The characters of Deb the sister and the daughter aren't bad, if you discount their major flaws mentioned above.
Everytime Deb stopped cursing for a few lines, she cames off as being in love with the MC and caring for him and others.
The daughter is the typical stupid spoiled teen, with the addition of the grief over her mother's death, if you disregard that we already see her perving after her aunt and father.
Julia the caretaker and Astrid the neighbour are completely positive characters, especially Astrid is sexy AND sweet.
Honestly, if the dev tuned down some of the stuff I've mentioned AND instead of typical porn behaviour went just a bit more into trying to tell the actual story without everyone acting like sex-crazed teens all the time.
