Roastez

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A corruption game with mind control and transformation? Sign me in.
The art looks awesome and the stats of the LI looks very promising.

Perhaps in the future put some "age regression" like her dying her hair and rejuvenate for the "stress relief".

A really good game.
Stress relief is on the map, and dye her hair too. Age regression is a pretty interesting idea. Thanks for playing the project.
 

gregers

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Art style is interesting; the game looks good, but a lot of images are recycled repeatedly, which is understandable to keep the workload manageable but reduces the impact and reinforces the impression that we're just grinding through identical days.

The English is fairly broken; not so much that's it completely impossible to follow, but enough to throw the reader off now and then. But the story setup is somewhat original and intriguing. We're not given a wall of exposition but get to pick up hints from context as we go along.

The story so far is entirely linear with no meaningful choices. As a side note you can set the MC's age but the dialogue will always assume that he's a young man, even if he's older than the supposedly "older woman" he's talking to.

All in all worth keeping half an eye on to see if the writing improves and the player gains more agency.
 
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Roastez

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Art style is interesting; the game looks good, but a lot of images are recycled repeatedly, which is understandable to keep the workload manageable but reduces the impact and reinforces the impression that we're just grinding through identical days.

The English is fairly broken; not so much that's it completely impossible to follow, but enough to throw the reader off now and then. But the story setup is somewhat original and intriguing. We're not given a wall of exposition but get to pick up hints from context as we go along.

The story so far is entirely linear with no meaningful choices. As a side note you can set the MC's age but the dialogue will always assume that he's a young man, even if he's older than the supposedly "older woman" he's talking to.

All in all worth keeping half an eye on to see if the writing improves and the player gains more agency.
Thanks for the review.
And yes, a lot of things need to be revised, but I need to have a consistent part to work on.
The idea is not to have too many decisions in the intro to tell the base story.
And unlock that later.
This character is also to test the stat systems.
About the age, yes, it was a part that gave me an error in the code so I published it to see how it behaves.
The mc class is not programmed yet.
About the english, I have someone to correct it but he is quite busy these days.
About the repeated images... I would have to check again.
Thanks!!
 

Saint Blackmoor

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You're crossed into the dream world without knowing it.
A new reality and a new life await you.
But there are always questions to be asked.
A game of corruption and perversion.​
I hope I haven't crossed the line of overview rearrangement. :sneaky:

I really like the look of the game. (y)
 
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mag5246

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Don't pay attention. It's just everyone-must-love-the-same-kinks-as-we-Nazis.:ROFLMAO:

Has the game added tags or is there still nothing further than BJ?
 

Babalui

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So now we're nazis if we don't like ntr? :WaitWhat:
whatever, atleast their uniforms looked good.
Hugo Boss military suits, pure elegance.
As for NTR, the zeal is unclear to me, but to each their own. I prefer a good netori story or netorase, I'm not a fan of netorare, but I don't have a nervous breakdown when I encounter such content. There's always something to be found, but I really don't understand the constant questioning of whether there is NTR in the game, and they don't even know what they're asking, they're just throwing letters. And it seems that they have such fear as if they are entering a minefield.
Why Nazis? Well, isn't it commonly in the English language when you want to describe someone who wants to erase some phenomenon from the face of the earth without sparing time and effort, to call such a xx Nazi? where is xx something he stands for? in this case antiNTR. But relax, there is no such thing here, unless marital infidelity for someone is that famous NTR that they are asking about, download the game and enjoy.
 

Roastez

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Don't pay attention. It's just everyone-must-love-the-same-kinks-as-we-Nazis.:ROFLMAO:

Has the game added tags or is there still nothing further than BJ?
Oh, my fault it seems. I'll edit later and yes, see the changelog.
 
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Beast Within

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Why Nazis? Well, isn't it commonly in the English language when you want to describe someone who wants to erase some phenomenon from the face of the earth without sparing time and effort, to call such a xx Nazi? where is xx something he stands for? in this case antiNTR. But relax, there is no such thing here, unless marital infidelity for someone is that famous NTR that they are asking about, download the game and enjoy.
imagine the iq level of someone comparing people who do not like a kink to psychopaths who commited massacres and near genocides.

brick level intelect. reminds me of wokesters who scream "nazi" and -insert bullshit-phobe at anyone who disagrees with their delusions.

last time I checked there were no cuck-consentration camps.
 

Saint Blackmoor

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The game is unique and very appealing. However the grammar/syntax is off-putting, IMO.

A few games here have a dialogue style that works well in an odd way.
The Motel is one, for example, but this game falls short in that regard. If that's what Roastez was going for.
Many of the statements that try to sound deep are nonsensical.

 
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Roastez

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The game is unique and very appealing. However the grammar/syntax is off-putting, IMO.

A few games here have a dialogue style that works well in an odd way.
The Motel is one, for example, but this game falls short in that regard. If that's what Roastez was going for.
Many of the statements that try to sound deep are nonsensical.

Yes, I really need an editor, but I cannot afford it right now.
Perhaps the biggest mistake was using an AI for automatic corrections, and many things went even more wrong. But as I said at the end, I'm just one person, and the only filter is me... unfortunately.
 
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