I rarely write reviews, but I loved this novella and couldn't pass it up.
1. The novella's concept is brilliant, that alone is enough to give it a 3 out of 5 stars.
2. There's a lot of dialogue, but that wouldn't be a negative if there were enough sex scenes.
3. The characters are beautiful, especially Ruru and Jarlina.
I can't give it 5 stars for three reasons:
1. The demons don't have tails. They would be prettier with proper tails (real tails), like (dasi_(yxxzoid)) and (Lady Wolf by ArbuzBudesh).
2. I don't approve of having two genitals or changing them with magic. Demons should have one genital. Ruru should only have a penis. That would be good for the plot and the quality of the novella's world.
3. There's little animation and little interaction with them. In some novellas, you can change positions and control the sex.
1. The novella's concept is brilliant, that alone is enough to give it a 3 out of 5 stars.
2. There's a lot of dialogue, but that wouldn't be a negative if there were enough sex scenes.
3. The characters are beautiful, especially Ruru and Jarlina.
I can't give it 5 stars for three reasons:
1. The demons don't have tails. They would be prettier with proper tails (real tails), like (dasi_(yxxzoid)) and (Lady Wolf by ArbuzBudesh).
2. I don't approve of having two genitals or changing them with magic. Demons should have one genital. Ruru should only have a penis. That would be good for the plot and the quality of the novella's world.
3. There's little animation and little interaction with them. In some novellas, you can change positions and control the sex.