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I realize my reply is late, but then so is the recent release.
Hey I get the fantasy thing, but to claim "fantasy" you cannot bring in real world organizations and expect to believe BS replaced the reality. Your suggestion of making up a name, or have a play on the name is far better and shows an obvious intent to joke or create fantasy. Using Interpol with a ficticious purpose makes about as much sense as calling the FBI or CIA a child daycare service. It doesn't make any sense and actually pulls you out of the fantasy for the stupidity of the claim, not the fantasy.
Even movies, actual fiction too, use made up agencies if they are going to insert "artistic license BS" to push the plot. To use an actual agency and give it completely different roles is just laziness not creativity.
The "it's a porn game stupid" claim would be valid if the writer didn't invest a considerable amount of rendering and dialog, as well as a gigantic chunk of the game to the ridiculous poorly laid foundation.
Listen, critiquing a guy's work can bring out ego and anger, but seriously it's a major flaw. The funny thing is, a simple string replace could restore "fantasy". Change "Interpol" with "UNIPSY" or "INTERPSY" or something sillier. If you're going to use a real world name it needs to have the same real world nature, else make up something.
Part of a porn game's purpose is to create and enhance a fantasy, but pulling in real world names and elements and giving them a new meaning confuses the reader and weakens the fantasy. I actually like this game, but as soon as the Interpol plot came into play, it pulled me out of the fantasy and and made me feel I was dealing with a flat-earther wanting me to believe the new BS and expect me to throw away common sense.
Hey I get the fantasy thing, but to claim "fantasy" you cannot bring in real world organizations and expect to believe BS replaced the reality. Your suggestion of making up a name, or have a play on the name is far better and shows an obvious intent to joke or create fantasy. Using Interpol with a ficticious purpose makes about as much sense as calling the FBI or CIA a child daycare service. It doesn't make any sense and actually pulls you out of the fantasy for the stupidity of the claim, not the fantasy.
Even movies, actual fiction too, use made up agencies if they are going to insert "artistic license BS" to push the plot. To use an actual agency and give it completely different roles is just laziness not creativity.
The "it's a porn game stupid" claim would be valid if the writer didn't invest a considerable amount of rendering and dialog, as well as a gigantic chunk of the game to the ridiculous poorly laid foundation.
Listen, critiquing a guy's work can bring out ego and anger, but seriously it's a major flaw. The funny thing is, a simple string replace could restore "fantasy". Change "Interpol" with "UNIPSY" or "INTERPSY" or something sillier. If you're going to use a real world name it needs to have the same real world nature, else make up something.
Part of a porn game's purpose is to create and enhance a fantasy, but pulling in real world names and elements and giving them a new meaning confuses the reader and weakens the fantasy. I actually like this game, but as soon as the Interpol plot came into play, it pulled me out of the fantasy and and made me feel I was dealing with a flat-earther wanting me to believe the new BS and expect me to throw away common sense.
Black, I am also a published author, and I have helped in writing two different VN games, one of them was fairly popular, and I am helping in editing another VN as I write this. Since your story is fiction AND it IS porn, somewhat, to a "cartoon" degree, I guess, instead of being whatever this dude is being, if I were writing it, just to add a bit of humor, I might name the "agency" one of two choices: 1. Interpole or 2. Inherhole.
Hey, Black, not to appease this dude, but if you ever wanted to insert a chuckle or two in your work, something like that would do it. In fact, it would be hilarious! Or don't. It doesn't matter. Just do your thing, man. My original suggestion was for the aesthetics of the sexual act; to make it more arousing, intimate, and tantalizing, you know? This guy's suggestion is more about taking a fictitious work of art and making it non-fiction, which is a fine line with fiction. In one of my published novels, I used a fictitious town. In a subsequent novel, Book 2 of the series, I introduced another town, which was real, in another part of the country. But it really didn't matter. The crux of the story really hadn't much to do at all with the names of the towns but more of what was going on within them and with their residents.
swelldude: And where in the world did you get the idea that even the remotest scintilla of believability accompanies fantasy? The definition of fantasy is: The creative, capricious imagination; unrestrained fancy.
Now, does that sound like something that is supposed to be believed? Your proposal is simply ridiculous. If you have a problem with alphabet agencies, then you're in the wrong forum, chief!
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1) You're saying that you don't like the fact there is a chance for pregnancy?
Answer: yes, I like pregnancy chances in the story's I read. "No" to kinetic novel pregnancy('s), where choices were given earlier on for said pregnancy with LI's during this project in previous updates Like with Cobra
Lastly, think of it like a Live Service game like Path of Exiles when your build gets Nerfed, and then think of choices previous given to us, and lack thereof now.
2) It's your Dyslexia or you're Comprehension Skills our your inability to understand complex minds. That shit isn't my problem Hehe...lol. Merry Christmas
- Mar 10, 2024
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I'm a little confused about the MC becoming so completely clueless about Tasha's desires and repeatedly ignoring her (and other people) telling him that she's ready. It gets to the point where it's not possible to believe he really doesn't understand and he clearly must just want to be an asshole to her. Even the "Your first time should be special" spiel just feels like an excuse to be an asshole.
- Mar 31, 2020
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Felt more like he thought that he gets to decide what is and isn't special, he does that so often, he hasn't slept with Sofie yet either because he feels like she can't sleep with him until he thinks the moment is special enough, yet he sleeps with others for the first time the first chance he gets, no hesitation at all.
Sol_Invictus2009 DarkDaemonX
Milf's need more than just sex... so yeah for them it has to be something more spezial.
Sofie will get her spezial time soon.
Milf's need more than just sex... so yeah for them it has to be something more spezial.
Sofie will get her spezial time soon.
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Still doesn't excuse him from deciding it isn't the right time for Tasha yet, when she already said she was ready, like he knows what she wants better than she does herself.
DarkDaemonX Mc had already something with all three (five) of the smith lady's?
TL went a bit over board with the mass of lady's. I think the MC' couldn't handle a second fuck feast like at the yacht.
(Players where complaining at that time, that it was too much.) So I slowed down a bit.
TL went a bit over board with the mass of lady's. I think the MC' couldn't handle a second fuck feast like at the yacht.
(Players where complaining at that time, that it was too much.) So I slowed down a bit.
- Feb 19, 2021
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Vellia has to be coming up soon as well right? Baby Mama needs some loving too.
- Sep 26, 2020
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i cant continue cuz when in the office waiting with the 3 sister for someone in the office, after elevator pling, game freezes
This needs the kinetic novel tag. When you give choices that either A) Don't differ in results except opting out to see lewd content with a character, or B) Forces a Bad End, you might as well not even have choices to begin with.
- Jun 4, 2021
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Considering that you can choose with whom you want to start something and with whom not (even if only to a limited extent), without ending up in a “Game over”, the kinetics tag would be out of place.
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Very strange.
I have no idea what's wrong with your version, but the error can't actually be found in the script.
What and where did you download?
I would say try a fresh download, otherwise swap the file and try again.
File attached, insert in game/days/kapitel2
I have no idea what's wrong with your version, but the error can't actually be found in the script.
What and where did you download?
I would say try a fresh download, otherwise swap the file and try again.
File attached, insert in game/days/kapitel2
Yeah I really want to know who is messing with my script, The second time already I see this fucking : at a scene command...
Sorry that's not how it's coded by me.
Sorry that's not how it's coded by me.
- Feb 8, 2019
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I started this game a while ago. But I lost the save and decided not to continue it. I recently picked it up again
And started over. Now according to the tags there's no pregnancy in it. There is the one pregnant woman
But then later on in the story one of the girls is pregnant. Not that I'm against pregnancy and a story in fact I'd like to see the tag for it. And I'd like to see a lot of the younger girls get pregnant. I just wonder why the tags aren't there
And started over. Now according to the tags there's no pregnancy in it. There is the one pregnant woman
But then later on in the story one of the girls is pregnant. Not that I'm against pregnancy and a story in fact I'd like to see the tag for it. And I'd like to see a lot of the younger girls get pregnant. I just wonder why the tags aren't there
onknight The tag isn't there since none of the girls is a pregnant from mc till now, there is just a teased pregnancy till now.
Spoiler which will change with the next update. You all will know who it is and then the tag will be added.
Spoiler which will change with the next update. You all will know who it is and then the tag will be added.
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