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I realize my reply is late, but then so is the recent release.
Hey I get the fantasy thing, but to claim "fantasy" you cannot bring in real world organizations and expect to believe BS replaced the reality. Your suggestion of making up a name, or have a play on the name is far better and shows an obvious intent to joke or create fantasy. Using Interpol with a ficticious purpose makes about as much sense as calling the FBI or CIA a child daycare service. It doesn't make any sense and actually pulls you out of the fantasy for the stupidity of the claim, not the fantasy.
Even movies, actual fiction too, use made up agencies if they are going to insert "artistic license BS" to push the plot. To use an actual agency and give it completely different roles is just laziness not creativity.
The "it's a porn game stupid" claim would be valid if the writer didn't invest a considerable amount of rendering and dialog, as well as a gigantic chunk of the game to the ridiculous poorly laid foundation.
Listen, critiquing a guy's work can bring out ego and anger, but seriously it's a major flaw. The funny thing is, a simple string replace could restore "fantasy". Change "Interpol" with "UNIPSY" or "INTERPSY" or something sillier. If you're going to use a real world name it needs to have the same real world nature, else make up something.
Part of a porn game's purpose is to create and enhance a fantasy, but pulling in real world names and elements and giving them a new meaning confuses the reader and weakens the fantasy. I actually like this game, but as soon as the Interpol plot came into play, it pulled me out of the fantasy and and made me feel I was dealing with a flat-earther wanting me to believe the new BS and expect me to throw away common sense.
Hey I get the fantasy thing, but to claim "fantasy" you cannot bring in real world organizations and expect to believe BS replaced the reality. Your suggestion of making up a name, or have a play on the name is far better and shows an obvious intent to joke or create fantasy. Using Interpol with a ficticious purpose makes about as much sense as calling the FBI or CIA a child daycare service. It doesn't make any sense and actually pulls you out of the fantasy for the stupidity of the claim, not the fantasy.
Even movies, actual fiction too, use made up agencies if they are going to insert "artistic license BS" to push the plot. To use an actual agency and give it completely different roles is just laziness not creativity.
The "it's a porn game stupid" claim would be valid if the writer didn't invest a considerable amount of rendering and dialog, as well as a gigantic chunk of the game to the ridiculous poorly laid foundation.
Listen, critiquing a guy's work can bring out ego and anger, but seriously it's a major flaw. The funny thing is, a simple string replace could restore "fantasy". Change "Interpol" with "UNIPSY" or "INTERPSY" or something sillier. If you're going to use a real world name it needs to have the same real world nature, else make up something.
Part of a porn game's purpose is to create and enhance a fantasy, but pulling in real world names and elements and giving them a new meaning confuses the reader and weakens the fantasy. I actually like this game, but as soon as the Interpol plot came into play, it pulled me out of the fantasy and and made me feel I was dealing with a flat-earther wanting me to believe the new BS and expect me to throw away common sense.
Black, I am also a published author, and I have helped in writing two different VN games, one of them was fairly popular, and I am helping in editing another VN as I write this. Since your story is fiction AND it IS porn, somewhat, to a "cartoon" degree, I guess, instead of being whatever this dude is being, if I were writing it, just to add a bit of humor, I might name the "agency" one of two choices: 1. Interpole or 2. Inherhole.
Hey, Black, not to appease this dude, but if you ever wanted to insert a chuckle or two in your work, something like that would do it. In fact, it would be hilarious! Or don't. It doesn't matter. Just do your thing, man. My original suggestion was for the aesthetics of the sexual act; to make it more arousing, intimate, and tantalizing, you know? This guy's suggestion is more about taking a fictitious work of art and making it non-fiction, which is a fine line with fiction. In one of my published novels, I used a fictitious town. In a subsequent novel, Book 2 of the series, I introduced another town, which was real, in another part of the country. But it really didn't matter. The crux of the story really hadn't much to do at all with the names of the towns but more of what was going on within them and with their residents.
swelldude: And where in the world did you get the idea that even the remotest scintilla of believability accompanies fantasy? The definition of fantasy is: The creative, capricious imagination; unrestrained fancy.
Now, does that sound like something that is supposed to be believed? Your proposal is simply ridiculous. If you have a problem with alphabet agencies, then you're in the wrong forum, chief!
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1) You're saying that you don't like the fact there is a chance for pregnancy?
Answer: yes, I like pregnancy chances in the story's I read. "No" to kinetic novel pregnancy('s), where choices were given earlier on for said pregnancy with LI's during this project in previous updates Like with Cobra
Lastly, think of it like a Live Service game like Path of Exiles when your build gets Nerfed, and then think of choices previous given to us, and lack thereof now.
2) It's your Dyslexia or you're Comprehension Skills our your inability to understand complex minds. That shit isn't my problem Hehe...lol. Merry Christmas
