it is in times like these that I really appreciate F95, because If I was cloudlet subscriber, I would not be happy with what he's produced with 5 months. With only 189 subscribers after the 2nd update, and with how this update is went, I would start remembering his past work record.
Anyway, to cut this short, the text story is good, but it certainly could use a few more frames to tell a more titillating tale At this point, I would rate this a talented but lazy dev. taking into consideration his last VN track record, I would say the pattern is at risk of repeating itself.
Come on Cloudlet, don't you want to be a dev with more than 500 subscribers at this point? then stop fookin' about and work for your money. put in another 30% to 50% extra effort, and you are there already.
Let's see what the 3rd and 4th update brings... I am not hopeful... but as usual.. this VN does show promise.