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The post doesn't look to be updated with a newer file? (Same file size, and post doesn't show as edited. Or did I miss something?)
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The post doesn't look to be updated with a newer file? (Same file size, and post doesn't show as edited. Or did I miss something?)
Thanks, yeah, for some reason it didn't update the edit time.I did but it doesn't say it's edited.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Doesn't look like it. So there is no competition for you if you want to start one.Does this game have a walkthrough that's not a mod?
dialogue is ok, though i keep seeing the word organism used in weird ways.Most of the recent reviews have mentioned that the game is too wordy and the dialogues are unnatural. I wanted to ask for everyone's opinions/advice about how to improve it. I understand the concept of wordiness, so I'm guessing that I'll try to improve that before the Steam release by trying to reduce the number of words used to convey the same message. However, the concept of the dialogues being unnatural is something I'm uncertain about how to improve. Maybe it's because English isn't my first language so the dialogues seem too formal? I'm not sure how to improve that cause I don't really instinctively see it myself. Would anyone be able to provide an example of an unnatural dialogue from the game and how it could be edited to be better? I think I'll probably get the concept after I see an example or two, so then I could improve the rest of the dialogues myself.
I'm not a native English speaker myself so I can't speak about the dialogue but I can give advice about the too wordy part. Yeah, some dialogue can be cut or shortened but I don't think it's really necessary more like nitpicking. Personality I don't mind it and I have seen worse in other VN.Most of the recent reviews have mentioned that the game is too wordy and the dialogues are unnatural. I wanted to ask for everyone's opinions/advice about how to improve it. I understand the concept of wordiness, so I'm guessing that I'll try to improve that before the Steam release by trying to reduce the number of words used to convey the same message. However, the concept of the dialogues being unnatural is something I'm uncertain about how to improve. Maybe it's because English isn't my first language so the dialogues seem too formal? I'm not sure how to improve that cause I don't really instinctively see it myself. Would anyone be able to provide an example of an unnatural dialogue from the game and how it could be edited to be better? I think I'll probably get the concept after I see an example or two, so then I could improve the rest of the dialogues myself.
Nice! I have now purchased it! I hope buying also helps with the Steam algorithm.The game has just been released on Steam! Featuring new animations, Steam achievements and more!You must be registered to see the links
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If you'd like to help out, the best way to do it is by leaving a review with your honest thoughts about the game on Steam. It seems that reviews are the most important for the Steam algorithm. Have fun!
Thank you so much! Haha, yes, buying also definitely helps. From what I understand, Steam will promote the game a lot during the first week after release, but after that, the level of promotion will depend very heavily on the review score of the game.Nice! I have now purchased it! I hope buying also helps with the Steam algorithm.
Congratulations and good luckThe game has just been released on Steam! Featuring new animations, Steam achievements and more!You must be registered to see the links
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If you'd like to help out, the best way to do it is by leaving a review with your honest thoughts about the game on Steam. It seems that reviews are the most important for the Steam algorithm. Have fun!
In terms of content, yes. But steam version should have all sex/lewd scenes animated while the version here only the scenes of last update are animated. At least that's what i understood from dev's postsIs the Steam version is the same as the version here?
The Steam version has the same amount of story content (ends in the same spot), but it has new animations added to all of the game's sex scenes, Steam achievements, and some minor tweaks (like adding a dialogue box opacity slider, correcting some awkward wording or typos, etc.).Is the Steam version the same as the version here?