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[xcalibar4]

Do you understand the meaning of the word - good!?

Not everyone is as wise as you, so I guess I don't.

Obviously not, so your opinion is not Interesting!

I foolishly thought forum is a place where one can share their opinion. Didn't know it has to be interesting for you.
And I didn't post it as a reply to any of your previous messages so don't know why you got so offended by it.

 

[ItsNotUs]

Not everyone is as wise as you, so I guess I don't.


I foolishly thought forum is a place where one can share their opinion. Didn't know it has to be interesting for you.
And I didn't post it as a reply to any of your previous messages so don't know why you got so offended by it.

What kind of opinion can you talk about if you only play Sophie’s perspective!
That's 50% of the game, the other 50% is Felix perspective whose you're missing! Those. your opinion is 50% - and for me, half-hearted opinions are not interesting!

The "good" word was addressed to another game in which you also scip the perspective of the male MC and for you all the endings for the female MC are Good!

You supposedly don’t understand English well, but you also don’t understand well what you’re writing about!

 

[Wizmoe]

Not everyone is as wise as you, so I guess I don't.


I foolishly thought forum is a place where one can share their opinion. Didn't know it has to be interesting for you.
And I didn't post it as a reply to any of your previous messages so don't know why you got so offended by it.

Nevermind that guy, he always goes on incoherent long rants.

 

[ItsNotUs]

Nevermind that guy, he always goes on incoherent long rants.

Incoherent long rants its about you!

 

[Bigboy16]

Has anyone played 0.21 update? how was it?

 

[xcalibar4]

What kind of opinion can you talk about if you only play Sophie’s perspective!

No, I played Felix's route until Amy convinced him not to suspect Sophie. And then I felt he became too oblivious like in all the other games, so I stopped playing his route.

The "good" word was addressed to another game in which you also scip the perspective of the male MC and for you all the endings for the female MC are Good!

FMC Laura is Happy

I said 'Happy,' not 'good.' In another game post, I mentioned how the Womanizer Bull suddenly stops everything just to pursue the FMC, and someone said the FMC never gets a happy ending other than becoming a stripper or a hooker. But in 'NTR HomeStay,' there's a route where the Bull actually marries the FMC, and they live happily together.
And in APBLU

Spoiler

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So in most Laura-focused endings, it doesn't give me the impression that she is unhappy.

Nobody wants to hurt the good man Felix

This is where I only used the word 'good.' Until Sophie was fully committed to Zack, she always thought of him as a good husband. Amy thinks he is a good friend, Nate thinks he is a good man, and others think he is a good teacher. That's the point I was trying to make. Even with all his positive points, nobody is trying to help him; instead, they're doing the opposite. I know the game wouldn't progress otherwise, but most games don't give the MC a fighting chance. That's what I was saying.

 

[l_syaw]

Everyday, man faces a choice: to cuck math professors, or to argue in NTR threads. Strive to be the former, frens.
/╲/\( •̀ ω •́ )/\╱\

 

[alyssssssssss]

No, I played Felix's route until Amy convinced him not to suspect Sophie. And then I felt he became too oblivious like in all the other games, so I stopped playing his route.



I said 'Happy,' not 'good.' In another game post, I mentioned how the Womanizer Bull suddenly stops everything just to pursue the FMC, and someone said the FMC never gets a happy ending other than becoming a stripper or a hooker. But in 'NTR HomeStay,' there's a route where the Bull actually marries the FMC, and they live happily together.
And in APBLU

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So in most Laura-focused endings, it doesn't give me the impression that she is unhappy.

This is where I only used the word 'good.' Until Sophie was fully committed to Zack, she always thought of him as a good husband. Amy thinks he is a good friend, Nate thinks he is a good man, and others think he is a good teacher. That's the point I was trying to make. Even with all his positive points, nobody is trying to help him; instead, they're doing the opposite. I know the game wouldn't progress otherwise, but most games don't give the MC a fighting chance. That's what I was saying.

Sorry, but in the spoiler I think you have the wrong game, the characters Luca, Harry and Laura, are the characters of the game, "A promise that should not have been made", the characters of this game are, Felix, Sophia and Zack.

 

[blewbury]

the characters of this game are, Felix, Sophia and Zack.

Aka smoll, big and no dick.

 

[tata19]

Regarding the last update, it catches my attention that Sophie still keeps saying that she loves Felix. I don't know if it is used as the last point of corruption that Sophie will suffer because otherwise there is not much reason, but of course it hasn't been like that for a while. I'm not saying that I feel a certain affection for the vovid, but telling Zack that in addition to him he also loves Felix seems strange to me at this point in the game.

 

[blewbury]

telling Zack that in addition to him he also loves Felix seems strange to me

Why tho? Can't she be polyamory? Not everyone is monogamous, some people are into swinging, unicorn hunting, threesomes and cuckoldry. That doesn't mean them don't have love and feelings for their spouses. It's just different for them.

 

[tata19]

Why tho? Can't she be polyamory? Not everyone is monogamous, some people are into swinging, unicorn hunting, threesomes and cuckoldry. That doesn't mean them don't have love and feelings for their spouses. It's just different for them.

Yes, I would understand that if she demonstrated it. But I don't see demonstrations of love as a couple towards Felix at the moment. In fact, fekix is not feeling well and she doesn't even notice it. I think that love was in a shared moment but currently I see that she is ready alone for Zack.

 

[Animefan_09]

Yes, I would understand that if she demonstrated it. But I don't see demonstrations of love as a couple towards Felix at the moment. In fact, fekix is not feeling well and she doesn't even notice it. I think that love was in a shared moment but currently I see that she is ready alone for Zack.

Late to the conversation, and frankly i am too lazy to read all the previous comments xD, but in my opinion that is what makes NTR different from cuckold, or at least the most important part of NTR, like the point is that the FMC feelings shift from her original loved one.

Is also why i hate BSS, to me is bullshit to call that ntr when it was purely onesided feelings from the MC towards the girl, some even go so far as using a loser MC liking a popular girl and then when she gets with someone or sleeps around treat it like NTR due to BSS.

 

[blewbury]

if she demonstrated it

Ain't the women's language of love the most complicated one? She may be demonstrating her love just by not dumping Felix, still living with him, sleeping with him in same bed and hiding her affair from him - overall by keeping things "as always" for him for some time.

 

[tata19]

Ain't the women's language of love the most complicated one? She may be demonstrating her love just by not dumping Felix, still living with him, sleeping with him in same bed and hiding her affair from him - overall by keeping things "as always" for him for some time.

That is not showing that you are in love. You may still have some affection as a friend as a person who shared something important, even for convenience so as not to cause a scandal that would cause problems with your work, but from there you have to stay in love is another topic.

For me it is the last step to complete Sophie's total corruption, which is why that "love" remains in the story with Felix even today.

 

[Bigboy16]

Anyone played 0.21 .0 update? How was it? Any insights?

 

[alyssssssssss]

That is not showing that you are in love. You may still have some affection as a friend as a person who shared something important, even for convenience so as not to cause a scandal that would cause problems with your work, but from there you have to stay in love is another topic.

For me it is the last step to complete Sophie's total corruption, which is why that "love" remains in the story with Felix even today.

Do any of you seriously think that Zack is in love with Sofia and takes her away from Felix, I'm playing dirty in every way for his perversion, then leave her.

 

[nickrotund]

drop the new patch

 

[LostBR]

Can someone tell me a spoiler of this update?

 

[GreenBlue]

I have a complain/critique about this game. I hope the author will see this. But more important I just want to know if people on this forum agree or disagree with my points. I'll try to be constructive.

It's about the writing, not the story in general just how the dialogues and inner thoughts are written. I'm not a writer, I am shit at anything to do with language and writing, be it my native one or English. And I am a relatively slow reader, but I like reading. So all my complains come from intuition and personal "enjoyment"(how easy is to wack off to it).

It feels like parts of the game the dialogue is dragged on, and stretched with filler. It's just boring to go through it. Same idea is expressed in 3 dialog boxes. And it goes on and on and on. I had couple of examples but I deleted the previous version of the game, with all the screenshots. But to give you an example, is like this:
Dialog1: His dick is so big.
Dialog2: It's big as my arm.
Dialog3: What a monster.
It's a oversimplification. But all 3 express the same idea "bid dick". If you want me to show game examples, ask(I'm lazy). Playing the game I encountered this many times. It didn't add anything. I know repeating the same thought can emphasize the idea. But in porn it kinda feels the opposite, like the idea is diluted, and minus to horny.

Sometimes it works, sometimes it's repeating the same idea by adding additional info. For example:
Dialog1: His dick is so big.
Dialog2: The biggest dick I have seen in my life.
Dialog3: Will this dick even fit.
dialog4: This dick stretched my through to the max.
dialog1 just states the facts. dialog2 adds more info about the character. dialog3 compares and thinks about the future. dialog4 remembers what happened in the past. This one I took from this game too. How good horny dialogue should be. It's just feels like the author sometimes just starts being lazy. I say at least 20% of dialogue can be shortened and made less tedious to read.

This complain is more retarded, but I hate 3-5 words dialog boxes, I hate clicking and clicking again and again. And this game has shit ton of them. But this is just my preferences.

To finish this constructive criticism Ill say what I liked about the game. Felix is a nice written character. Lovable fuckboy student + the teacher. It's a nice combination. We don't really need a stereotypical bad scary guy. How it was in the last game. It feels like the author put a lot of thoughts in him. Still the game isn't finish maybe he still is. its hard to understand more from present content.

I wish in the future we have 2 more perspectives, the students. Daniele and her cuck with the black geek. Should be something interesting to have 4 perspectives instead of 2, this is something I never seen in a game like this. and they can mingle and intertwine with each others routes.