VN Ren'Py Turning the Page [v0.30.0] [Azienda]

[MilkyWay5]

Just played update 27, idk why I expected it to be slightly longer but I guess this is it, we're approaching the end and what a ride it's been. Azienda's biggest game so far and it doesn't disappoint. Nice long beautiful reveal scene, with a few really brutal lines, at this point Sophie doesn't care anymore she just lets it all out lol

I saw a few people saying that it's unfair to felix, it honestly puzzles me how normies despite being warned a thousand times still keep playing NTR games and then proceed to complain that the MC gets cucked. I my case I love seeing the MC getting completely destroyed in every possible way, some people prefer when it's a bit milder but in any case that's to be expected in a NTR-themed game. It's like watching a horror movie and complain that it's scary, like that's the whole point of it.

It's not over yet, I'm sure Azienda will do multiple endings like their previous games, so I'll wait for that before leaving a final review but it's looking very strong so far. The amount of playtime is massive compared to similar VNs, art is solid (feels a little inconsistent, like it's a different artstyle depending on the scene, but that's not necessarily a bad thing), writing is overall good but the pacing was a bit too slow towards the middle of the game (updates 12-18 roughly).

I'm not sure what's planned currently but an ending where you can choose to avoid the reveal for a while longer and get some more crazy NTR scenes would be hot af imo. In-game you would justify that with a mix of denial and cluelessness, that would still be unrealistic but I don't care that much about realism in porn games tbh. Some completely ridiculous stuff like they invite Zack over at their apartment and while Felix watches TV they fuck in the next room or something.

Looking forward to more good stuff in the other endings. Azienda if you're reading can we have some Mom NTR (like Kyoko) in the next project after this please

 

[Adviar5050]

Just played update 27, idk why I expected it to be slightly longer but I guess this is it, we're approaching the end and what a ride it's been. Azienda's biggest game so far and it doesn't disappoint. Nice long beautiful reveal scene, with a few really brutal lines, at this point Sophie doesn't care anymore she just lets it all out lol

I saw a few people saying that it's unfair to felix, it honestly puzzles me how normies despite being warned a thousand times still keep playing NTR games and then proceed to complain that the MC gets cucked. I my case I love seeing the MC getting completely destroyed in every possible way, some people prefer when it's a bit milder but in any case that's to be expected in a NTR-themed game. It's like watching a horror movie and complain that it's scary, like that's the whole point of it.

It's not over yet, I'm sure Azienda will do multiple endings like their previous games, so I'll wait for that before leaving a final review but it's looking very strong so far. The amount of playtime is massive compared to similar VNs, art is solid (feels a little inconsistent, like it's a different artstyle depending on the scene, but that's not necessarily a bad thing), writing is overall good but the pacing was a bit too slow towards the middle of the game (updates 12-18 roughly).

Looking forward to more good stuff in the other endings

I've been vocal about how I'm not crazy about the story and how it is going. I wouldn't call it complaining. I'm not whining, I'm just stating how I would like the story to end. It doesn't mean I'm right and it doesn't mean the developer has to go the way I said. It's just that I've been invested in this story since day one and have enjoyed the way it was told. But now that the true darker side has come out, it's not what I like. For those that do, I think that's great and I'm glad they are enjoying the game. It's just an opinion, doesn't make it right, doesn't make it wrong, just makes it mine.

 

[MilkyWay5]

I've been vocal about how I'm not crazy about the story and how it is going. I wouldn't call it complaining. I'm not whining, I'm just stating how I would like the story to end. It doesn't mean I'm right and it doesn't mean the developer has to go the way I said. It's just that I've been invested in this story since day one and have enjoyed the way it was told. But now that the true darker side has come out, it's not what I like. For those that do, I think that's great and I'm glad they are enjoying the game. It's just an opinion, doesn't make it right, doesn't make it wrong, just makes it mine.

That's fair, I was more referring to people that are leaving 1-star reviews saying it's the worst game ever when just by reading their posts you can see those people have no clue how NTR works. I always think it's a bit pathetic, like if you see the game has the NTR tag and you know it makes you mad just move along why are you even playing something you don't like?

NTR stories always start off light and innocent and turn darker at the end, that's the whole "corruption" trope to create a contrast between how the character was in the beginning vs where it ends up. I'm sure a good/wholesome ending will be added eventually, it's just not a priority I guess.

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

I'm sure a good/wholesome ending will be added eventually, it's just not a priority I guess.

It's already in. Have Sophie refuse to fool around with Zack after he tries to quit the team and you get the good ending. There probably won't be any more.

 

[Adviar5050]

That's fair, I was more referring to people that are leaving 1-star reviews saying it's the worst game ever when just by reading their posts you can see those people have no clue how NTR works. I always think it's a bit pathetic, like if you see the game has the NTR tag and you know it makes you mad just move along why are you even playing something you don't like?

NTR stories always start off light and innocent and turn darker at the end, that's the whole "corruption" trope to create a contrast between how the character was in the beginning vs where it ends up. I'm sure a good/wholesome ending will be added eventually, it's just not a priority I guess.

I actually enjoy NTR games. I usually play those that don't have a cheating tag but I've also enjoyed those that did. I agree. There are so many games with no NTR tag and whenever a new one comes out within five minutes you get the question "is NTR avoidable?" I just don't get it. I don't enjoy point and click games so I don't usually play them, and if I do, I'm sure not going to complain about the point and click aspect. I don't know another tag where there is so much angst over it.

 

[MilkyWay5]

It's already in. Have Sophie refuse to fool around with Zack after he tries to quit the team and you get the good ending. There probably won't be any more.

I see, well if there was one I wouldn't play it anyway, I'm just a degenerate that enjoys the MC's suffering lol

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

I see, well if there was one I wouldn't play it anyway, I'm just a degenerate that enjoys the MC's suffering lol

Kinda wish I did. I only play the Sophie path but seeing everyone being so happy and sweet and everything working out perfect made the main path leave a bad taste in my mouth. Came here to watch Felix suffer and after the good ending all I want is to give the good boi estrogen and headpats.

 

[tata19]

I think the main thing about the next update is the meeting with Brooks because Sophie and Zack are not going to have such a sweet ending.

 

[porkone]

I think the main thing about the next update is the meeting with Brooks because Sophie and Zack are not going to have such a sweet ending.

I think this meeting will have bad consequences, but for Felix

 

[MattX]

I think this meeting will have bad consequences, but for Felix

I don't really see how. It would honestly feel kinda random if something worse happened to him. I think we will either see Zack face the consequences for what ever he did to Brooks or Brooks gets uno reversed by Zack.

 

[Zarkhy]

I don't really see how. It would honestly feel kinda random if something worse happened to him. I think we will either see Zack face the consequences for what ever he did to Brooks or Brooks gets uno reversed by Zack.

Ok, but in the second scenario where Zack pulls an uno reverse, would that/could that not include something like Felix getting fired and/or Sophie promoted to his spot?

 

[MattX]

Ok, but in the second scenario where Zack pulls an uno reverse, would that/could that not include something like Felix getting fired and/or Sophie promoted to his spot?

Maybe it would include Sophie not getting fired and Zack not being expelled, but I don't see why they would care enough to fire Felix or have enough leverage to promote Sophie.

 

[porkone]

Maybe it would include Sophie not getting fired and Zack not being expelled, but I don't see why they would care enough to fire Felix or have enough leverage to promote Sophie.

What about Zack is expelled and Felix being promoted to … Zack’s personal home tutor?

 

[MattX]

What about Zack is expelled and Felix being promoted to … Zack’s personal home tutor?

Why? Do you think they want to see Felix more often or vice versa?

 

[Adhdclassic]

Once Felix talks the black kid he peeks his curiosity about Zack and Sophia. He gets the story of what's going on by Amy. Due to he likes Felix him, Brooks, Amy and the two other students plot something against Zack and Sophia. That would be a good addition to the story. Usually the MMC is left to suffer and deal with things alone.

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

What about Zack is expelled and Felix being promoted to … Zack’s personal home tutor?

Yesssss turn Felix into a girl and have him cuck Sophie. Last scene can be Felix wearing a wedding dress being carried out of a church like a princess while Sophie looks on with either a confused pikachu look or a anime style horny nose bleed.

 

[CleanJebboy]

No, not random at all really in my opinion. Brooks has 'worked' for Zack from the beginning, always keeping Felix busy at just the right times while keeping him on tenterhooks about the job so he feels unsettled. And I bet he still 'works' for him here. It wouldn't surprise me if this meeting becomes a dump on Felix affair where he loses his job for completely unfair reasons. Something like Zack claims Felix refused to help him and corrupted Sophie agrees, as a result Brooks has to fire Felix for failing his duties.

 

[tata19]

It could be that Brooks did promote Zack's relationship with Sophie so that he could have a valid excuse to kick Zack out of school for inappropriate behavior and thus get revenge. In turn, Felix cannot contain his still painful love for Sophie and gives his position to her so as not to leave her on the street. Anyway anything can happen

 

[Terix3]

Some theory about Brooks.
Maybe Zach was working on Brooks orders? Like how strange that Brooks was on Felix ass all the time and then suddenly made 180 turn, but not until Zach trapped Sophie? Suddenly school rep didn't matter, team didn't matter... all too strange. Maybe Zach was to break Sophie for him and he started being nice to Felix because he was enjoying his blindness ? Maybe all those hints he was giving was jut for his entertainment because it was funny for him how despite all that Felix still doesn't realize he is being cucked? But then Zach actually has fallen for Sophie and wasn't reporting back the true progress he has made with her ?

 

[CorruptYourWife]

next update be like