VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Turning the Page [v1.0.0] [Azienda]

Generic NTR story that structurally is kind of the same as any other NTR story except the execution is really good. I'll probably preface by stating I didn't read everything in this game because it's like really long and I kind of got a feeling of there is alot of stuff in this game that doesn't need to be there entirely. The game is an NTR story so probably helps to remove anything that doesn't really add to it . I could be entirely on that point since I didn't read anything dealing with external characters outside of the main three.

Another issue that I saw is that the FMC looks different when in CGs vs the normal character portraits. Her breasts go up like 3 cup sizes or something whenever a sex scene happens and then go back to be what looks to be a D cup when she's just in her character portrait. It actually slightly jarring I like how she looks in the cg sex scenes so I hope they update her character portraits to just look more line. (Actually I just did a recheck and her tits aren't even consistent throughout all the sex scenes. They inflate over time. Would be hot if it was a story element but i think it's more likely just inconsistent art since the character portraits never change and entirely consistent throughout.)

There is currently only one real route. There is a NTR avoided route that ends the story early on but basically if you go that route it feels like a non story. I can't tell exactly is on the roadmap but it seems at least one or two more routes are planned. I hope these routes end up being some type of MC wins FMC back after corruption route because the current NTR route in the game is brutal. The writers kind of crafted something of a ultimate cuck where the MC doesn't enjoy being cheated on and losing his wife but is too much of a loser to do anything about it other than just take it. They basically write his ending to be as sad as possible and to maximize his suffering the bull and FMC live like this maximum happiness life where they have an amazing sex life are deeply in love , are rich and famous, end up having multiple kids (And its stated that this someone doesn't affect her body at all). I think this is a normal NTR story trope but you really feel like the writer dials it up as hard as it can go without feeling like looney tunes NTR (IDK i'm talking about NTR stories where they go too hard that it just knocks you out of the immersion).

Also this is normal for NTR stories so I don't know if it's worth mentioning but none of the characters are really likeable. They are all in their own way terrible people.

Also animations for sex scenes are good. Some scenes are animated and some aren't. The quality of the drawings is also random sometimes being pretty good and other times feeling shoddy. It honestly feels like you are watching a modern 12 episode cour anime with budgetting issues.

I wanted to like this, but couldn't. The VN started off great, scenes were hot, art was okay. Half way in I started to realize that this is no different than any other ntr VN, Felix is a scrawny idiot with zero redemption qualities and the awareness of a brain dead patient and this goes on until the very end. Zach is the typical blonde chad doing the NTR that the writers want everyone to like, but honestly that just made me hate him more.

First half actually had a story, but remainder only showed how much of a slut zach turned sophie into that I lost interested in reading and only watched the gallery scenes. The past works were better.

At first i thought i could enjoy this game until i found out the male MC is a literal idiot like the writing on that side of the story is just not good at all it kills the females side. I just believe that if the developer makes the male MC just have a brain it could honestly be a 4 to 5 star game

another cliché netorare game where the woman is blackmailed and then turns into a slut, I don't dislike the premise but the writing is so lazy that it bothers me. What I hate most about this game and hate in other similar ones is how dumb and idiotic the male protagonists are made, just because it's more convenient for the story.

Honestly was enjoying this game so damn much but what is with v28 feeling like an extremely rushed ending cause it was bad really bad to the point it could really just ruin everything you had going with the game so far. I truely am disappointed with this latest update

Ok the game to me is just meh.. I had high hopes this game would get better over time, however it seems (including the graphics) to just get worse.
The characters imo are just not likable all around and the story is just the same story I’ve played way too many times in different roles. I saw high reviews and gave it a go, but for me it’s just not worth my time or energy with better games out there .

Reviewing v0.33.0:

Updating the rating to 4 stars now, since the newly added endings actually work for me.


Reviewing v0.28.0:

I really would like to give this one a 4-, or maybe even a 5-star-rating...

The artwork is decent (except for the very final scene in Sophie's route -- which is highly inconsistent with what has been presented before), the setup is ridiculous yet fun, and -- the parameters given -- the storyline [initially] is not too outlandish to break one's suspension of disbelief.

But:

• especially in the first dozen of "chapters", way too many words (pointless dialogs/inner monologs) ...it just drags on and on -- and so even I, who usually does not skip from scene to scene, cannot see myself reading another line of what ultimately feels like filler text;
• I don't buy the outlined progression of transformation from loving wife to "cock sleeve" (the second half of Sophie's route is okay-ish, however);
• Felix's route is lackluster; and
• as too often in this genre, TTP is kind of a kinetic novel, hence missing meaningful choices.

So, I rate it a 3 to 3.5 for now... future releases may push it towards a 4.0 rating (iff the artwork used in the final scene for Sophie isn't an indication towards where this project is heading).

Although thus is less evil and less logical than how I would like them to be, I believed in the dev, they will not dissapoint

At this point it's a lovey dovey relationship ending with ntr spices.

I hope sophie page still gets the ending she deserved, there is no point in cheating, cheating is bad, make it didactic for all the cheater out there, expose their gaffe.

Great game, great plot, graphics, sound, conversations and double povs, MC was created in all his imperfection, one of the biggest justified losers, every action that goes against him is well created and motivated. Compliments

What happened to the art? It's like 3 different people are trying to replicate the art from the first half and now none of it looks as good as it used to. Story is also kind of a let down now. It had a decent slow pace to her corruption and some believable writing at first, but I think either the dev or his pats got annoyed at the pace because she starts throwing herself at the dude in the span of of a single update and she just keeps doing it more and more ridiculously after that. Since then the writing has really dipped in quality. Something you would see from an explicit wattpad fanfic. The first half I would've gave a solid 4, but this second half would get a solid 2.

We all have varying preferences with these games in terms of how frequent and easy the sex scenes come and this may be a bit of a slow burn for some.

However, to me, it's strength is in it's writing and plot development. The dev has done a great job maintaining a progressing story and may be the single best dev i've seen on here when it comes to writing dialogue (and inner monologues). The updates come regularly and are always significant for those that really care about that sorta thing.

Definitely give this game the most enthusiastic recommend.

Great script, great animation and it makes you anticipate for the next update. The dev made a hell of a good job. wish to see another games from him with that quality of course if he has the time to do so. But nonetheless, Fantastic work !

This was one of my favourites and it's a real shame how the game is coming along. The major let down it's for sure the art. It's just so incoherent. It started as the picture you see on the cover and I really liked it but now it's becoming more and more irrealistic and disproportionate, with cocks longer than an arm and tits bigger than space hoppers. The story is also becoming really dull. There was once a lady who loved her husband but she was also draw towards a lustfull relationship with a misterius student of her. Now there is just a cockslut who fucks with that student in front of her stupidly naive husband without caring less. This game should not be called "Turning the Page" but rather "Burn the entire B(r)ook(s)".

The game to date deserves three stars for some reasons, I'll start by saying that the story, the various aspects of the characters, are well constructed, the way in which Sofia goes from a super devoted wife to a now lost traitor, has an excellent rhythm, the right times of corruption, Zack has everything to be able to win this match, physique, beauty, super gifted, even a person who knows how to use his brain, on the other hand, Felix, I can understand that physically he had to be the opposite of Zack to start this story, but as often happens, I find the difference in the size of the penis too enormous, it's like saying that the bigger penis wins, but here it's not like that, already Zack has all the physical qualities to be able to win hands down, however that's not the case the real reason for the difference, and this is why I give three stars instead of five, is that a character that was too stupid and childish was created, and this already depreciates the challenge a bit, a Felix who has too many shortcomings would not win against anyone, not even with the his nerdy student, then another negative side, at least for me, who is now using this duo Sofia and Zack who fuck, for too long without having a logical end, or because with every update a sex scene or two occurs, with a little more and more corruption, lastly we are at the point that Sofia has now decided that Zack will be her new husband and father of her children, good, yes, but this should make us understand, that we are now at the solution of the story, add other similar updates, well, it would make us lose enthusiasm, and it would give little credibility to the Company, now, what does Zack really want or want from all this?

Starts a little slow but once it gets going it's fantastic.

This game has all the elements of what makes great NTR:
- Woman being corrupted and discovering a whole new world of pleasure and awakening to both the thrill of the act and the taboo nature of the infidelity
- Naive workaholic husband who keeps on assuming the best because his wife couldn't possibly be unhappy, unfulfilled, and undersexed in their marriage.
- Dude stealing the wife corrupting her at just the right pace
- Appearance changes reflecting ongoing corruption
- Sexy art, the animations are a nice bonus
- Both perspectives, you can see wife or husband PoV
- Most importantly, writing that balances believability and suspense, while pushing forward character development, in the characters that it matters most in - the wife first and foremost, everbody else comes second.

I want to say more but it's difficult. That is, it's easy to articulate what makes bad or mediocre NTR, but when somebody gets all the ingredients right and does so in the right amounts to make great NTR... Well there's a very long list of checkboxes that need to be ticked for the best NTR and Turning the Page ticks them all.

Nearly perfect game.

pros:
- good art
- good two routes (netorare (male pov) and corruption (female pov))
- some animations
- slow, but not very slow corruption

cons:
- the choices are pretty pointless (only the text changes a bit but the following scenes are the same)

Summary:
Its definitely worth a try cuz both routes are separate from each other. Means, if you play netorare route you will only notice how she changes but will not see, expect some hidden scenes, how she will get fucked.

I wanted to like this story. It had so much potential to me, but over time it's kind of lost touch with... well, reality. In no reality does a guy like Zack fall in love with a girl like Sophie for real. I've known guys like Zack in real life and even been friends with them.. It takes them changing before they finally are willing to settle down.. and usually a hard knock in the head while they're at it.

At first when I was going through it, I started to think maybe I'm just not as into NTR as I used to be? But no. After reading some other input from others here, I think I've come to understand the true reason I'm having issues with liking this.. It's that everyone here is suddenly acting completely out of character. There is a force going behind the scenes to bend over backwards to make this work the way some grand designer is wanting it to happen and you can plainly see it

When you start to see the issues and the crumpled edges that are being shoved together to start to make things work it starts to break the immersion and soon you're sitting there saying "Yeah. This is all stupid and ludicrous." Then you soon find yourself hating nearly every character in the story and next thing you know it's just not enjoyable.. at all..

Simple facts are that this story should have featured choices.. Making it so that people have some input on how things go is a decent step in the right direction towards making harder falls feel not as stupid.. especially as unbelievable as any of these are.. primarily because at that point we're the one who put them there and we're the ones who wanted to see the ludicrous thing. But if we're not given the choice, we're left analyzing what we were given which then reveals what this story actually is..

Which unfortunately isn't a story of NTR.. It's a story about abuse.. about lack of communication. Sophie is in fact no longer an appealing or attractive person inside or out by the end of the story.. What she had that made her unique is completely gone and I genuinely can't even see what Zack sees in her anymore as he's basically won and achieved what he's after.. (Which brings up a ton of other stupid questions But that's why I've started to dislike this title.. You're left with so many stupid questions)

Anyways. Maybe there will be something that pops up to prove me wrong or to change my mind. But I had this same problem with another game think it was called "A promise best left unkept" I started off thinking I liked it and expecting to get immersed in a story, but I started off almost immediately hating every character in the game.. The bull was a laugh, the story made no damn sense, the girl was an idiot, the cuck was a moron and unmemorable.

I know people would sooner think I'm a moron or discount my input for disliking either of these games.. Because it seems like these days people are more interested in either Defending or Attacking all NTR blindly without actually stopping to open their eyes and realize that there exists good and bad NTR.. not all NTR deserves to be attacked, not all NTR deserves to be defended.

In any case, this kind of stands as a middle of the road sort of piece for me. I could easily see how someone could end up liking it, I could easily see how someone ends up disliking it. I just wanted to put my thoughts to paper on it.

TLDR:
Pros:
+ You don't really have to wait all that long before you start getting scenes
+ Sophie Starts off as an alright character.
+ Has a mixture of Animated and unanimated scenes
+ Has a fairly strong start to the storyline if I'm being honest

Cons:
- Virtual Novel with no choices.. I just don't usually like them, more personal pick
- The ways that the NTR begins is... stupid.. The way that the heroine falls is.. generic..
- There really isn't a lot about this title that isn't already done. I genuinely don't understand why people are upholding this title in particular as being some sort of pinnacle for NTR, when I've not seen it do a single new or original thing..
- All of the characters in the story become pretty forgettable, pretty boring, and pretty generic.. Even Sophie becomes generic closer to the middle of the story so far.. So it's not even like.. towards the end of the story she starts to lose her mind, it's more like middle of the story she starts to lose her personality...

Edit: Came back and realized I'd rated this a 1 star. The game is definitely not a one star whether you like or dislike it. I'd followed this game for quite some time and had enjoyed it thoroughly in its earlier development phases, just overtime I've started to dislike the approach and path being taken by development. I apologize if anyone read this earlier and gathered a bad take on what I wrote..

Ultimately when people click to play these games, they don't care about the rating anyways. They look at the tags then look at the images and then click to play the game based on liking what they see and read there. For me, reviews is just a place to toss out a jumble of thoughts and takes after I've played a game.

Edit 2: The art is now becoming widely more inconsistent. Sophie is being drawn vastly differently in each scene it seems like. Sophie was never intended to be your typical bimbo or slut, the entire premise being sold to us upon introduction of the story was a girl with integrity taking a slow fall, the type of girl you'd think would forever be loyal falling for the guy that typically chases only after the hottest of girls.. This has stopped being the case and since become your average NTR setup.. Complete with squeezing all the wallets of every patron they can and spoon feeding us a story that has already lost all of its interesting points and values.. All there is now is the fap material, and if that's all you're here for, then this kinetic novel is likely perfect for you. But if you were hoping to find any sort of NTR revenge, deep thoughts, a girl regretting her decisions, getting her just desserts, or the bull getting lead to slaughter or the bull dropping the bomb on the slut.. That would be too sophisticated a story for the author of this it seems.. Though gaslighting and mental gymnastics that would make feminazis blush seems to be present.

Zack is legit settling and dating below his level if he settles for a girl like Sophie as she is now. Sophie wasn't designed in the first place to be hot girl material and she's supposed to be one of the smart girls. The fun in her corruption was supposed to be that she's extremely slow to corrupt and even after corruption would likely retain some of her prudishness, and is even smart enough to flip back if she sees through the lies. The fun with Sophie's type of character was always gojng to be in the journey of it and in the slow fall.

What we ended up getting instead is your standard story, with your standard NTR, with your standard bull, your standard cuck, lightning fast corruption and your less than average girl.. Bare in mind, Sophie wasn't created to be attractive, she's supposed to be a nerd. She isn't meant to fulfill the roles of the super hot Milfs or Bimbo type girls, she isn't the type of girl that has guys lining up and jumping at her heels for a turn with her in the sheets.. But yet now after they have all of their patrons and have sufficiently tricked enough of us into subscribing with the promise of a unique heroine and story.. We're sold the exact same damn story all over again. Nothing new. Nothing original. In fact it seems like they want to go back on the old artwork and just rewrite it and change it so that Sophie fits those roles I mentioned before better.. Which goes against her character.. And goes against the promise the devoloper gave to its earlier subscribers..

All in all, I'm changing my rating to a two. If the art actually starts to straighten back up, I might swap it back to three, but it'd take a lot for this series to actually regain my interest at this point.

One of the best, if not the best NTR game i ever played, art is great, the story is good for what it is and the dialogue is too. as of now the game has a considerable amount of content.
I just hope the ending won't be abrupt. even though there are multiple routes in the pipeline.
Good luck to the devs, can't wait for future updates

Unfortunately this is a one sided cucking story. It's not so much a story of corruption, more about the forced situations placed on a character with not enough backbone to stand up for herself and not enough experience to realize she's being used. Instead of this being what I would consider a true NTR story, this is a story about the abuse a person will tolerate in fear of them or their spouse losing their job which later gets twisted into a belief that what they are doing is falling in love.

It would feel different if both stories were filled with similar elements. If they were simply being separated by their work and forced to work with people who are sexually open and vigorously flirty with them. Like if the husband was constantly approached by his female students and having to work late nights to catch up on grading papers, taking on extra responsibilities imposed on him by the dean, etc. While the wife is experiencing similar situations.

Instead what is told is a one sided cucking story where the husband (Felix) basically gets humiliated by an over privileged man child who slowly gets to coheres the wife (Sophie) into having all manner of sex with him while he fucks everything moving like a walking hard-on. It almost makes you wander why is there an option to see Felix's side of the story. There's literally no point and in the end (spoiler) he gets the privilege of, likely, raising someone else's daughter. It actually made me feel bad for the guy. Where as Sophie's playthough is a story of a women getting abused into fucking a guy she barely even knew was alive prior and then apparently loves it so much she simply can't get enough and Felix can no longer satisfy her.

So basically Felix gets cucked, but gets nothing out of it and Sophie ends up in a loveless, sexless (with Felix at least) marriage. Yeah, not a good story. No one would truly walk away happy in this story. But what do I know? This just wasn't for me. If you liked this VN, cool. I hope you can help support the dev and I wish this developer all of the best.

Edit: Realized I gave this a 1 star. It's definitely not a 1 star. If I could I'd give it 2.5/5. It's just Meh, but seeing as how I can't do that I'll leave it at 2. The story is really off putting on all fronts and the characters are incredibly unlikeable. Artwork is on point though.

I did like it at first but then we lost the contention between Mrs. Page and Zach and now it has switched from one boring love story to a ridiculous, boring love story.

I mean come on, Zach is an all star athlete at the college, he is rich, he has girls throwing themselves at him left and right but he just happens to fall in love with Mrs. Page???? It's obvious that Zach is a player and the reality is that he has played Mrs. Page who is an idiot who has fallen in love with her blackmailer. She even walked in on him having a 3some at one point. And listening to those two drone on about how they love each other just grinds on my nerves.

Also when the dev changed Mrs. Page she lost a lot of attractiveness for me. I think she looks more generic now. It almost seems like the dev changed her body as well like she is getting fatter not really sure about that maybe it's just the hair change I don't like.

I was hoping for some swinging and gangbangs but instead it is just a boring love, ntr game how weird to put ntr and love in the same sentence but thats what it is or at least what it appears to be.