VN Ren'Py Completed Turning the Page [v1.0.0] [Azienda]

[Zarkhy]

3 more days i think?? or maybe someone could share it now for the weekend

Let's hope not, because the Game Access tier release isn't until monday.

 

[Lexam]

I'm gonna leak next 0.17 android version, just to see all the positive comments.

 

[luiz]

Any heroes?

 

[Oriandu]

A "hero" probably ain't going to show up until at least Monday.

 

[proudmoore91]

I really agree with the posts above. It’s nice to see well written criticism.

My ideas that could improve the story and make it hotter would be:
1. Make it more difficult for Sophie to fall. Don’t make Zach better than Felix in everything. Sexual prowess sure, but not also in physical beauty, charisma, emotional openness, being a romantic, having a better career (Zach’s possibly future NBA player), etc. all at once. It would make the struggle for Sophie feel more real and would give her some difficult decisions to make. (“He’s good in bed, but not much else… Is this worth it to me?).
If it were like this we also wouldn’t need so many remainders how Sophie feels pity for Felix or how she regrets sex with Zach. She could enjoy the sex fully and still have a dilemma to solve.

2. Have Sophie genuinely try to keep her life with Felix going. Instead of replacing Felix with Zach so quickly, have a period where Sophie’s having a functioning life with her husband AND having an affair with Zach at the same time. You know, like real affairs usually go. This would have made it more realistic but also open to much more organic situations for Felix to get suspicious than getting Zach’s videos and pictures. This “affair period” could have lasted for months.

Imagine if Sophie kept having regular sex with Felix while having an affair. We could have Felix slowly getting a feeling that he’s not satisfying her in bed and maybe trying his best to improve himself. It would make it much more tragic if Felix was somewhat average, trying his best, improving himself and still coming short against Zach. Sure, go wild at the end, make him pathetic etc, but there was (and is) a potential for so much more than “loser has no chance against an ultra chad”.

I talk about that a couple days ago, I think the moment when Sophi comes with her ass totally broken, and she had problems to walk It's a GREAT scene, I'd say It was one of the biggest and most exciting moments of the novel but it was a very short scene. It would have been incredible if Felix at night while she was sleeping, he had looked at her ass and seen her hole completly stretchout. IT WOULD HAVE BEEN AN EPIC MOMENT!! He have 0 anal experience so... maybe that food she eat in gamecom could have been the culprit hehe

I love when games give this EPIC moments a lot of text and emphasize to make it more special and unique. It was the first time that his wife was fucked in the ass and there are no comments about it or related scenes for Felix where he suspects the slightest, just an "ankle pain". That's the only thing I can say that made me sad. I felt like the scene and the moment was wasted.

 

[Adviar5050]

So I played the last update. I am a low level patreon and it released to us yesterday. Very interesting. I won't spoil anything, there are plenty on here already, I'll just say I can't wait for the public release to talk about this update. They probably pushed the narrative farther in this update then in the last four combined. It is obvious now where this is going to go. I was holding out hope that this game would end with Sophie leaving Felix for Zack and him denying her and leaving her crying at his dorm room knowing he doesn't really want her and she can't go back to her husband.....After playing the last update, I'm losing hope of that. I sincerely hope I'm wrong but I doubt it.

 

[jaybae01]

So I played the last update. I am a low level patreon and it released to us yesterday. Very interesting. I won't spoil anything, there are plenty on here already, I'll just say I can't wait for the public release to talk about this update. They probably pushed the narrative farther in this update then in the last four combined. It is obvious now where this is going to go. I was holding out hope that this game would end with Sophie leaving Felix for Zack and him denying her and leaving her crying at his dorm room knowing he doesn't really want her and she can't go back to her husband.....After playing the last update, I'm losing hope of that. I sincerely hope I'm wrong but I doubt it.

can I ask why you're losing hope of that and where you see this ending (based on the last update)?

 

[LostBR]

So I played the last update. I am a low level patreon and it released to us yesterday. Very interesting. I won't spoil anything, there are plenty on here already, I'll just say I can't wait for the public release to talk about this update. They probably pushed the narrative farther in this update then in the last four combined. It is obvious now where this is going to go. I was holding out hope that this game would end with Sophie leaving Felix for Zack and him denying her and leaving her crying at his dorm room knowing he doesn't really want her and she can't go back to her husband.....After playing the last update, I'm losing hope of that. I sincerely hope I'm wrong but I doubt it.

Honestly, its having a reverse effect on me lol i hope i get to smoke on dat Sophie pack

 

[l_syaw]

Can't wait for Amy and Sophie to bully Felix by brutally critiquing his mathematical proofs while praising Zack's. Felix's intelligence and job are the only two things he's got going for himself.

 

[Boobitz]

So I played the last update. I am a low level patreon and it released to us yesterday. Very interesting. I won't spoil anything, there are plenty on here already, I'll just say I can't wait for the public release to talk about this update. They probably pushed the narrative farther in this update then in the last four combined. It is obvious now where this is going to go. I was holding out hope that this game would end with Sophie leaving Felix for Zack and him denying her and leaving her crying at his dorm room knowing he doesn't really want her and she can't go back to her husband.....After playing the last update, I'm losing hope of that. I sincerely hope I'm wrong but I doubt it.

Azienda has done multiple endings in their games in the past, and considering we already have a 'good ending', your ideal ending still has a high chance of occurring. Zach is a sociopath, and his 'gentleman' personality that he has shown Sophie is fake. I'd say it's much more likely for Zach to turn Sophie into his perfect whore and move on with his life than for them to get a romantic ending.

 

[Animefan_09]

So I played the last update. I am a low level patreon and it released to us yesterday. Very interesting. I won't spoil anything, there are plenty on here already, I'll just say I can't wait for the public release to talk about this update. They probably pushed the narrative farther in this update then in the last four combined. It is obvious now where this is going to go. I was holding out hope that this game would end with Sophie leaving Felix for Zack and him denying her and leaving her crying at his dorm room knowing he doesn't really want her and she can't go back to her husband.....After playing the last update, I'm losing hope of that. I sincerely hope I'm wrong but I doubt it.

Don't lose hope yet, there are choices for a reason and there will be multiple endings, although not as many as their previous game that had a bit too many xD

 

[tata19]

I believe that Sophie was in control until the Valentine's Day event that her frustration and anger was logical and she turned on Zack. From there I think he gave up. Now Felix would have to fight a little to not make it so easy, at least for Zack, but as the story progresses, Felix appears more and more submissive, as if he doesn't react and leaves more to his users. to Sophie. He doesn't even suspect Zack anymore. We'll see what happens when he receives information about his past. I don't know if that attitude changes anything in the last update.

 

[jaybae01]

I really wish we'll get the romantic ending between Zach and Sophie

 

[jaden000]

I really wish we'll get the romantic ending between Zach and Sophie

after all the insane amount of text between them in the game it needs to have this ending at least

 

[Oriandu]

I doubt we'll get a romantic ending between Zack and Sophie by pure virtue of the fact that Zack has been too overly sappy towards her on multiple occasions while also doing everything he can to undermine and sabotage Sophie's relationship with Felix. There's also pretty consistent indications that there's more going on with him than simple attraction to Sophie. The dude is a sleazeball.

 

[dean_athallah]

Oh, the leaker of the .16 apk is definitely a troll. Dude is an unintentional douche at best, purposefully fucking with people at worst.

Oh yeah, im gonna release the mac version next. Troll is love, troll is life.

Stay tuned for next update for free ❤

 

[Adultress]

So I played the last update. I am a low level patreon and it released to us yesterday. Very interesting. I won't spoil anything, there are plenty on here already, I'll just say I can't wait for the public release to talk about this update. They probably pushed the narrative farther in this update then in the last four combined. It is obvious now where this is going to go. I was holding out hope that this game would end with Sophie leaving Felix for Zack and him denying her and leaving her crying at his dorm room knowing he doesn't really want her and she can't go back to her husband.....After playing the last update, I'm losing hope of that. I sincerely hope I'm wrong but I doubt it.

Ah, the incel fantasy ending.

 

[Terix3]

I talk about that a couple days ago, I think the moment when Sophi comes with her ass totally broken, and she had problems to walk It's a GREAT scene, I'd say It was one of the biggest and most exciting moments of the novel but it was a very short scene. It would have been incredible if Felix at night while she was sleeping, he had looked at her ass and seen her hole completly stretchout. IT WOULD HAVE BEEN AN EPIC MOMENT!! He have 0 anal experience so... maybe that food she eat in gamecom could have been the culprit hehe

Haha that sounds like a fun idea.
Felix: "Uhm Sophie maybe we shouldn't do it? You appear to have some ..gastral problems, you should go see a doc"

I doubt we'll get a romantic ending between Zack and Sophie by pure virtue of the fact that Zack has been too overly sappy towards her on multiple occasions while also doing everything he can to undermine and sabotage Sophie's relationship with Felix. There's also pretty consistent indications that there's more going on with him than simple attraction to Sophie. The dude is a sleazeball.

That is most likely end but than it is possible that Zack will end up developing smth for Sophie beyond the desire to destroy Falix marriage. But the interesting part for me is how Brooks ties to all this. Him telling Felix to not make same mistakes as he did, did Zack cuck him ? What sort of blackmail Zack has on him. Imo it was strange how he was all nuts about his team success till Felix told he is messing with his marriage and from that point he went 180%. Will he go another 180% if he believes Felix has been neglecting wife?
I think him and Zack are enemies but it would be interesting if they would team up to make the team real success with help of Sophies body

 

[nickrotund]

well i played it and storywise it is great progess but disapointed in the sex scenes.. next version maybe more my taste

 

[dean_athallah]

If we're being fair there's only so much variation on the NTR formula. Sooner or later every story will devolve to either "I still love my partner but the sex with this other person is too good." or "My partner is so pathetic. Gonna ride this giant dick behind his back lol" By the nature of the genre you're going to experience a certain amount of repetition. Once you've experienced around five different NTR things you've pretty much read, watched, or listened to all of the forms of the genre. It's about the presentation and I think Turning the Page does that pretty well, especially since they've done a pretty solid job with the art style.

With that in mind I think part of the problem with TTP starting to feel repetitious is simply that it is repetitious. Everything Sophie does ends with pity for Felix. Whether she is coerced, reluctant, or willing she always pities Felix.

As for Felix himself... outside of being a pushover he is actually pretty average. Prior to Zack going spelunking it seemed pretty clear that Sophie was mostly satisfied with Felix in the bed and as a husband. The fact that she still insists that she prefers Felix romantically and pretty late in her corruption physically makes this obvious to me. Since, based on the previews, .16 involves anal that pretty much leaves a vaginal creampie as the final vestigial remains of Sophie's relationship with Felix. We're at the point where typically in NTR the partner being stolen has started to turn on their original partner. What makes this feel a little lesser than it probably should is the simple fact that Felix has been maintained as an object of pity for longer than he necessarily should have been, the fact that he's the deuteragonist is not helping matters as playing the game from his perspective necessitates delaying Sophie completely turning from pitying him to disdaining him for as long as possible. Honestly I think the actual NTR would be better if Felix wasn't a playable character. The game would be worse but we would probably be past the "poor Felix" stage and onto the "lol Felix" stage.

that’s literally one of the reasons why I’ve decided to fuck this and leak it every month just to make it stop.

This is actually at the base level an endless, perpetual cycle of the same thing. Many people are willingfully becoming slaves and do not realize that they are actually trapped to this silly boring thing.