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[mzer0]

Preview for 28 is up on the Patreon and...Sophie looks happy.

Does that mean she got a happy ending with Zack?

Not enough information to decide, which is likely intentional.

I guess the real question is whether or not the preview takes place before or after the meeting with Brooks.

We'll soon find out...EDIT: Find out how much plot armor Sophie has, that is.

 

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[Adhdclassic]

One day these Devs are going to create a don't give a fuck hero. Sophia bouncing on Zach and Felix sees it. He drops his pants and rams his dick up her ass and starts pulling her hair. She screaming what are you doing he's like shut the fuck up you wanted dick well you are getting all you want. Zach starts complaining Felix punches him in the face and tells him shut up and give this bitch what she wants then punches him again. Sophia screaming goes to pleasureable moans. Felix smacks her and say is this what you wanted to be treated like a whore. As soon as he nuts 2 guys from Zachs team come in takes Zach ties him to a chair. Sophia starts talking Felix grabs her mouth and whispers I am going to give you exactly what you want. She is happy at his take charge attitude until she sees Zachs team come in. Well, you can guess the rest except when the guys are ready to nut, they bust in the Zachs face. After it is over Felix cracks Zachs nuts. Zach drops out of school. Sophia stays with Felix who has her railed by the players when they pass a test as her punishment. Brooks gives Felix a promotion for the increase in positive grades. This should have been an ending for Felix, he would get his manhood back. Yes, I have imagination.

 

[tata19]

One day these Devs are going to create a don't give a fuck hero. Sophia bouncing on Zach and Felix sees it. He drops his pants and rams his dick up her ass and starts pulling her hair. She screaming what are you doing he's like shut the fuck up you wanted dick well you are getting all you want. Zach starts complaining Felix punches him in the face and tells him shut up and give this bitch what she wants then punches him again. Sophia screaming goes to pleasureable moans. Felix smacks her and say is this what you wanted to be treated like a whore. As soon as he nuts 2 guys from Zachs team come in takes Zach ties him to a chair. Sophia starts talking Felix grabs her mouth and whispers I am going to give you exactly what you want. She is happy at his take charge attitude until she sees Zachs team come in. Well, you can guess the rest except when the guys are ready to nut, they bust in the Zachs face. After it is over Felix cracks Zachs nuts. Zach drops out of school. Sophia stays with Felix who has her railed by the players when they pass a test as her punishment. Brooks gives Felix a promotion for the increase in positive grades. This should have been an ending for Felix, he would get his manhood back. Yes, I have imagination.

That could be a possible ending if only Felix had an at least normal penis.

 

[Adhdclassic]

That could be a possible ending if only Felix had an at least normal penis.

Think that irritates me too. My do all these guys have Vienna sausages for penises. Average size dick dudes get fucked over too. Change the template.

 

[jaybae01]

One day these Devs are going to create a don't give a fuck hero. Sophia bouncing on Zach and Felix sees it. He drops his pants and rams his dick up her ass and starts pulling her hair. She screaming what are you doing he's like shut the fuck up you wanted dick well you are getting all you want. Zach starts complaining Felix punches him in the face and tells him shut up and give this bitch what she wants then punches him again. Sophia screaming goes to pleasureable moans. Felix smacks her and say is this what you wanted to be treated like a whore. As soon as he nuts 2 guys from Zachs team come in takes Zach ties him to a chair. Sophia starts talking Felix grabs her mouth and whispers I am going to give you exactly what you want. She is happy at his take charge attitude until she sees Zachs team come in. Well, you can guess the rest except when the guys are ready to nut, they bust in the Zachs face. After it is over Felix cracks Zachs nuts. Zach drops out of school. Sophia stays with Felix who has her railed by the players when they pass a test as her punishment. Brooks gives Felix a promotion for the increase in positive grades. This should have been an ending for Felix, he would get his manhood back. Yes, I have imagination.

well thank god you're not a dev

 

[Walter Victor]

One day these Devs are going to create a don't give a fuck hero. Sophia bouncing on Zach and Felix sees it. He drops his pants and rams his dick up her ass and starts pulling her hair. She screaming what are you doing he's like shut the fuck up you wanted dick well you are getting all you want. Zach starts complaining Felix punches him in the face and tells him shut up and give this bitch what she wants then punches him again. Sophia screaming goes to pleasureable moans. Felix smacks her and say is this what you wanted to be treated like a whore. As soon as he nuts 2 guys from Zachs team come in takes Zach ties him to a chair. Sophia starts talking Felix grabs her mouth and whispers I am going to give you exactly what you want. She is happy at his take charge attitude until she sees Zachs team come in. Well, you can guess the rest except when the guys are ready to nut, they bust in the Zachs face. After it is over Felix cracks Zachs nuts. Zach drops out of school. Sophia stays with Felix who has her railed by the players when they pass a test as her punishment. Brooks gives Felix a promotion for the increase in positive grades. This should have been an ending for Felix, he would get his manhood back. Yes, I have imagination.

Yes, you obviously have imagination.

But I wonder why you bother playing an NTR game where the NTR is not avoidable, because your scenario is never going to happen in one. It seems that playing this one is just leading to frustration for you.

And just look at the Felix's in these games. There is no way they can take on the Zach's physically. I can't seeing any of them saying, "SHAZAM!", and turning into Bruce Lee.

 

[ItsNotUs]

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Sophie has a narrow face here. I can assume that this is the ending of the future of Sophia and Zack where she, having lost weight and grown up, gives Zack a blowjob under the blanket. It is obvious that this ending will be "lovey-dovey"!
But personally, i don’t understand that Zack was so initially determined to ruin Felix’s life by making a whore out of Sophie and how could he leave her, how could he fall in love with her? He has an endless number of options for who he can be with!
For me this ending is not interesting and disappointing!

 

[mzer0]

Sophie has a narrow face here. I can assume that this is the ending of the future of Sophia and Zack where she, having lost weight and grown up, gives Zack a blowjob under the blanket. It is obvious that this ending will be "lovey-dovey"!
But personally, i don’t understand that Zack was so initially determined to ruin Felix’s life by making a whore out of Sophie and how could he leave her, how could he fall in love with her? He has an endless number of options for who he can be with!
For me this ending is not interesting and disappointing!

Slow down, friend. We don't know what the ending is yet.

Though, as I said, if Sophie does get to 'ride off into the sunset' with Zack it's gonna be one of those "Yeah...Okay...Suuuuure." kinda endings for me.

Personally, I'm still hoping this line from Felix was foreshadowing and not just a throwaway:

 

[ItsNotUs]

Slow down, friend. We don't know what the ending is yet.

Though, as I said, if Sophie does get to 'ride off into the sunset' with Zack it's gonna be one of those "Yeah...Okay...Suuuuure." kinda endings for me.

Personally, I'm still hoping this line from Felix was foreshadowing and not just a throwaway:
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I would also like to see something like this, but it seems to me that it’s still a lovey ending - let’s see who is right.
I hope that the next update is the ending.

 

[Nefurien]

I will accept any ending but if I don't get the happy one with Sophie and Zack together I'll cry copious tears. I've been waiting for it for like two years

 

[Terox34567]

One day these Devs are going to create a don't give a fuck hero. Sophia bouncing on Zach and Felix sees it. He drops his pants and rams his dick up her ass and starts pulling her hair. She screaming what are you doing he's like shut the fuck up you wanted dick well you are getting all you want. Zach starts complaining Felix punches him in the face and tells him shut up and give this bitch what she wants then punches him again. Sophia screaming goes to pleasureable moans. Felix smacks her and say is this what you wanted to be treated like a whore. As soon as he nuts 2 guys from Zachs team come in takes Zach ties him to a chair. Sophia starts talking Felix grabs her mouth and whispers I am going to give you exactly what you want. She is happy at his take charge attitude until she sees Zachs team come in. Well, you can guess the rest except when the guys are ready to nut, they bust in the Zachs face. After it is over Felix cracks Zachs nuts. Zach drops out of school. Sophia stays with Felix who has her railed by the players when they pass a test as her punishment. Brooks gives Felix a promotion for the increase in positive grades. This should have been an ending for Felix, he would get his manhood back. Yes, I have imagination.

Agreed, there should be a route for Felix like this, note that Cucks will not love this .

 

[Terox34567]

That could be a possible ending if only Felix had an at least normal penis.

Dick size is not a big concern in this matter, he could also turns out To be like aya in the APBLU, just throw some money to some bullies and make his wife regret

 

[Adhdclassic]

well thank god you're not a dev

ouch

 

[TangerineTango]

Never bothered playing the felix route due to time but just wanna know how different zack is there compared to the Sophie route

 

[Adhdclassic]

Yes, you obviously have imagination.

But I wonder why you bother playing an NTR game where the NTR is not avoidable, because your scenario is never going to happen in one. It seems that playing this one is just leading to frustration for you.

And just look at the Felix's in these games. There is no way they can take on the Zach's physically. I can't seeing any of them saying, "SHAZAM!", and turning into Bruce Lee.

Thanks for the compliment . Forgot this one is Unavoidable. Maybe in a multipath game where the NTR will have something different especially since I have read that NTR/cheating and corruption is such a vast subject. Guess it just my wishful thinking.

 

[stunnaboygetem.real]

In fact, yes I do!

BASED

 

[rustyspoon]

Nobody said anything about philosophy.

I am simply saying the game offers commentary on sexuality through the juxtaposition of Zack and Felix. Felix is purposefully written to be unattractive. It’s not rocket science to realize that guys with his characteristics are not that attractive, generally. He’s feminine, meek, unconfident, etc. While Zack is the complete opposite, he’s a masculine, charismatic, confident, socially competent man. He embodies everything that’s attractive to women, generally. I’m sorry but you have to be a complete idiot to not understand how Sophie’s attraction to Zack and Felix’s downfall is an allegory.

You should start a youtube story analysis channel with these kind of deep insights.

The sunken cost fallacy is getting big with this game. The author dropped the ball after the well-done setup. Trying to find allegories and life lessons in the bad writing is a valiant effort, but surely you have better things to do.

I hope, for the next project, the author goes smaller and doesn’t try to bite more than they can chew.

 

[rustyspoon]

The game has become lifeless to me. Three people going through the motions. The level of obscenity and vulgarity is high, yet it doesn’t move me. There is little beneath the thin “Zach good”, “husband bad”.

I’ve played many ntr games before, the concept of extremely vulgar cheating is not enough to satisfy me on its own.
The dialogue, inner monologues and character actions are not believable enough to carry the story. The scenes themselves have become extremely predictable and are boring as a result.

The game wasted a lot of time on setting up plot threads and then refused to develop them further.

 

[stunnaboygetem.real]

You should start a youtube story analysis channel with these kind of deep insights.

The sunken cost fallacy is getting big with this game. The author dropped the ball after the well-done setup. Trying to find allegories and life lessons in the bad writing is a valiant effort, but surely you have better things to do.

I hope, for the next project, the author goes smaller and doesn’t try to bite more than they can chew.

Lol I deleted the comment because I realize there’s really nothing to be gained from it. I know I’m right, but these conversations will just turn into bs and insults, and it’s a pretty sensitive subject, don’t want to hurt feelings.

I just read your comment above. I agree to a very minor extent. I think the extremity of Sophie’s corruption these last few updates isn’t all that believable. I still generally like the updates though, but my favorite part of the story is right before the red hair switch, when she accepts that she willingly wants to have an affair with Zack, was much more believable then.

I also don’t think “Husband bad Zack good” is thin at all. There are many nuanced reasons for why she likes Zack and begins to dislike Felix.

I think the game is written competently in all of the ways that matter most to me. Some situations are so unrealistic that I can’t suspend my disbelief, but Sophie’s psychology for the majority of the game is hot as hell and believable. This game is still one of the hottest things I’ve ever read.