VN Ren'Py Completed Turning the Page [v1.0.0] [Azienda]

[master861]

Nice game and nice ending for me, i only played the female route let's see what comes next

 

[Return_To_Monke]

Pretty sure ya'll are just looking too hard into this and that it was a random chick he banged that looked similar. All the photos that are of Sophia, until the end, don't show her face.

It's a ntr plot so it's highly likely that they aren't wrong.

 

[porkone]

What the fuck. That another girl was fucked without condom, it’s obviously not Sophie.

 

[Zarkhy]

It was some random broad Zach picked up and uploaded video of to throw off suspicion. Simple as that.

 

[Jaceo013]

Sophie and Zac ending was OK, but slight disappointment of no pregnant scenes with Sophie.

 

[ItsNotUs]

Anyway I find all this controversy about the ending very funny, the Dev is famous for the endings where the bad guy always wins, and I played them all, then another consideration, or rather, a question to everyone, summarizing the whole plot of the game, what did you expect? Zack in almost 99% of the endings will be the winner, the one who will always have lost will be Felix, instead for Sophia there will be more options, the summary of the endings will not be beyond these types. I say this because I repeat, the Dev uses these typical endings.

What prevents from doing something new and unexpected? Patreons, fans?

 

[ItsNotUs]

They are standard, they don't have a different way of conceiving the NTR system, they start from this basic point, and we can't complain about endings like these, that's what I wanted to say.

It’s clear that everyone works with the base, but a good creator always improves in all directions!
I’m not talking specifically about any ending of this game, but progress is always good, stagnation will get boring sooner or later!

Look at the example of the Cat, who, instead of make a new game, began to do a "sequel or continuation" of which is no longer followed by the same number of players as before!

 

[Moelay]

Will there be revenge route

 

[mzer0]

Anyway I find all this controversy about the ending very funny, the Dev is famous for the endings where the bad guy always wins, and I played them all, then another consideration, or rather, a question to everyone, summarizing the whole plot of the game, what did you expect? Zack in almost 99% of the endings will be the winner, the one who will always have lost will be Felix, instead for Sophia there will be more options, the summary of the endings will not be beyond these types. I say this because I repeat, the Dev uses these typical endings.

I think you're mischaracterizing the majority of the complaints. Nobody appears to be bothered by the fact that 'Zack won'. Everyone fully expected that.

It's the 'vanilla ending' with Zack, the blackmailing sociopath/psychopath, magically becoming an honest family man that is causing people to call bullshit. Especially when having him dump Sophie would have made much more sense.

The real split here is between people who are dispassionate enough to be able to critique the flaws in the story objectively and those who are so invested in it they can only sing it's praises.

Honestly, I've probably triggered those people again just by typing this.

 

[sick bastard]

honest family man

Every honest family man duty is to film the sex with his wife and secretly send this vids to her ex for years after them split apart. Noted. What's my wife's ex phone number was?...

 

[Nefurien]

Objectively Oh poor world

Sophie and Zac ending was OK, but slight disappointment of no pregnant scenes with Sophie.

Did you check next month preview?

 

[Terix3]

The last pages sound like clowns meeting in a bar:
- Man the drinks are basically water
- and the music is horrible
- the decor is ugly
- waitress is even uglier
- so same time here tomorrow?
- Yea.

 

[Return_To_Monke]

My sub expired :/ What was the preview about?

 

[sick bastard]

The last pages sound like clowns meeting in a bar:

So, same time here mid-october?

My sub expired :/ What was the preview about?

It's

You must be registered to see the links

, you don't need sub to view it. TW: sex during pregnancy.

 

[JevilVerum]

So, same time here mid-october?



It's

You must be registered to see the links

, you don't need sub to view it. TW: sex during pregnancy.

I think they were just talking about the usual four or five trolls pestering ntr threads. How they continue saying they don't like the game but continue playing every month and complaining in an endless, lame cycle. You know, a bit like the famous definition of insanity.

 

[sick bastard]

How they continue saying they don't like the game but continue playing every month

 

[Jaceo013]

Objectively Oh poor world

Did you check next month preview?

Oh, nice! Thanks for letting me know about that!

 

[Walter Victor]

The real split here is between people who are dispassionate enough to be able to critique the flaws in the story objectively and those who are so invested in it they can only sing it's praises.

Honestly, I've probably triggered those people again just by typing this.

What do you expect? You just praised everyone who agrees with you, while disparaging everyone who has a different outlook.

Nice. Very empathetic of you.

People have looked at the game in different ways, and have different points of view. A lot of them, while utterly divergent, are still legitimate. Others just saw what they wanted too see, and are either ecstatic or chagrined.

It is not bad writing or stupid if a game does not go in the way one expected. As I just wrote, people see things and interpret what they see differently.

There is no one here who has been appointed the arbiter of what is good or bad writing, or how to think (or write) about a game.

 

[mzer0]

What do you expect? You just praised everyone who agrees with you

Actually, I'm criticizing the people who won't let me disagree without turning into little babies about it.

It is not bad writing or stupid if a game does not go in the way one expected.

Mischaracterization numero dos.

Do you really think people dislike this ending just because it went against their expectations? Because they were surprised? If you read what people have been saying over the past few pages and that's all you managed to take away, then you either lack reading comprehension, or you're arguing in bad faith. I can't help you in either case.

But now, let's move on to the real reason why I'm even bothering to respond to you...

There is no one here who has been appointed the arbiter of what is good or bad writing

False.

Everyone who has invested anything into a story (whether that be time, money, or both) automatically becomes an 'arbiter' of whether or not that story was well-written.

That means that every single person in this thread who's been following this game for the past 2 years, either begging for a hero every month or supporting it on patreon, is completely entitled to call the writing shit or Shakespeare as they see it. It's their right.

Some choose to exercise that right, others don't. The problem that some of you appear to be having is that there are people exercising in it in a way you don't approve of.

Thank god we don't need your approval.

 

[JevilVerum]

I love when someone is able to write a pile of crap in a neat and tidy way that almost ends up seeming to make sense.