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[Walter Victor]

2. It is stupid on Zack's part, he really gains nothing from it, but has much to lose if Felix exposes those videos.

I don't want to get into the back and forth of this argument, except to agree that it (Zack's action) is stupid. However, in real life (not just in porn games), people often do stupid things that could ruin their lives or even kill them. That is why warnings are put on lawnmowers to not use them to trim hedges. For another instance, I recall an NFL quarterback (Gus Frerotte) who decided it would be a great idea to headbutt a concrete wall during a game and had to be taken to a hospital.

Just take a look at any social media platform and you can readily see idiots doing insane things just for likes. Or read the annual Darwin Awards.

 

[tata19]

The idea of sending videos to Felix would seem to me with a Zack who has not fallen in love with Sophie as he did but with Zack where he dominates Sophie and has her as a toy couple, let's say. Where he took Sophie out as a trophy that he should show her and not as a man in love as he ended up being. But also without seeing Felix's reactions I don't see the reason, it would just be harm, but the idea seems too forced to me.

 

[greenlittleman]

So guys, how come this game is SO BIG? It only has one heroine, as far as I know. Developer's previous games weren't nearly as lengthy. As of now it has more than 300k words total, which is longer than Brandon Sanderson's epic fantasy books. Is the game so slow on plot and development, or does it have a lot of different routes? Also, it seems that it already has endings, so it's near completion already?

The "video letter" thing to me it felt, it was there because it's a classic ntr trope rather than because it was integral to the narrative.

Video letter is a trope for a reason, and the reason being is that it's super hot.

 

[nickku1]

guys, did you read how much abuse zack and Sophie through felix way? the whole thing seems to be zack just wanting to fuck with felix and sophie is an easy way to do it. The thing he likes to most is no sophie, its to berate and belitle felix to any one who would hear him, and sophie part in the hate is super strange, like forced self brain wash, like they both admited that the peak of thier arausal is to abuse felix.

 

[nickku1]

The "sending videos" element to me is the most reasonable aspect you can criticize on this ending, here is why:
1. It hurts realism.
2. It is stupid on Zack's part, he really gains nothing from it, but has much to lose if Felix exposes those videos.
And the most important
3. It conflicts with the "alone and forgotten" theme of this ending. I think it would have been better if no one, not even Zack, gave a shit or thought about Felix anymore, amplifying the hopeless and despair.

The "video letter" thing to me it felt, it was there because it's a classic ntr trope rather than because it was integral to the narrative.

tbh i think its the only realistic aspect of this, the guy fuked her in spite and she was always either think of how worst felix is (not about zack) and became horny af thinking of him or when he is nearby.

 

[CleanJebboy]

Did Zach ever give a reason why he hates Felix so much?

 

[xcalibar4]

Did Zach ever give a reason why he hates Felix so much?

No, not in this update. But I guess he just do it for cheap fun and thrill. He tried to do some bad shit to the other teacher (name was Harold or something) but I guess that teacher and Brooks tried to tame him, so he used Amy to blackmail Brooks so he can do whatever he want. From Amy's bit and piece confession I assume that he just wanted to try out his power and the first scape goat was Sophie and Felix. But when Sophie resisted his blackmail to some degree for long time and later become as twisted as him he fell in love with her!! So I think just to get a small thrill he kept sending those videos, and as implied Felix didn't opened those msg for 5 years until meeting Amy, so the day Felix opened the messages Zack had a great orgasm that day

In Mayumi dev's last game the other FMC (MC's cousin) ruined his marriage because he used to be mean to her when they were little (it was not revealed how much but the fact is that she kept a grudge and that led her to ruin his marriage to teach him a lesson)

I think other ending may reveal it, this ending revealed Amy and Brooks part.

And as like APBLU these type of NTR games reveals bulls logic/cause to torment MC with each ending. (I always wondered if Harry fall for a guy will then Luca become Bi )

 

[John Hentai1102]

Anyways enough about this ending, theres plenty more Im more interested in

the Amy, Sophie path

Idk how much about the games progression was already said by the creator but I do hope we get to see more of the other side characters too get involved

 

[anonsuit]

I knew this game was going to have a weak ending, judging by the previous game made by the developer. but well at least this game has several endings, and the ride was fun so even if the ending was disappointing the rest was fine.

 

[tata19]

In other endings will we see Brooks and Amy's plots more complete? For me, the resolutions of those issues were a little tasteless, as the explanation was very superficial, as it had to be done quickly to finish this ending.

 

[biggestboyo]

Is this game going to get a Felix revenge/kill Zach storyline or is it another cannon vn where the good looking bully wins? I know Fliex is a weak scrawny lil man, but Zach can't stop a bullet for example, and realistically speaking,no husband in rl would just sit around and do nothing unless they don't love them anymore which doesn't seem to be the case here. But i've played enough ntr games with many have brain dead ntr endings where the alpha/chad wins; just a bit disappointed that this turned out to be one of those...again.

 

[Return_To_Monke]

The "sending videos" element to me is the most reasonable aspect you can criticize on this ending, here is why:
1. It hurts realism.
2. It is stupid on Zack's part, he really gains nothing from it, but has much to lose if Felix exposes those videos.
And the most important
3. It conflicts with the "alone and forgotten" theme of this ending. I think it would have been better if no one, not even Zack, gave a shit or thought about Felix anymore, amplifying the hopeless and despair.

The "video letter" thing to me it felt, it was there because it's a classic ntr trope rather than because it was integral to the narrative.

That's what I thought. That video was like a final mocking action we generally see in ntr stories. I think maybe the dev felt compelled to include it since it's a ntr game.

 

[tata19]

What's more, it seems to me that it would have been more interesting for Felix to see them by chance as a happy family. I think it would have been more painful for him than watching those videos.

 

[Malika1234]

off topic... but this game needs an ai art thread like the one for "my new girlfriend"

Love the game btw (havent played recent updates)!

https://f95zone.to/threads/my-new-girlfriend-circlegames-fan-art.218263/

 

[Wizmoe]

What's more, it seems to me that it would have been more interesting for Felix to see them by chance as a happy family. I think it would have been more painful for him than watching those videos.

That's what I expected to happen when I saw that CG posted early, Felix bumping into them when he was in the park.

 

[adcebt1]

I still can't get rid of a sense of disappointment with the ending. I didn't expect anything interesting and still am let down. Honestly, every aspect of this game is medicore at best. I know I'm being harsh, but someone had to say it.

 

[JevilVerum]

I still can't get rid of a sense of disappointment with the ending. I didn't expect anything interesting and still am let down. Honestly, every aspect of this game is medicore at best. I know I'm being harsh, but someone had to say it.

I like that you say that as if it's some absolute truth Fantastic game for me, I can hardly find other netorare games with a writing I like.

 

[adcebt1]

I like that you say that as if it's some absolute truth Fantastic game for me, I can hardly find other netorare games with a writing I like.

Well, maybe you're looking for them in the wrong way.

 

[JevilVerum]

Well, maybe you're looking for them in the wrong way.

You mean I pick the wrong games to play? I try almost all netorare games that come out so I'm not sure your suggestion is of any help.

 

[tata19]

Letting time pass a little, I think that in this finale Sophie's behavior was very good. Once she leans towards Zack, she moves on, leaves Felix behind, stops bothering him, and even has a good deal during the divorce. She does not seek to harm or bother him but to move forward with her life. She focuses on her future family, it can be seen in the videos that Zack sends while they have sex, she never crosses the thought of thinking about Felix. On the other hand, Felix ends up very badly after 5 years still tied to a past without being able to refocus his life. I thought then that he discovers the whole thing between Sophie and Zack and how at that moment he reacts that he was going to be able to get over it with time but no, he becomes a complete idiot.