VN Ren'Py Abandoned Two Stories [v0.2.1] [goldplox]

[goldplos]

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Hey. I am creating Two Stories. The first is a teacher at elite academies. The second is an ordinary student. Each of them has its own secrets. Find out all that is hidden!​

Thread Updated: 2020-09-03
Release Date: 2020-09-03
Developer: goldplox

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Version: 0.2.1
OS: Windows
Language: English, Russian
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[rKnight]

I am creating Two Stories. Each of them has its own secrets. Find out all that is hidden!

It's just a matter of changing the angle of the cam shot... SURPRISE!

 

[Altru]

Sissification through Visual Novel? I'm interested... Early edition? I shall keep very close tabs on this...

 

[HorizonD]

I can guess where the story will go but I have no idea what's going on.

 

[rpinho]

wanna see

 

[Exotica]

Ok so i gave this one a shot. Here are my thought's on it

1: Russian is the main language and therefore the English is EXTREMELY rough. "morning" is spelled 'morninge' in the dame. this is a small example. Not trying to be a man person with what i am saying however I do think the Developer would benefit from a Russian to English proof reader. There are some real rough sentencing errors as well.

2:Renders can be improved overall, some of the lighting within these renders makes a College student look like he has aged 50 years. The last pic in the demo with pink haired woman is another example with the lighting as it is currently She looks old enough to Stallins Great Grand Mother.Again nit trying to be insulting, just trying to point out where the game can be greatly improved.

3: The Introduction.........feels like a 15 year old wrote it. Maybe the Russian main has more to it but the emglish version was a few basic words of " This is me, this is my spot in college, now i go to class" There are many questions that need to be answered Like who is the boy that is going to college? What do his Parents do? How did such a college come onto existence? Whats the name and background of the city? The entire purpose of a Introduction is to give the reader a base floor ground to stand on in the world you are creating. in this version you just throw the reader into the world and run pon with what your doing.

Imagine a Fish being placed in a small mobile life support system and placing it on the moon, then tell it " Go on live and be free" first of all the fish does not know how to control the mobile life support system, second of all how does he know what the basic rules of the environment play against him or for him? A proper introduction helps with all of this.

I Applaud you for the effort you have put into this so far and want to encourage you to improve, I hope you do because this does feel like a interesting game/novel

 

[Deleted member 219172]

I give it a try

 

[GrabberWalkie]

And is sissification compulsory, or are there ways to avoid it?

 

[HorizonD]

For what is in there, you can not avoid it but there is not much to avoid yet. Only a "enforced" feminine hairstyle (he slept through this and afterward the shop was closed)

 

[GrabberWalkie]

For what is in there, you can not avoid it but there is not much to avoid yet. Only a "enforced" feminine hairstyle (he slept through this and afterward the shop was closed)

Ah yes, I did download it. There really isn't much there at all. Kind of sad, I actually liked the "teacher" chick with her black hair better than with the pink. Well, I don't think I'll be playing it since it looks like the dude won't have much choice in being sissified. Not my cup of tea at all.

 

[jaydillah]

I have no fucking idea what's happening at any given time in this game.

 

[goldplos]

I have no fucking idea what's happening at any given time in this game.

same here

 

[Altru]

Cannot wait to see the ANAL tag, because I'm SOOOOO looking forward to futa on male scenario... err, futa on sissy
If this is going to be a decently lengthy game, I hope that the sissification is a slow yet coerced/forced scenario <3

I am watching this with BATED breath

 

[mide]

waaaait... who the fuck am i playing, i started as leo and somehow switched to alex, and what the hell happened to julia.

 

[Aulo Vibenna]

I have absolutely no clue what I've just seen right now but a couple of girl one of which I suppose has a dick

 

[putzseila]

Somebody call the police this perverted woman is abusing an inflatable doll.
Anyway, good luck with the project and I wish you good luck.

 

[Aulo Vibenna]

Yeah, me too, good luck with the project

 

[KollegeX]

No offense intended.... but he has no idea what he is doing, his english is bad and he wants to create a visual novel. Sure, go for it, but perhaps at least try to come off as doing it because you want to and not release something in quite the bad state, but immediately have a patreon to milk people which is named "goldplox"..

I mean, maybe I will be proven wrong, but consider me sceptical

 

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