VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Two Weeks [Ep. 6 Fixed] [Madek]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

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    The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.1...

    It's an alright visual novel/game introduction... But of course it is primarily focused for the moment on the over used Family Sex stuff...

    The visuals of the characters are good... The back drops are a mix of unique and overly used backdrops we've all seen in other VN/Games before (such as the clothes shop)...

    The script is pretty good as I only saw a small few spelling/grammar errors... The plot revolves around a male protagonist who hasn't seen his mother and sister in 2 years, and is visiting them for a couple weeks... There are a lot of cliché game play mechanics in this introduction, that we've seen dozens of times already in the introductions of other erotic/adult VN/Games... It's almost like there is a standardized list of events that must always be included in most introductions of this genre... Such as a peeping scene at home, then a trip to the overly used clothing shop (with more peeping), then the son/mother watching a movie on the couch scene, the sister with lots of attitude, and so on...

    Who really knows, as the story may go off in all kinds of other directions... But too many of these types of introductions, always seem to follow this strict formula, as though it's the only way to get some initial traction and bring in some fans quickly... It's a boring and repeating series of events, that shows a lack of creativity and/or original thinking on the part of the author/s...

    During the lead in, it doesn't show the protagonists name as chosen by the player/reader, but instead shows the default name, so that may need fixing...

    Overall, the characters are alright, and the story is alright as well... But there isn't much originality in this introduction beyond some of the backstory elements... I know this is very early into development, so who knows what directions it will actually go... Hopefully not all the same things that have already been done to death in other similar VN/Games... I'll most likely revisit this VN/Game to see if it improves at all, some time later into it's development...