VN - Ren'Py - UFO [Ch.3 v0.6.7] [17MOONKEYS]

Superb debut. The models are fantastic, the writing is on the money, the enivornments beautiful and interesting, the premise and kinks are perfect. Gracefully slides into my top 5 games based on the basic content available at this early stage.

Hope to see Aisha retain her inner conflict for as long as possible, definately don't want to see her reduced to a sub, she's too regal and pretty for that. Let the flower blossom!

There's a constant slow burn tension in the writing, the camera angles are great too.

Difficult to think of any criticisms. Wouldn't mind X-ray internals, and perhaps the sound effects could be bumped up - voices perhaps?

Loved every second. A truimph!

I really liked the game! Sci-Fi is such a great genre and I am looking forward to more. The caring mother trope is really hot. In addition to the hormone induction, do i really like the setup. I would love to see some Alien races to interact with and some body customizability/changes with the on board sex robots would be great! Please continue with this

Horrible. Forced futa content, no sense of artistic direction. gross scenes with main character eating his own cum. Game is a waste of time. dude should have just focused on knocking up layla and ended this game a long time ago. it isn't even a game bc there are no choices

[v0.3.3 Ch. 2]

very good game, I'm in love with Aisha. She has a realistic thicc model. not a perfect plastic round ass, not a flat belly, it's more like real life in that way, it feels fresh to see that type of body and ethnicity. I think you've ring the bell in that regard, at least for me. the story and the world is interesting, but it's still too early to talk about it, the game is new and hasn't had many updates. Even so, I think he has a very good future ahead of him.
I'm curious to see if it's planned to have animations, maybe it's a good addition, but nevertheless, if it's never added, it's not gonna be an issue cause the renders are that well made. Good luck dev, keep the good work, i loved the game.

This is like a 3.5 star for me, but I'm rounding up because its a story I haven't seen exactly before.

The premise is: Aliens visited earth in the year 202X. They abducted a male (you) and a female (dark skinned thicc woman) and put them in cryostorage. These humans would turn out to stay in cryostorage for over 1000 years due to unplanned events. During this time, humanity created advanced semi-synthetic robotics, producing simulated humanity in the form of robots ranging from those with more utilitarian purposes to straight up sex bots. A trio of two sex bots and one utility bot would happen across the abandoned UFO that abducted you and your female companion, releasing you from cryostorage. After being released, you soon find out that sexuality plays a key part in the modern world, but there are immanent risks to your existence that you must address.

It's a fun story that I'm looking forward to. I really only have two complaints, one that is an opinion and the other that will work itself out in time:

• Opinion: Why isn't the female the MC's step mom? I understand the Dev has reservations with incest, but is step-cest off the table too? It seems like such an obvious write-in... 99% of the dialog could stay the same as well, and this is how the story should look: Your dad recently married this exotic woman down on her luck and looking for a better way or something, she faked liking your dad but couldn't bother to fake liking you... you two get abducted shortly after she joins your family, she hates it/you, has moral/religious conflict due to sexitimes, but you twist her into your breeding bitch over the story... So obvious, so good, just free taboo waiting to be tapped... Honestly could be better than actual incest. But no. It's just some random woman... Literally ANYTHING would be better than her just being a random woman lol.
• What will work itself out in time: the amount of content. There's nothing worth fapping to in the game yet, to put it frankly. The story is quite early-on, and unclear as to how it will develop.
• The game really needs audio, I'm so tired of mute games.
• It's all still images, animations would have been nice but if the dev can make the dialog and images in the sex scenes very rewarding, it can work... remains to be seen.

Edit: Wish I could delete my review lol, but I can't so... just pulling down to 3 stars. I don't really care for futa and totally was not expecting it to be added. Haven't played the update that added it and don't plan to. If a mod wants to delete this I'm cool with that.

First of all: I love this game. The story is like a sexual dream come true (for me) and the models are fitting perfectly to it. Sex dolls should be looking unrealistic in a sexual manner, and the game dev does a great job here. Also, the mom character Aisha absolutely got me - bushy and filled with pleasure through drugs is just awesome. She definitely should get the main focus for the boy. He should make her pregnant more than once (pls) and if she is pregnant, he (of course) should try the other entry, too. I hope she fails to lose her weight - the boy should convince her, that she just looks perfect and bring her enough clothes, that she doesn't matter anymore.

Pros:

• models and renders are amazing, esp. Aisha (don't change, keep them busty and curvy)
• setting and story is simply good so far
• music and sex sounds (pls more!)

criticism:

• no animations
• cum shots (should be animated too, buts it's early)
• linear story with no changing choices
• no help from the dolls (sex dolls but no sex?)

Normally I would give this game a clear 5 star, but without animations it's a 4. If this changes I'll upgrade my voting for sure. Can't wait to see the next chapter!! Request: Pls make an Aisha-Banner. Thanks!

I just found this game a few days ago.

After reading a few reviews apparently people hate it and have been waiting for content for a long while. Maybe the game gad a recent overhaul kuz I really enjoyed it.

From what I can gather, the story is about a young-looking guy who was abducted by aliens over 1000yrs ago. Sex Dolls then find the derelict space ship finding him and an Arabic milf in cryostasis. Their ship is damaged and they need MC's help getting a spare engine part.

In chapters one, you get an introduction to the characters and an explanation of what the Sex Dolls are, and how Humanity has gone extinct. Seems like MC and Asha are the last 2 humans (I hope they get to repopulate! Kuz I find Asha super sexy. She CHONKY!)

Anywho, great intro to the 3 ship girls (Blonde Milf, Arabic Milk Mommy, and busty sister type)
I like that the game isn't super serious about its world building, it's very relaxed.
Mc is pretty generic, but imo it's not that big a deal. I mean you come out of Cryosleep after being found by genetically engineered Sex Dolls named Pamela and Barbie ...

Looking forward to Ep2, the plot is kicking up and a routine mission to fix the spaceship is anything but.

Def worth looking into. Busty girls, an understandable plot that isn't very heavy handed. And an intro to a Sex Doll filled space romp.

I don't understand the 1 star reviews ...

Based on V0.3.3



If you're going for an adult VN (Or in this case, a KN because no choices are available yet) your initial offering REALLY needs to wow your audience with one of the following:

Amazing visuals (To have something pretty to look at while fastclicking through the text).

A genuinely gripping story so that the audience really cares what happens to the people & the world they inhabit

Superb smut so that the audience can get their jollies regardless of the quality of the character models and writing.


UFO, unfortunately, fails to make a splash in any of those categories. It does nothing horribly wrong but as of V0.3.3 also does nothing -right- in such a way that makes it stand out from the hundreds of similar style games on this site.


This game does itself no favor by having very little content at all, as it offers, if you're generous or a very slow reader, a 15min demo in which nothing really happens. You get few pseudo-sex scenes, some uninspired loredumps and a story that has a lot of words but actually says very little.

As stated above, your demo NEEDS to wow your (potential) audience so that they stick around for your next updates, eager for more.

UFO unfortunately fails to decisively deliver at any of the earlier-mentioned points.

The character models aren't bad looking, but they're about as cookie-cutter as they go. So, there really isn't any spectacular eyecandy strutting around to keep my attention.

Storywise its premise is a smidge more interesting than the default generic current-day cookie-cutter seduction romp, but the story is 0% show, 100% tell. And what it tells isn't good.

Here I can pick out some actual things that made me cringe hard and lose interest.

MC is abducted by aliens. Aliens are given ONE line explaining they're now dead when the ship is boarded by the dolls. They're a literal plot vehicle to get the MC onto the ship then immediately get tossed into the nearest dumpster to make room for the main cast.

MC has ZERO lines of dialogue in which he is affected by either being a thousand years in the future or being told he's the last man alive. He's either brainwashed, brain-damaged, a cocktail of so many "-paths" that would make even social dumpsterfires like myself raise serious alarms, or possibly repressing so hard he's going to break apart in the next version.

MC just does things, never reflects on his actions, no motivations beyond "I want to do X because I want to." and fails to meaningfully interact with -anyone- at all. It's honestly really creepy and reinforces the idea that there's something genuinely WRONG with the MC's mental health.
If that's actually where the author wants to go though, then kudo's to them, but I haven't gotten the feeling anywhere else that this might turn dystopian horror in the next scene.

Smut-wise there's barely anything there. A smidgen of teasing and some boobs and you've honestly had it all.

There's zero gameplay, the only choice you're given is which name your character has. It's a Kinetic Novel that doesn't tell a good story.

All in all, I would rate it a 2.5/5, rounded down because there simply isn't much to judge yet either way. But on the whole this isn't really worth spending the 15min of clicking through yet. Too little happens, and what little does happen isn't memorable in a good or bad way.

It's a "kinetic novel", basically a visual novel but without any actual player interaction.
A "book" with more pictures, an "e-graphic novel", whatever. That's not really a bad thing, but I figure I should warn you that you have absolutely no control over anything and you will be forced into content you like AND dislike, whether you want to or not.

As for the actual plot you're a guy that looks like a kid who gets abducted by aliens who freeze you and you (and a woman) end up being rescued by a bunch of Daz3D bimbo sex-doll androids flying in a literal Star Trek ship a thousand years later. You have sex, get introduced to everyone, have sex, get introduced to the ship, and told to run an errand and the game ends for now.

The content mainly consists of... mostly just talking and looking at things, and a few awkward lewd scenes between you and the other rescued woman who's basically your adoptive mom.

Realtalk I'm dinging the score a little because the "intro" to the story is long-winded, and because there's no way to skip or talk your way out of scenes you're not interested in, forcing you into the main character's likes and dislikes, rather than your own, which isn't so bad so far, but becomes a bigger problem in the future unless you've got a wide range of interests and few dislikes/turnoffs, especially considering the lengthy list of content the dev is planning.

Anyway, I'm rambling. Go check out one of the earlier posts in the thread that covers all the things planned for the story and make a decision based on that.

I just started playing the game in this version (V0.3.3) I really like the theme of shota and milf/bimbo/bbw so for me that's a plus. The world and environment setting is great, the models are beautiful and although some are "recycled" they are somehow enhanced and are of the most popular so another plus for that. The game is just in the second chapter and has an incredible amount of potential not only about sex, world and story wise but I'm a little afraid of the "kinetic novel" and some kinks and tags that I don't like at all so one of my recommendations for the author is to let us choose what sex scenes we want to watch and I don't know about future plans from the game but the first episode let me with a taste of a potencial sandbox game and my last recommendation that's linked with the kinks and tags is that you could let us build the personality of the MC even if are those choices that are good/evil, yes/no or something like that.
I wish you good luck to 17MOONKEYS in this project and I must congratulate you for what've you done so far, I'll be watching this game and as the game progress I'm gonna update my review.

So amazing game! the story and the characters are so hot, it has a really amazing 3d models and I get engaged with the game argument! I really love this game! If you want to play a spacial adventure with hot milfs you could give it a try!

I know the story of this game sounds silly and even i doubted the game would be any good But i enjoyed it little bit short And would love to see a gallery
Renders are really good
I love the story and the big titty aliens
I'm really looking forward to updates and the story
no bugs

A good start with some significant Pros and Cons.

The Good:
- It's a fun and campy concept that isn't worn out.
- Renders are good, very few images I thought could be better.
- Music matches the campy atmosphere/story.
- Grammer isn't bad. Could be better.

The Bad:
- Very short.
- Characters aren't really developed.
- Story needs developing.

The Ugly:
- Transitions. Needed.

The game seems true to the dev's intent. Not my genre of VN but I actually enjoyed this one so kudos to the dev. If I can enjoy an off genre VN then you are doing something right. Keep up the good work.

I absolutely love this VN. It is fun, and a bit quirky, and the premise seems fresh and fun to me. The MC looks like a kid but it seems he is going to grow a bit thanks to his rescuers. Pamela is surface of the sun hot, as is Aisha (hey, I like full figured babes), and Barbie is rockin as well. Loved it so much I am supporting the dev on Patreon. Really looking forward to see where this gem goes! Heartiest congrats to the dev, and my highest recommendation as well.

Rev 0.3.1a
I actually stopped what I was playing through to check this out. I appreciated that the dev put in an earnest request for honest feedback, so thought I would see what this one is all about.


The Good:

• BREAST EXPANSION!! (or so I'm given to believe)
• The female models are hot. Smokin' hot. All 3 of 'em.
  • The breasts are more than ample/large. I also love this. The girls don't look "bimbo-y", either.
• This story doesn't take itself too seriously, neither should you.
• LOVE the MC's relationship with Aisha as the first night rolls on.

The Bad:

• Dev needs to auto-transition between scenes. I'mma say this until all devs do it, because going from one VN to another and getting used to having to/not having to manually transition is cumbersome. Just make it a standard as a dev. Especially if there are any black frames between transitions.
• Kinda weird that the opening scene is a dude in his PJs sitting criss-cross on his lawn with a stuffed animal, presumably meditating. No one does that.
• Pamela has a surprisingly small ass, considering her overall voluptuous figure.
• Minor issues with the English grammar. Nothing some solid proofreading wouldn't fix.
• Dev needs to create more images and create animations. This game shows SERIOUS promise if they do; robes coming undone from one frame to the next with no hands moving, etc.

The Weird:

• I would assume that - if Pamela and others aboard the rescue ship - are "aliens", they would likely have distinct speech patterns
• Really hoping "President Eva Rump" isn't a loose reference to one "Trump" family. That would be disappointing.

Bottom line: if you want substantive, meaningful storytelling - this ain't the sex doll you're looking for. If you want a light-hearted, somewhat cheesy, very predictable VN with a lot of fantasy and to satsify your inner 14-year-old...ye shall have it.

Man I had absolute fun playing it till 0.3.1b (Shame on you DEV for blueballing us). Its got a totally new vibe, really good renders, BUT DIALOGUE DELIVERY can be further improved.
Take you time and make the game, DON'T RUSH and spoil it bud.
and Thanks for the game

Hey lack of content and a little missing character development (like why did Aisha lose the hijab) get it a four star but that can easily change once more content comes out, and best of wishes to your future endeavors and updates stay safe man thanks for the time and effort that went into this.

I really like this a lot but I do think the dialogue is pretty mediocre. The premise is excellent but the dialogue just seems like it could be a lot better/more immersive/hot for the premise. Kinda like how there's "bad pornos" with super fake dialogue, this game has pretty mediocre dialogue like a lot of other games. I really wish I could at least customize the dialogue myself to improve it just for myself but it seems like it's one of those games that locks the dialogue somewhere. The visuals/renders/designs are all really quite good. The scene ideas/premise/story/pacing/personalities are all good or very good. It's just how it's executed in dialogue that's kinda meh. Like an example of this is I love the premise of the sex dolls finding the MC and also that one of them is an earlier model but I feel like they just talk like any other generic female character in an erotic game. I feel like it's a missed opportunity to have more of the sex doll/robot fetish especially with the earlier model because it could've been like "since she's an earlier model, they didn't fine tune the natural feel of her dialogue" kind of thing. There's also a lot of little things in the dialogue that I think could be improved for the end result too.

Render quality is top notch. Skin shaders and character head & body morphs are very high quality. These are attractive women in both face and body, that is hard to pull off in 3D. I hate 99% of 3D porn, but that 1%, if done right, can lead to some nice erotica.

Story is interesting and somewhat fresh. You've got to re-populate humanity, and you got these busty women around, hmm.

Music is good.

It's definitely worth downloading and trying, especially to check out the high quality renders.

Looking good for now. Still in very early stages, it looks like the dev has a vision and I like that vision. Models are nice. Story is on point, as in it makes sense if you allow yourself to fall for it. I don't consume audio while playing so I can't comment on that.