VN - Ren'Py - UFO [Ch.3 v0.6.7] [17MOONKEYS]

Reviewing v0.3.1b(i will update it in the future, if i remember to do so XD)

The Good

- The general graphic of the game: It's good-looking and personally, aside a few nitpicks there is nothing to say, it's good.

The Annoying

- (Nitpicky) The actual renders of characters: Pamela and Barbie are similar and that ticks me off a little: Both blondies, with pink lips, huge breasts, very...bimbo-like(which is not my thing) their main differences are their names and their actual body size. Aisha is good-looking, i like her...but i chuckled at MC saying "She is so naturally beautiful"(but unless she developed genetically in those two weeks, she has eye-shadows, red lipstick and possible makeup..Does Quran allow makeup and that kind of stuff? I recall to be insane on women showing herself...not mentioning the region where the Quran's "rules" are even harsher).
- (Nitpicky) The premise of the plot...i mean MC wakes up, get told that he will do a mission soon...and then what? The game is short so far(first releases, i understand ^^) but i expected that Pamela would at least say what the crew plans to do once MC did the mission with Alfred...even a single mention, i mean we have this guy waking up, with a Muslim human woman, mankind is extinct, i'm wild-guessing that they will try to repopulate? But meanwhile? what they(i mean the whole crew) will do? Try to go back to Earth? And that's it?Despite 1000 years are passed and there is only one town habited by sex-dolls and aliens?I feel like the group didn't plan ahead(which for MC and Aisha makes sense, but Pamela, Barbie and Alfred??)

The Bad

- Nothing really, like i said i have nitpicky issue but they go in the "The Annoying" section, the bad is for things that i believe need an asap change(like major bugs, game-breaking mechanics or big noticeable plotholes)


Conclusion: I'm posting the review because the dev stated that he/she needs feedbacks, and i'm giving it hoping for the best. The game is right in the middle between "a bad game" and a “good game”. It's started good, but the amount of content is very little, even for a third release(if it's a third release XD, the changelog said that it's not a first release, so i'm guessing there was a v0.2 and that the dev didn't jump to v0.3 directly XD). In the end, i'm hopeful for this game: although it's not a game that i would usually play, it's intriguing in its own way and got me curious, that's good ^^.

1° PS: My nitpicky issues...shouldn't be counted because mostly involve my personal tastes, you can read them, acknowledge them, but they aren't urgent things. The game is small so far, and i basically wrote them because i didn't have any other issues about the game itself nor the dev.

2° PS: I want to give a negative point not to the game, but to a particular group of users who commented in the game's thread: We have screenshots of the game, we have infos about the game itself, and you still have the nerve to complain about stuff for nearly no reasons but personal taste. While a part of me agrees with you, i must be honest with myself and everyone: I downloaded the game and tried it, meaning that i can't throw tantrums about personal dislikes, i saw what this game's deal is and still went for it. What i mean? If you saw the screenshots, and the texts about what the game is about...why are you whining? You don't like a game for personal reasons? Why bother commenting and spitting some vitriol on the dev and HIS CREATION? If you have nothing rational and critical to say...why just don't comment at all?

V028.8b

I wanted to wait for more content to evaluate this project which today demonstrates good potential, but I decided to evaluate it now because this dev for his enthusiasm and commitment demonstrated during these four months from the release are remarkable, especially for the desire to interact with everyone at the in order to improve and meet expectations as much as possible.
That said, I reserve the right to review the game when the time comes.
I know you can do it ... good luck.

Dear 17 Monkeys, you want an honest feedback, here it is. Idk when the last time was i liked an initial release that much..
Visuals: The visuals are absolutely fine as they are. No need to improve on them .
Sound: Not a lot but exactly where they were needed.
Models: All three of them have their unique appeal and are enticing.
Since this far we only know Aisha a bit better... Great Idea to make her muslim, not in an derogatory way but just as a little detail that give the character more depth. Having said that, did I mention that she is gorgeous ! She is.
Dialog / Story: So far I love the premise. I loved the scene "its the 31st Century, which added next to the otherwise tense situation of beeing 1000 out of your timeline and afraif some light hearted fun.
Since Aisha is special.. like last human woman, i would clearly go a sort of love route with her. Not that she should only have sex with the mc, after all they have to save the human race. Somehow she is already corrupted though the drug but thats not an obstacle as of beeing still on love terms.
That leads us to impregnation which is for the story basically already set.
How about a twist ? Since we are in the 31st century... Technology has improved and pregnance only last 3 months or so. Also technology improves growing speed of children. So that children can be able to reproduce within a year or so. Dont make it a week because you want to have a deep parentlike relationship too it. Have you notist that the door to incest opened itself ?!
Last recomendation. There is no need to introduce too many sexpartner/ charackters. Give us the time to get to know the ones we have better. Trough the journeys I am sure there will be enough new charackters introduced...
You are on a very very good start !
PS: It s the first time I am writing so much.. but you asked for it

15 minutes of content.
Milf character is very sexy and their scenes are really hot.
Music is nice and the intro story is nice.
Wishing there was more content.

I'll edit the review once the game has more content.

This is honest feedback for developer .
Please give us VN and Big Tits Milf , Don't give Sandbox and Loli to us .
Visuals and game experience are important , The story doesn't matter .
The key to many good games is Good Fuck and Good Tits .

I came back a year after the story started to add my review .
In the first two chapters it is clear that the author does not know exactly what he wants to do with his work, and the narrative is confused .
Now the quality of the fourth chapter has been significantly improved, the relationship between the characters is clear, and the selling point is very good. Milfs of various identities are available. Obviously, the author has determined the direction of the work .
From four stars when it was first created to five stars now .

Version: 0.28.8b

Simple erotic VN but not much to offer right now

PROS

• Attractive models with some varied bodacious body sizes
• Simple but effective sex plot unfolding

CONS

• only one erotic scene right now
• the male human could use more facial expressions
• same generic bg music playing, displaces the mood
• a few translation/vocabulary errors

I would advice the dev to take his time and add at least 30 min of content before releasing an update. And some subtle sex sfx could be added.
I like what has happened so far and like where it is going. Looking forward to more

Finally a different story line, something that actually is creative, and seems to be going someplace with the next update. Graphics are great, and well rendered. The spaceship itself is actually kind of an interesting area too.

Heard you wanted some honest feedback and will do my best to give it.

Love the title screen music. It really does feel alien yet still welcoming. A good balance with the suburbs combined with the alien ship. Sure, some people might be turned off by the humming sound in the song but I enjoyed it.

Did enjoy Alfred being the guy to give us boring exposition about what is going in. This is not an insult, most porn games do not give even half as good explanation on how things work.

Did find the dialogue for the characters to be a little choppy. As you said in your comment, your first language is not English. So am lenient on the slightly broken English in the game.

Though did find the part where pirates were able to completely control the home planet of the sex dolls, who despite having sex dolls, have better technology than the aliens that abducted you. Also, maybe ease the MC into the situation. Maybe something as simple as seeing something broken on the wall and fixing it before going full ‘save the galaxy.’

Also found it hard to follow how the ship the sex dolls pilot at the beginning that has a damaged engine, can be fixed up and already on its way to the sex doll home world in such a short time.

Love the part where Aisha and the MC both go through transformations with Aisha producing milk in her nipples and the MC having a much bigger member and getting buff. Also, did enjoy how the MC was super hungry. After a thousand years in cryo sleep that milk from Aisha must have been like nectar from the gods.

I was tempted to change my review to four star, good, but the game is just too early in development.

4 Stars
reason why not 5 the game just started with so little to offer for a game this early 4 star is great and a bit over rating imho but i gave it 4 stars for :

1: Potential it had huge potential if done right with the way the Dev made the story < will talk about my thought at the end
2: models all available models 3 so far are great hot and well made Pam is my fav a milf with that body and ass what not to like
3: Dev is listening and answering to ppl in here which is very positive

if u looking for fast and easy way to get where the game is right now its worth looking into for sure but not worth goin for if u looking to enjoy or fap ( ATM )

a personal thoughts
its hinted in the game by MC " oh so i can make them mine " that he will be able to have control over them which is great since they are sex dolls by hacking them or manipulate the codes or something which is great opens so many doors and possibilities also with the bubble planet we can expect this game to have many or unlimited amount of girls in the game thats with the fact that this game in space which opens the doors of aliens and other creatures as well which like i said opens so many doors and possibilities ...

ofc cant say the game missing that or this atm since it still pretty much have nothing but naming the MC for start will be great and the game need more lots more content and fetishes
the game can be great thats for sure and the way the Def is going with it is so promising and assuring .
wish u the best Dev and keep up the great work
and thank you reader for ur time reading my thoughts

( updating the rating to 5 stars this game will for sure shine and the Dev truly doing an insane work wish u the best and keep up the insane work )