- Thread starter CarbyneX
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I'm trying, it seems that the one who uploads the games uploaded them corrupted for some reason, because I did tests on different PCs and the file works for me.
Mamuh
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Alright, let me or us know when its fixed
Can't wait to test your game out.
asdfqwert_789
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KyoriKusagami
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I used Patreon's link, and it works well for me.
Feedback:
1 - The character designs are okay, but you should be cautious about the renders because some images appear overly stretched (like the bald guy for example). The city background was merely a blur and didn't visually appeal to me.
2 - I can't say anything about the story because it's just an introduction. However, I liked the narrative style.
3 - The animation needs A LOT of work. The hospital H-scene begs for a remake.
In resume, the visual novel is promising but for now, it's like a rough diamond that requires a lot of polish.
Feedback:
1 - The character designs are okay, but you should be cautious about the renders because some images appear overly stretched (like the bald guy for example). The city background was merely a blur and didn't visually appeal to me.
2 - I can't say anything about the story because it's just an introduction. However, I liked the narrative style.
3 - The animation needs A LOT of work. The hospital H-scene begs for a remake.
In resume, the visual novel is promising but for now, it's like a rough diamond that requires a lot of polish.
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Thank you very much, I'm going to polish those details, I really appreciate your comment ❤
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I'm sending the link to the one who uploads them to fix it, the patreon one works and it's the same one I sent to him, which means that somehow he uploaded it wrong
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Ntr between the mc and his friends' girlfriends
RodneyMcKey
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Make a game with sick ai art without NTR: mission impossible.
Not complaining about this game but why almost every single one of them is ntr.
Not complaining about this game but why almost every single one of them is ntr.
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Personally I have been helping with the development of several games and it is a fashionable topic, I like NTR personally, thanks for the comment anyway ❤
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Now it should work, Thanks for wait✌Alright, let me or us know when its fixed
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Sharing the girls is the key!
Mamuh
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So i was taking a look into your game. Models, fashion sense is really good. I know its just a demo introduction and not a start of everything. Sound is also fine, except the punching one . I hope you take your time with writing because that is also one of the most important thing for immersion. You do should watch out for grammar errors and don't be shy to create meaningful sentences.
-More immersion via text
-Fixing grammar
-Polishing the background pictures (also some of the models, like their lulu's were gone :'D) and watch out for finger errors xD
-Tweak on some sounds
All in all, potential is there. For me personally i would change the MC more into a badass guy, would fit better with the attention he got from all the gooorls. (also appearance wise). But it's your game in the end so you decide what suits you the best. Good luck!
. I hope you take your time with writing because that is also one of the most important thing for immersion. You do should watch out for grammar errors and don't be shy to create meaningful sentences.-More immersion via text
-Fixing grammar
-Polishing the background pictures (also some of the models, like their lulu's were gone :'D) and watch out for finger errors xD
-Tweak on some sounds
All in all, potential is there. For me personally i would change the MC more into a badass guy, would fit better with the attention he got from all the gooorls. (also appearance wise). But it's your game in the end so you decide what suits you the best. Good luck!
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I love your comment, but yes. I'll have it pending, I hope you take a look at the next version! ❤❤✌So i was taking a look into your game. Models, fashion sense is really good. I know its just a demo introduction and not a start of everything. Sound is also fine, except the punching one
-More immersion via text
-Fixing grammar
-Polishing the background pictures (also some of the models, like their lulu's were gone :'D) and watch out for finger errors xD
-Tweak on some sounds
All in all, potential is there. For me personally i would change the MC more into a badass guy, would fit better with the attention he got from all the gooorls. (also appearance wise). But it's your game in the end so you decide what suits you the best. Good luck!
