Played to end of version, pretty damn good.
+ Love the models. Well, not so sure of the emaciated Joker dude who was trying to rape Debra.
+ Good dialog and like.
+- Waiting to find out who/what is this disembodied voice that woke him up.
- The placement of models in some images has much to be desired. For instance, the MC's childhood friend was hovering a couple of inches off of the couch when the MC was giving her a foot massage.
- It is quite obvious when characters are placed on prerendered images. MC's wife when first seen leaving no shadow and appearing to hover just above the bed.
- Some backdrops are poorly rendered, the office building behind Unknown and Man when Unknown recognizes the MC. Grainy and appearing to be a 2D image even though recessed windows and air conditioners.
- Early morning but the two women who live with Debra are dressed if they are ready to go clubbing?
There are a couple of other items, though this will do.
Like I said, outstanding model choices.