Just a quick FYI, an area of land with a high density of trees is called a forest, with one R, but you've written it with two Rs for the entire intro and possibly more.
Also, the new map looks nice, but there are a few spots you can escape it, such as if you move to the right from this position.
edit: also, Chara's dark level 3 scene has the protagonist still on the vine for the entire time. He should probably move up a bit further, to the top of the cliff. I'm still replaying the game but I'll update this post with new bugs if I find more.